FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd

Hey so I have never done this before but this was spinning around in my head and I thought I would post it. I have read so many FFs so I am sorry if this seems to be like any of the others, I didn't mean to do it PROMISE...Tell me what you all think, I am not the greatest author but yeah, I'll stop rambling now...
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Continues from where the last episode left off with YuRa being interrupted by the children.

Rani with her eyes lowered started moving away from Yudi and out of the water only to feel a tug on her pallu. She looked back to see him staring at her mischievously and moving closer once again. She put a hand on his chest blushing and said, "Kuwarji, bache dekh rahe hain aap hame jane dijiye."

In response he bent over and picked her up without saying a word and started walking out of the water. Rani blushing could not meet his gaze because looking at his eyes and the love in them gave her a tingling feeling in her stomach that she didn't understand but knew that he was the only one that could cause it. She broke out of these thoughts when she felt herself being put down and was shocked to see that they were back at the car. Yudi went to the trunk and got her a towel and slowly started to dry her off starting by gently patting her face and hair dry and moving lower. Rani embarrassed stopped his hand as he reached the base of her neck and shly said, "Kuwarji, aap ko sardi lag jai gi, aap apni aap ko ponch li jiye, hum theek hain."

Yudi just looked at her with that mischievous look and held out the towel to her saying, "Hum sahi say apne aap ko nahin ponch payainge. Aap hi kar dijiye." Rani just looked at him in shock and said, "Nahin kuwarji, aap khudh kar li jiye, hum se nahin hoga." She then turned away. He came up behind her and put his arms around her and whispered, "theek hai, to aap chahti hain ke hum aise hi gile rahen aur hume thand lag jai. Aap ki marzi." Hearing this Rani turned around in his arms and said "Aisa mat kahiye, hum aisa kabhi nahin cha hinge ke aap to koi takleef hoye! Hume dijye, hum pani ponch dete hain." She took the towel from his hand and started wiping away the water from his face and looking away when she saw the same look he gave her in the water before that caused those unusual but amazing feelings in her. She moved the towel down his neck to his chest and started wiping away the water blushing the whole time.

Yudi looked down at her and felt blessed that he had found such an amazing woman as his life partner, someone who understood him, who was so pure and kind, someone who he knew that he could die for and best of all someone who loved him just as much as he loved her. Looking at the gentle way she was taking care of him and how she would do anything for him, no matter how embarrassing or out of character it was for her. All of a sudden he had the urge to tell her how much he loved her because he didn't think she knew to what extent he loved her. He gently lifted her face up and looked into her eyes and said, "Rani, hum jaanthe hain ke aap humse kitna pyaar karti hain laikin shayad aap yeh nahin janti hain ke hum aapse kitna pyaar karte hain. Hum aap ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain, chahe hume apni jaan bhi dene parde, kyunke hum to woh aap ke liye khushi say deyden gai. " Suddenly Rani placed her hand on his lips stopping him from saying anything further.

Rani looked at him with tears in her eyes and said, "Aap ko kya lagta hai ke hum yeh nahin jaante? Laikin aisa kabhi mat kahiye ga ke aap hamare liye jaan bhi de sakte hain kyunke phir hum kya karenge! Aap ko kya lagta hai ke hum aapke bina jee paiyen gai?" Yudi saw the tears and wanted to make her smile so he quickly decided to pull her closer and said, "Theek hai, hum aisa nahin kahengay lakin aap hume aik baat bataiye." Rani shocked at his sudden change in mood and struggling to move away said, "Kuwarji, hum beech road pay khare huwe hain, please hume choriye phir hum aapko jawab de dainge."

Yudi just smiled and said, "Kyun taake aap phir se koi bahana banake hum say dur bhag jai jaisa aapne humari talwar bazi ke baad kiya tha." Rani just looked away refusing to meet him eyes. Yudi then said, "Theek hai hum aapko chor deinge lakin batahiye ke aap kya humare liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain."

Rani just nodded, so he said "To phir aap kya humare gal ko choom sakti hain. Aap yeh karingi to phir hum aap ko chor dengay." Rani blushed and looked away saying, "yeh, yeh aap kaise baatein kar rahe hain kuwarji. Hum aisa nahin karenge! Aap hume chor dijiye." Yudi started laughing and said, "Jaiye lakin aap par yeh udhar raha." Rani ran to the trunk of the car to get dry clothes and peeked at Yudi only to see him standing there staring at her, she quickly looked back into the trunk and pretended to look for clothes again. Yudi just smiled and thanked god for giving him such an amazing person as a life partner.

Hi Simra,

Wow Simra, loved your scene. I would love to see this scene happening for real. Yudi teasing Rani to kiss her and Rani blushiing, how wonderful it would be to see on screen😳. I also loved the way you linked that sword scene with the current one. Hope creatives get the point that we love to see one scene linked with another, specially the way you have done it.

that was really very romantic to the core....simra very good scene by you..as kirti said she is still shivering i am also feeling butterflies and that is also many many....inmy stomach .......and really wish creatives show something like this while continueing their scene

Simra. Wow. I am feeling those butterflies, your writing is sending shivers through me too. 😳 😳

Very well written, like Anvi said I loved the way you pulled the past into the present too, gives it continuity. I especially loved this:

Looking at the gentle way she was taking care of him and how she would do anything for him, no matter how embarrassing or out of character it was for her.

Simply superb, looking forward to more from you. Now I need to go and buy a thesaurus to find new words of praise.

awwwww!!! that was sooo cuteee!!! pls do continue! and thank you for that cuteee read :)

Originally posted by: jibi

Hi Simra,

While reading this wonderful piece i had a sensation throughout. 😳😳 Still i am shivering. And i am not lying. Such a simple but such an effective scene. Simply great. 😊😛

Looking forward to more such scenes. 😃

Hi Jibi! 😳 Thank you! ur very sweet! I wrote the scene after coming back from watching twilight because I was floating w/ happiness, I dont know if i'll be able to again but I'll try!

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

Wow Simra, loved your scene. I would love to see this scene happening for real. Yudi teasing Rani to kiss her and Rani blushiing, how wonderful it would be to see on screen😳. I also loved the way you linked that sword scene with the current one. Hope creatives get the point that we love to see one scene linked with another, specially the way you have done it.

My absolutely favorite part is:

Yudi looked down at her and felt blessed that he had found such an amazing woman as his life partner, someone who understood him, who was so pure and kind, someone who he knew that he could die for and best of all someone who loved him just as much as he loved her.

Keep up the good work, and Simra, I look forward to reading many more YuRa scenes from you, if only time permits you to write more. 😊👏

Thank you! I am glad you liked it enough to have a fav. part! I'll do my best to write more if I can. If he actually asks her to kiss him on the show, I might faint....seriously!

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Simra. Wow. I am feeling those butterflies, your writing is sending shivers through me too. 😳 😳

Very well written, like Anvi said I loved the way you pulled the past into the present too, gives it continuity. I especially loved this:

Looking at the gentle way she was taking care of him and how she would do anything for him, no matter how embarrassing or out of character it was for her.

Simply superb, looking forward to more from you. Now I need to go and buy a thesaurus to find new words of praise.

Thank you!! and you don't need new words, the ones you have are just fine!! 😃

Originally posted by: bsingapury

that was really very romantic to the core....simra very good scene by you..as kirti said she is still shivering i am also feeling butterflies and that is also many many....inmy stomach .......and really wish creatives show something like this while continueing their scene

wish they dont deprive us showing directly yura inhotel i will hate that

but while reading you scene i could actually feel that happening on screen.........and felt like i am reqading update of wonderful epi..........think all girls will be again having meeting inheaven if creative will show at least little bit from your scene

keep it up and i am very happy in our forum we have such a lovely and talented people..............

Thank you! This is my first time writing such romance or writing period I guess. I am glad you liked it so much! and after reading ur FF, you liking mine so much is a real compliment! The fact that you could see it happening is great. If this actually happened like I said to Parikhanvi, I might faint... 😳

Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

awwwww!!! that was sooo cuteee!!! pls do continue! and thank you for that cuteee read :)

Than you!! I will do my best to continue!

Damn it!

Originally posted by: rakhie

Damn it!

Not another amazing writer on IF! I am running out of ways to praise people.

These two weeks have been fantastic from a readers point of view. First Tashmin, then Anu, then Beena, followed by Anvi, and now Simra!!

Simra, my dear I have run out of words, so lets just work with icons..

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Originally posted by: rakhie

Damn it!

Not another amazing writer on IF! I am running out of ways to praise people.

These two weeks have been fantastic from a readers point of view. First Tashmin, then Anu, then Beena, followed by Anvi, and now Simra!!

Simra, my dear I have run out of words, so lets just work with icons..

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lol....thank you! I shall respond using icons! ☺️

Originally posted by: jazzybabes7

hahaha

i totally agree!!! ive run outa words......i think MINDBLOWING is apt

simra that was really gd.. plellase update soon!!!

and rakhiiieeee u need to think of new words(providing I do as well!!! which i hope i shall!!!).....coz im planning to update my FF soon!!!!!! hehehe and what about u and ur magic moments!!!! xxxxxxx

Thanks Jaz! 😳 I'll do my best to update, I wasn't planning on adding anything but u all seem to want me to 😕 LOL I cant wait for ur update!!! I am glad u liked mine!