FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 11

HI SIMRA! 😊 NICE STORY! keep goin! 😉 IF is simply a fabulous place, so many different stories by all the talented ppl! M LUVIN IT! 😆

Originally posted by: tes_v1

HI SIMRA! 😊 NICE STORY! keep goin! 😉 IF is simply a fabulous place, so many different stories by all the talented ppl! M LUVIN IT! 😆

Hi!!! Thanks for reading and for ur sweet comments!!! I'm glad you like it!!!! yes If is a fabulous place indeed!!! mostly because of the amazing ppl u get to meet like u!!! 😃

Hey Guys,

I am so sorrry but I wont be able to update until monday. I know I promised that I would on Sunday but things have come up. Sorry! I'll still try to update it today if I can....

Okay I didn't have much time so I wrote up a little bit. Sorry it's so short! There are still of a lot of surprises to come for Rani from Yudi but I could only write so much today!If I wrote more you would have had to wait until later this week so I thought I would post a little bit at least! As you all know good things come to those who wait. 😉 I hope you like it and plz plz plz let me know what you think!! Oh and sorry if there are any typos.

Part 9

Yudi let Rani back to their cottage and as she reached for the door he pulled her hand away from it pushing the door open himself. He then lifted her up in his arms and walked in kicking the door shut behind them. Rani looked around to see the entire floor of the living room covered in rose petal and every surface covered in candles that lit the room up with a soft glowing light.

Yudi walked over to the couch and gently laid Rani on it. He sat next to her watching the candlelight flicker over her face and reached out to gently trace the patterns across her face. Rani's eyes fluttered shut and she sighed contently. Her whole body relaxed into the couch. Yudi just stared at her marveling at her innocence his fingers stopped moving as well and Rani opened her eyes to see him staring her. Suddenly feeling self conscious she sat up and pulled her legs up resting her chin on her knees and folding her arms around them. Yudi moved closer to her and lifted her chin up and said, "Yaad hai, aap ne hum se kaha tha kay agar hum Raj aur Sadhnaji ke saat chalein gay to aap humari koi sib hi baat manaingi?" Rani just nodded. "Hume ne aapke liye kuch kapded kharide hain. Aap pehnaingi?" Rani wondered what he had bought for her but she also knew he wouldn't have gotten her anything she would be uncomfortable with so she agreed. Yudi led her to their room and pushed the door open. Rani walked in to see a lengha choli covered in gold embroidery lying on the bed with matching jewelry next to it. It was something a bride would wear. The top was orange yellow with embroidery covering it and would leave her stomach exposed. The skirt was red and cut in the mermaid style with the same embroidery covering it and the bottom lined in the same orange yellow as the stop. Rani looked at it feeling shy about wearing something that would expose her in such a way but looking back to see Yudi staring at her waiting for her reaction she made up her mind to wear it knowing he would be the only one to see her in it. She could see the apprehension in his face and knew she couldn't disappoint him. She smiled at him and a smile crossed Yudi's face making Rani's smile grow bigger. She was glad to see the happiness on his face. Yudi then pointed to the living room gesturing that he would wait for her there.

Rani moved to the bed putting on the clothes. They fit her perfectly and made her feel like a true princess. It was as if at that moment she felt like she truly was one and not just a maid that was trying to become one. She looked into the mirror and smiled. She put on her earrings, necklace and nose pin feeling like a bride once again. She pulled on her bangles blushing as she remembered the gentle way Yudi had put them on her hands just that morning. Her day had been filled with such joy and she prayed that it would stay that way forever. She got up and picked up her dupatta and went to place it so that it would cover her completely and then stopping herself folded it and just draped it on her arms across her back exposing her stomach. She felt bolder than she ever had and just the thought of going out in front of her Kuwarji like that had her face turning a permanent shade of red but she gathered up her courage remembering that she was going in front of her husband and not some stranger. She reached for her sindoor but instead of putting it on she just held the little container in her hand and taking in a deep breath she walked out the door of their bedroom and into the living room.

Yudi had been walking around the living room ever since he had left Rani in their room. He was surprised that she had agreed to put on the clothes. He knew that they were a bit revealing for her but he had hoped that she would put them for his sake and she had. Just that thought made the smile on his face grow larger. Since then he had been making sure that everything in the room was perfect. He had rolled up his sleeves and unbuttoned the first few buttons of his shirt to decease his nervousness. He was worried that Rani wouldn't like what he had done for her. He wondered what was taking her so long but told himself to be patient and continued looking around checking things over once again laughing at his own behaviour. He knew he was acting like a teenager going on his first date which was ridiculous because he was a married man. He then marveled at the fact that he was finally married to Rani, his first and only love. He had been ecstatic when his father had finally agreed to Rani and his marriage. He leaned against the wall across from the door that separated him from Rani leaning his head back and folding his arms as he remembered their wedding. He remembered sneaking looks at her during their haldi rasam only to see her looking at him as well, watching her walk down the steps towards him for her mahiray ki rasam, her lowered eyes as she came to sit next to him in the mandir, her face as he filled her maang with sindoor, her smile as her tied the mangal sutra around her neck, the softness of her hand as he tried to find his name, the way she had pulled her hand away from him in the basin of milk as they tried to find the ring and the moments just flew through his mind from that moment onwards and he was so lost he didn't even hear the door open. He was too busy marveling at the beautiful moments he had spent with Rani so far and the ones that were to come.

Rani walked out of the room with her eyes lowered refusing to look up. However after standing there for a few moments and not hearing any reaction she looked up to see Yudi standing across from her leaning against the wall with his eyes closed and her breath caught. However it wasn't the slight bit of bare skin she could see peeking out at the top of his shirt because he had unbuttoned it or the strong muscles of his arms that he had exposed by rolling up his sleeves that caused her breath to catch. It was the look on his face of pure contentment and joy. She wished she could capture the moment and wondered what he could possibly be thinking about that had caused such an expression to cross his face. She didn't want to disturb him but knew that if she didn't she would lose her courage and so she called out to him gently trying not to shock him too much and lowering her eyes.

Yudi was pulled out of his thoughts when he heard Rani's voice calling out to him. He opened his eyes to see her standing a little ways away from him with her eyes looking down away from him. He was glad that he had been leaning against the wall because the sight that she made knocked the breath from his chest and made him feel like his bones were made of jelly. He looked her over starting from her head down breathing in sharply when his eyes fell upon the bare skin on her stomach. He noticed the way she was tightly grasping her skirt tightly and pulled himself together and started walking towards her his heart beating quickly. He stopped in front of her and reached out to touch her.

that is just awesome. beutifully written. wow rani is short clothes amazing. 👏👏

noo, what a place to stop😳 it was excllent. can't wait to read the next part.

Simra, Beautiful, amazing and very romantic.......Loved it.... You should have written this part for their real honeymoon.....It is beautifully written and the feelings were very real.

simra..................that's really breath taking...........and you refresh our memory too with those wonderful moment of weddings................really i want to see something like this yaar koi samjaao creative ko ki yudi kuchh to gift kare rani ko .......yaar

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