FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 10

Originally posted by: ixl105

Very nice....now waiting for next part.<br>

Thanks hun!!! u will have to wait a little for the next part but I am hoping by this weekend

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Just what we needed. Rani's participation.😳😳.....


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This is too good.......don't make us wait for the surprise. 😍😍

Loved the part....it was full of romance..... You should write professionally. You are good!!!!!

LOL...i liked her participation too!!

I'll try not to make you wait too much... hopefully by the end of this week as for writing professionally...I dont think I'm that go but thanks! ur very sweet!

Originally posted by: parikhanvi

<br><br>Wow, Simra, your part 7 is just too good. Yudi being naughty, Rani taking a small initiative, this is exactly what I want to see. <br><br>Now even I am waiting to see what surprise Yudi has in store for Rani. I am sure I am going to love it. 😊<br><br>Oh and I just saw that you have posted part 8 also. Wow what a treat, me loving it. <br><br><br><br><br>

Thanks Anvi! I missed ur comments... I'm glad it's what u wanted to see and as for what Yudi has in store...u'll just have to wait and see... :P yes go read part 8 and tell me what u thought!

Originally posted by: rakhie

Oh I am loving your FF! I am loving Yudi, but more importantly I am loving this bold Rani of yours!! Way to go girl!

Next part please 😃

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Thanks Rakhie...I love my YuRa too!!! :D I'll try to post the next part soon too!

whoaaaa!!!! that was AWESOME!!!! what bold moves!!!!

Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

whoaaaa!!!! that was AWESOME!!!! what bold moves!!!!

goood going! thanks for a great read!

THANKS!! 😆 Glad u liked the bold moves...and ur very welcome!

Originally posted by: sakuraa

THANKS!! 😆 Glad u liked the bold moves...and ur very welcome!

Hai...😍

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

We would like to see more bold moves by this weekend.... so get to work and post by this weekend... You have spoiled us with Yura moves that if we don't have our shot by the weekend we can't function.

Please don't delay🥱🥱

I will do my best to deliver... 😃 I wouldn't want you all to lose function!!! That's just wrong!! I'll try my best not to delay!

Originally posted by: jyk88

Hai...😍

I feel words would not properly convey my feelings on this scene, well my words anyway, not such a brill writer as you. So, I hope the above emoticon conveys all!

thanks for the compliment!! 😳 ur words are more than enough! and the emoticon conveys ur feelings perfectly! 😃

PREVIEW:

Yudi's surprise for Rani is revealed!

"Rani's eyes widened in shock as she stared ahead. The sight in front of mesmerized her. She reached out only to pull her hand back thinking it would disappear if she got closer."

Next part should be up this weekend!

Originally posted by: sakuraa

PREVIEW:

Yudi's surprise for Rani is revealed!

"Rani's eyes widened in shock as she stared ahead. The sight in front of mesmerized her. She reached out only to pull her hand back thinking it would disappear if she got closer."

Next part should be up this weekend!

Simra...I missed the last update..apologies...

A bold Rani...a shocked Yudi... a daydreaming Nisha. Just the way it should be.

And yet the suprise is to come 😃.. I will set a reminder to keep checking, I don't want to miss it.

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

😍😍😍

We need it for sure by Sunday....... Ok?

😆😆 Hopefully I can get it up by Sunday morning. Cool?
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Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Simra...I missed the last update..apologies...No worries!! I am glad you saw it!

A bold Rani...a shocked Yudi... a daydreaming Nisha. Just the way it should be. Glad you agree w/ my portrayal of them! 😃

And yet the suprise is to come 😃.. I will set a reminder to keep checking, I don't want to miss it. Yes it is coming soon!!! I hope u'll like it when it comes! I am flattered that you want to read it so much that u want to set a reminder...😳😳