FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 9

First of all thank you all soooo much for liking it and commenting...

Originally posted by: julielaldin

Love it, love it, love it ...... it is just amazing ..... 👏👏👏cant wait for the next part!!!

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😳Thanks for the teen taliyan 😃 I'll try to update soon! I am happy u loved it so much!

Originally posted by: jazzybabes7

simra

bahut....bahut BAHUT achcha part! Thanks Jazz!!! I love the Karisma impression!! 😆

lol :P

after reading my ff u rote such nice comments.. ur FF is amazing and u deserve all those comments

so its only right i return the compliment Thanks!!

u sure desrve it! awww 😳

what a CUTE SWEET ADORABLY ROMANTIC scene! I try to put what I would like to see...hehe...☺️

loveddd it! I am happy u loved it!

cnt wait for next part... I'll do my best to update soon!

Originally posted by: sharan99

Simra,

Just amazing....don't even have words to descride it....loved it...eagerly waiting to see what Yudi is upto👏

Thank you!!! 😳 I'll do my best to update soon. As for what Yudi will do...u'll see...I hope u like it...

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

😉😉 Bold Rani, Actually kissed Yudi's forehead........I am liking this.......😆😆😆

Yeh Yudi aur Rani to mujhe bahut ache lage...........😳😳😳 Romance is in the air.........Keep it coming.....don't make us wait too long like RKAB............😍

I tried to make her more bold as their marriage progresses and they become more comfortable with each other like a couple would in real life. I really like the way the kiss part turned out...Thanks for liking my version of YuRa...yes romance is def. in the air...I'll try to update soon.

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

"Waisay bhi aapko to lagta hai kirne ki aadat ho gai hai." 😆 😆 It's true!!! LOL

Short but filled with romance, loved it Simra. Glad you liked it! Now I am wondering what Yudi has planned..You'll have to wait and see...I don't even know yet...🤣 I have a small idea but I tend to change things as I write...but whatever happens I hope u like it...

And I love this somewhat bolder Rani who was comfortable enough to kiss Yudi. No matter how small the action, it probably spoke volumes to him. Yes it def. spoke volumes to him! I want to see Rani progess and become bolder because I feel that you should be that comfortable with the person ur going to spend the rest of ur life with...

Originally posted by: jyk88

u know as I write these scenes I dont know what I'm thinking because I have no experience with romance...so I just write what I would want to happen with my life...😳

Seriously Simra, you should really think about going professional and publishing this (and send it to a certain group of people, they are in desperate need of this). That is a HUGE compliment...ur soooo sweet...I don't think it's that great ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ but THANK YOU!!! (yes a certain group may be in need of this...)

What can I say? The whole thing was so beautiful but above are just some of my favourite scenes...and my reactions to them. Can't wait to find out what Yudi's planned but I know we're in for a treat...so don't make me wait too long! I am glad u liked the scenes so much!! as for Yudi's plan...like I said above...I have a small idea of what is going to happen but I dont really know myself...😆...Things seem to change as I write😕...with u all looking forward to it...i just hope it lives up to expectations...

Originally posted by: bsingapury

at last simra i read both last part and yaar love it thanks BeenaDi...i meant to dedicate it to u for ur bday but forgot when I was posting because it was a little late...sorry...but here is ur BDAY present...😳

i really loved your rani kyaa baat hain romance jaanti hain aur pati ki baat bhi maanti hain ..hahhha I know right?! I refused to make my Rani unromantic and one that doesn't follow her husband...

and too much romance excellent dear and very true rani ko ghirne ki aadat ho chuki hain lekin jab thaam ne waale yudi ke majboot haath ho to kaun nahi ghirnaa chaahegaa........... Glad u liked the romance...I never thought I would be writing romance to be quite honest...and as for the ghirne ki baat...woh to sach hai..agar mere pass bhi aise masboot haath hote to main bhi har roz girte...😆😳

wow now me also want to know what yudi has planned Oh the pressure😆...I hope u all will like what I plan to write....

hurry up we are waiting will do my best!!!

Originally posted by: sapna99

absolutely brilliant piece of writing you should be the creative of RKAB this show will be number one for sure! wonderful dying to read the next part! Thanks!!! I wish I was a creative the way this show is going and as for it being number one...I dont think I'm that good but ur so sweet! I'll try to post up the next part soon...plz dont die waiting!! 😳
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amazing! 👏👏👏 Thanks!!! ⭐️

thanks simra i love this birthday gift dear now in return gift i have to write my FF part thank you very much

Originally posted by: bsingapury

thanks simra i love this birthday gift dear now in return gift i have to write my FF part thank you very much

ur very welcome!!! u don't have to write an update as a return gift!!! but I do want to see what happens next in ur FF 😳 😳

"u know as I write these scenes I dont know what I'm thinking because I have no experience with romance...so I just write what I would want to happen with my life...😳"
Oye hoye!

Originally posted by: jyk88

"u know as I write these scenes I dont know what I'm thinking because I have no experience with romance...so I just write what I would want to happen with my life...😳"
Oye hoye!

And no pressure on the next part, we know it's gonna be better than this one and this one's already fab!

😳😳 I knew that would come back to bite me...😆

and as for the next part...reading all ur comments got me really into it and I started writing it up!!! It should be up in a couple of days or who knows...even tmr...it all depends on my mood!!! and thanks for the belief in me that it will be better!!! 😳

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Okay so I clearly love u all too much...😆😆 Honeslty all ur comments were so sweet and I was watching this show and all of a sudden inspiration hit so I decided to write this up. I really hope it lives up to ur expectations...and also that you like it...It's a bit heavy on the romance but yeah...😳 Enjoy and please please comment!!! Btw this is only part of Yudi's surprise...I had to keep some of it a secret to ensure u all would come back...😕 oh and plz ignore typos...i wrote this in a hurry...

Part 8

Yudi pulled his hand away from his forehead realizing that he had been staring after Rani with a huge smile on his face even though she had already disappeared into the washroom. He didn't know what had brought on the kiss but he wasn't complaining. In the gentle press of her lips he was able to feel all of the love that she felt for him. Over the past few days he had seen sides on Rani that he had never seen before and he appreciated and loved her more each day. He got out of bed and looked down to see his rumpled clothes. He knew Rani would be gone for a few minutes so he decided to change. He pulled on his clothes and was about to reach out to pull on his shirt when he heard the washroom door open. He looked up to see Rani staring at him as a light blush started to form across her cheeks. He smirked at her causing her to look away. He just laughed and pulled on his shirt looking down as he started to button it and half way through was surprised to see Rani's hands push his away as she buttoned the rest up with her fingers brushing against his skin as she did so. He pulled his hands away and rested them on her hips pulling her closer pulling her closer with each button she closed until she was up against him. Soon he had her in a tight hold against him. She tucked her head under his chin. Yudi just kissed her forehead gently as she breathed in his scent. It was as if time had frozen and all was forgotten until they heard a knock on the door. They slowly pulled away from each other and Yudi gently brushed her cheek with his fingertips before walking out to the door. Rani just stared after him in a daze which she was pulled out of when she heard him talking to someone. She quickly walked over to the dressing table to brush her hair and touch up her makeup before walking out of the bedroom to see Yudi walking towards her. He gently grasped her hand and said, "Chalien?"

"Ji Kuwarji, laikin darwaze pay kaun tha?"

Yudi just shook his head saying, "Manager tha Rani. Ab chaliye."

Rani just nodded and they both walked out. Rani assumed that they would be walking to the car but Yudi took her in the opposite direction just telling her to wait when she asked where they were going. She followed as he kept a hold of her hand taking her away from the cottages and she looked around at the beautiful scenery surrounding her taking it all in. Finally they came to a stop in front of some steps. Rani looked up to see a beautiful dome like the ones sitting on the palaces of Rajhistan held up by beautiful columns and her breath caught. Yudi led Rani up the steps and tears came to her eyes as looked at a table set up with candles surrounding them and the table in front of her. She turned to Yudi only to see him staring at her. He slowly reached out to wipe her tears shaking his head and silently telling her not to cry. She closed her eyes in acceptance and reached out with her own hand placing it against his cheek smiling at him. He closed his eyes and leaned his face against her hand, his own coming up and holding hers. He pulled it to his lips brushing her knuckles with them and pulled her to the table that was placed low on the ground surrounded by cushions covered in dark red and gold cloth. He pulled her down with him and started to uncover the food. He silenced her protest with a look that caused Rani to flush and look down shyly. She wondered what she had done to deserve such a loving husband.

She was pulled out of her thoughts when she heard him call her name softly. He turned towards her and tore off some roti and dipping it into the curry and held it up to her lips. Rani grasped his hand gently and took the food he offered. She let go of his hand and did the same for him blushing as he gently nipped her fingers with his teeth but didn't look away. Rani and Yudi fed each other until the food was gone.

Yudi wrapped his arms around Rani as a gentle breeze blew gently stirring Rani's hair and caused her to shiver. He covered them with a shawl and they lay there staring at sky. Rani had her head on his chest as he stroked her hair. Rani's eyes fluttered shut at the soothing sensation.

"Rani?"

"Hmm?"

Yudi let out a small laugh at her response saying, "Rani, aap to humare bare mein sab kuch jaanti hain laikin hum to aapke bara mein to sirf thodi si baatien jaante hain. Aap hume apne bachpan ke bare mein baathiye na?"

Rani just moved closer to him and felt him tighten his arm around her.

"Kuwarji, hum chote the jab humare bapuji guzar gai lakin amma ne kabhi hume un ki kami nahin mehsoos nahin hone di. Laikin hum jaante the kai woh dukho thi to hum koshish karte the ke hum jo bhi kar sakte the un ki zindagi aasan karne ke liye woh hum karte the. Humare baapuji ki khoiish thi kay hum pardhe likhe bane isliye hum hamesha pure maan se pardhte the. Laikin humare bachpan ke sab se khushi ke pal woh the jo humne Munna ki saath bitai. Woh sharat karta tha aur hum oose amma aur dadi se bachane ki koshish karte rehte the. Aik dafa to Munna..."

Rani continued talking about her childhood as Yudi stared down at her face watching it light up as she talked about her brother and his adventures. He could see how much she loved her family and knew that she would love their children even more. He could see the future clearly in her eyes and while she continued to talk gently placed his lips against hers lightly and pulled back to see her looking at him in surprise. He traced her face with his fingertips watching her eyes flutter shut and her head fall back. He dropped gentle kisses across her face and said, "Rani, hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hain." His voice coming out in a husky tone that sent shivers down Rani's back. She opened her eyes and looking into his said, "Hum bhi aapse bohot pyaar karte hain, Kuwarji." Then, Rani in a bold move, that surprised her and Yudi, without thinking leaned forward and brushed her lips against his and realizing what she had done pulled away quickly and pushed him away as got up and started to walk away only to feel a tug on her pallu. She held on to it as she looked back to see Yudi staring at her with an intense look in her eyes that caused her to flush but she was unable to look away. He slowly stood up and walked towards her. She turned away from him staring out into the darkness as he wrapped his arms around her from behind. She refused to look at him still shocked at her bold behaviour.

Yudi was also surprised by her actions but the feelings that she had conveyed in that gentle brush of her lips against his had caused a tightening in his chest as he realized how much he loved her and depended on her. Her presence was like a drug, when she wasn't around he felt like all his happiness had been taken away and that the world was black and white and filled with sadness. He wondered how he had lived for so long without her. He wished that they could remain the way they were but he had plans that he wanted to complete and so he forced himself to pull away from her and said, "Rani, ab hume chalna chahiye."

Rani who was still looking away shyly nodded and grasped the hand he held out to her. He helped her down the stairs and let go of her hand to wrap an arm around her waist with his hand resting on the bare skin left uncovered by her blouse and sari. He held her against his side as they walked back to their cottage with his thumb stroking her bare skin of waist lightly sending shivers down her spine. Yudi looked down at her face that showed contentment and wondered whether she would like the surprise he had for her.

Very nice....now waiting for next part.

Just what we needed. Rani's participation.😳😳..... 👏👏👏 This is too good.......don't make us wait for the surprise. 😍😍

Originally posted by: sakuraa

O He could ask her to follow him to hell and she would as long as they would be together. For her, living without him was now impossible and she realized that if he wasn't with her she would not be able to survive because without him life would lose its colour and become black and white. She looked back at him lying on the bed and walked back. She lovingly pressed her lips against his forehead kissing him and walking away as he opened his eyes in shock and stared at her his hand reaching up to touch his forehead.

Wow, Simra, your part 7 is just too good. Yudi being naughty, Rani taking a small initiative, this is exactly what I want to see.

Now even I am waiting to see what surprise Yudi has in store for Rani. I am sure I am going to love it. 😊

Oh and I just saw that you have posted part 8 also. Wow what a treat, me loving it.

Oh I am loving your FF! I am loving Yudi, but more importantly I am loving this bold Rani of yours!! Way to go girl!