FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 25

As I had promised I am posting the part related to their past today. But when I finished writing it I realised that it was too long...almost 13 pages in microsoft word...!!
and it would actually become taxing to read this part at one go and I really don't want you people to rush through it just to read it full...so I am posting it in two parts...!!
please read it slowly !!
another apprehension I had was whether I was able to explain their relationship clearly or confused it completely !! I had several thoughts streaming my mind regarding it !!
please feel free to share your views...

Story so far -- please read page 28 for story so far.
Part 8 -- Shaan and Khanak were accidentally locked up in the washroom and though they enjoyed being together, they did not show it ! Zarine watches them together when they are very close...it makes Khanak very happy and amuses Shaan.




I am taking down the part --
Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊

Hey mani.... 🤗

This was the wowest n awesomest update....... (Just watched jhalak so remembered this line) Anyways just ignore that line....... Now coming back to your update...... Do i have to say anything? Like always it was mind blowing....... It was really funny........ I just loved shaan's 3 conditions......... And khanak's answers to them........ I loved the answer which khanak gave for the 3rd quest........ My answer also would have been the same..... And i liked the way t described every situation i could actually imagine them so nicely....... Zarine opend the door...... Wow i just loved that part...... And now the serious part..... The mysterious holi....... At last the mystery is going to be out today....... Cant wait to knw Wat happened on holi....... I better not guess anything....... Wat if i guess the right thing??? Poore suspense ka majja kirkira ho jayega...... Waiting fop ur update.......🤗
p.s. Hey my name spells Roshni......
p.p.s. U cn update frnds forever at ur leisure sweety..... N al d best 4 ur cuming exams.....😃😃

Ok this is the 3rd time Im trying to edit this post....... I wrote so much twice and its nt getting posted only...... Anyways I'll appreciate ur work in detail later with tonight's episode....... Now in short let me tell u it was really nice....... Beautifully written....... Khanak o jai's fight reminded me of mine n my brother's fight....... It was really nice...... In detail I'll tell later.......

Wow !!! Awesome part !!

I so need to catch up on your FF's Manita!Will do one day!Just read the last part and its great!

hi manita............

i jus hve 1 thng 2 say "perfect & d best update" n pls do post tonite only n i vl send u a pm for sure ven i update d next part f my ff n pls send me a pm also ven u update ur ff if possible

@ Roshni......lol...I just read that my update and your comment to previous update came together.🤗......thanks honey !!!

waiting for your comments for this part !!

@ Vandu.....your comments cracked me up !!! 🤣esp. Kya Shaan ne bhaang pi rakhi thi......omg....ROFLLL...🤣......
and yes.....spoiling the moment is important so that when it actually happens, it is special😉............

@ smitha ........thanks rey.....do it whenever you have time !!

@ angel_9.......thanks dear........and I'll wait for your comments !!

@ shiksha.....thanks sweetie......I don't pm anyone, I am so lazy........and I feel what if ppl don't like me sending them pm's........
but personally I appreciate them.....otherwise I miss updates !!

love you guys.........

Hey Manita di!!!

wow what an update! No wonder these two have such a strange relationship, this explains a lot already, anyways I was listening to Hum Tum songs while reading this. great job as always Manita!