FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 12

Originally posted by: ramas

that is just awesome. beutifully written. Thanks Di! wow rani is short clothes amazing. hehe I wanted her to be a lil bold!👏👏

So rani is changing for yudi now.😃 Compromise is important! I think neways...LOL...not that I would know 😆

Originally posted by: rani101

noo, what a place to stop😳 Sorry!! 😆 Limited time but the next part will be up soon hopefully! it was excllent. Thanks! can't wait to read the next part.

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Simra, Beautiful, amazing and very romantic.......Loved it.... Thanks!You should have written this part for their real honeymoon I wish that I could have!! I think neone could have done better than the creatives! But u can pretend like my version happened! 😉!.....It is beautifully written and the feelings were very real. I tried, and I am glad it came through that way!

I liked the way you tied the marriage ceremony to RKAB with the haldi ceremony, wedding celebration and resams afterwards.....You're really good with your writing skills. Thanks Hun! 😳😳

Please post the next part soon.... you are right it was short but very good....👏👏👏I'll do my best to ASAP!

Waiting for the next episode......😍

Originally posted by: sharan99

Simra...beautiful and amazing Thanks Hun!!....but yeh dil maage more I'll try to update soon!!...so can we have the next part soon...can't have enough...so romantic with such pure emotions.....just mindblowing n fanstastic!!!!😍👏.......pls pls pls update soon..Glad u liked it and will do my best!😳😳😳

Originally posted by: bsingapury

simra..................that's really breath taking Thanks Di! ...........and you refresh our memory too with those wonderful moment of weddings I tried! I figure everyone reflects on the parts of their marriage after...well actually I wouldnt know but lets pretend that I'm right! 😆😆 ................really i want to see something like this yaar koi samjaao creative ko ki yudi kuchh to gift kare rani ko .......yaar In creatives ka kuch nahin hone wala! 😆😆 u know the whole laaton kay bhoot baton say nahin maan te!

excellent now hurry up we want to read more Will do my best to soon!............how rani will feel the touch and what would be yudi's reaction U'll have to wait and see!! ....it's wonderful simra Thank u!

you are very good writing romance.. believe it or not but I have no experience in this. I just write what comes to me.

Originally posted by: jyk88

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Still at loss for words. You have such a vision for pure romance, it's actually quite amazing. Thanks Hun!!

'...As you all know good things come to those who wait...' I will wait patiently then. But don't take that as a queue to make me wait a lifetime! I'll try not to make u wait!

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Simra...how do you do it? I have no idea!!! 😆

How do you deliver such beautiful romance each time? Whatever it is that's inspiring you, long may it continue 😉 I dont what inspries me because i have no experience...what I expect maybe...LMAO 😳

It's amazing. Loved the way you tied in the wedding. Can't wait to see the next part...Thanks!! and I'll try to update soon!

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Originally posted by: sapna99

Simra amazing! Thanks!! i read it at work on my IPod everyone was wondering why i was blushing and had a big smile across my face! HAHAHA🤣 That's so funny?! really?! 😳😳 I am flattered that u like it enough to read it at work on ur IPOD!! your a wonderful writer if only you were the creative at RKAB! Thank u and I wish!!! I think neone can do better than them at this point!!! I would sleep with many wounderful dreams! Glad I could provide u with such material! great work waiting for the next part! 👏 I'll try to update ASAP!

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

Oye Simra, just loved it. Thanks Hun! Simply superb and mindblowing. I'm glad u liked it!!! 😳😳 And the best part is that the next part is going to be even more exciting and romantic as you ended this part with Yudi seeing Rani in his gifted dress😊. I hope u all like the next part and that it lives up to expectations!! How is Yudi going to control himself seeing his divinely beautiful wife right in front of him in his gifted dress. U'll have to wait and seee 😉 Well does he need to control himself, lol 😉. Very true!!! but lets just say there are other surprises before he can lose control !!! 😉

But I am loving your Rani who is going out of her way to make her husband happy (in a good way). I figure it isn't happening in the show so I might as well do it here...LOL...She is trying her level best to overcome her inhibitions, all just for Yudi. How lovely. Glad u approve!!! 😃

Mindblowing part Simra. Thanks again!! Me so excited about the next part. Hopefully u like the next part just as much!!! When are you planning to post it? Hmmm well since I turned 21 maybe on the 21st LOL...actually I dont know...it all depends on when inspiration strikes but hopefully in the next few days! I hope soon...but no pressure ok. No worries hun! I know u all will wait! 😳 but thank you for the thought!! It's very sweet of u!

Happy Birthday Simra!!! 🥳THANK YOUUUUUUUUU!!!! I dont think I've ever had so many ppl wish me in one day!! 😃

Originally posted by: janu_2006

Hey

gr8 parts..

cont.sooon

Originally posted by: tes_v1

hey simra! simply an awsum piece... 👏 thanx.. 😊

Originally posted by: sakuraa

I just wanted to thank all of you for liking my story sooo much I had no idea that it would become so popular or that I could even write but guys truly make me feel great when i read ur comments...u guys are amazing and incredible sweet ppl!! I'll do my best to update soon!!