AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#951

Originally posted by: heike
Hi daisy
I am new ... love your work

Have you written anything else.
can you please send the links

On page 125 there is no part 17
Kindly repost it

Thanks

YAYAYAY!! So happy that I got you to come out of your shell and leave a comment, your first post! Now I believe in the power of AsYa 😆! No unfortunately I haven't written anything else. This is my first and very beloved baby but fingers crossed it won't be my last. Hope you found part 17 on page 125 and enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy it!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#952

Originally posted by: --Mirage--
Great going...👍🏼

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Posted: 8 years ago

#953

Originally posted by: -jerry-

Yay! Glad you enjoyed it hopefully you will enjoy part 18 too!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: --Mirage--
This is one of my favourite part of this FF till now...
Asad became suspicious of Akram as he came to know about Zoya's disappearance
Akhram is really such a cheap..
How could he even be Asad's friend?
Zoya felt she had to fight her battle all alone like whole her life..except her prince is going to fight all her battles ffrom now on,, she even thought if she agreed then maybe she could reach her Jiju sooner who could protect her...
And then Asad came to rescue his damsel in distress..
Akram was so scared about him..He know the destruction he could cause
He surely did feel it would be better to be dead rather than facing the wrath of Asad Ahmed Khan..
But now no one can help him...
Loved how you explained Asad adoring her even in her unconscious state...
And then he asked his sister to treat her as he can't delay it any further..Its true that his life is also connected with her..
You beautifully penned down about the void he felt on being parting away from her...
He was totally guilty about his actions still demons of his past is haunting him...
Shireen and Maha...are the main cause for his judgement...
And Maha is Pari's mom...more intrigued to know about his past..
He is very much excited to meet Chutki but luck was never in his favour..
Loved how the innocent Pari asked him whether he liked the girl he was mean to and how he made her believe a girl and boy are only friends or enemies..
I am really loving Pari...
Asad did saw her 7 years back and is having dreams of her since then...Poor guy dont know he lost his mind to only one person..who came to his life few days back but into his dreams years back...
Everytime I read about the scenes between Zoya and Dilshad..how Zoya is in hunger for a mother's love, my eyes would tear up...I so love this bond between them..
Asad dropped her in his SPORTS CAR..!!n then at night he went to pick her up in his bike..
The sexual tension and attractions were all well penned..
She made up a lie to her brothers for Asad...n also him admiring a her even in her morning look was all so adorable.
I am really loving the bond between Farooqui siblings and finally Asad realised there is something deep and relaxed as she called Aahil bhai...
Then my favourite part at the Cafe..
Zoya really had guts to pull a prank on Asad and he let her...
And then when she gifted him the book and coffee...He did drink the sweet coffee not just for forgiveness but for her too..
And AAK was gifted the book "Ettiquetes & Manners for Dummies" 😆😆
And then finally he sincerely apologised and also gave her the kiss which he owe her😳

Loving the story..very muchh...❤️❤️..
GREAT JOB DEAR...👏

Going to read this chapter till you update next...

This is one of my most favourite parts too. Glad you enjoyed it. Hope you enjoy part 18 too! You will find out from Asad himself how such a cheap loser like Akram became his friend. Yes he knows and you will see too in part 18 that it would've been better for him to die than face Asad's wrath in 18. I really loved writing the scene of him adoring her even in her unconscious state. He can't help feel the void when parting from her and I can't help but write it too. Shireen and Maha have destroyed him and more of the past regarding Maha will come soon starting in part 18. I too LOVE Pari so writing her scenes is always a plus. Asad really has NO clue how far his love and connection to Zoya runs, boy is he in for a rude awakening and shock! Dilshad and Zoya is always lovely to write about! Glad you find the sexual tension and attraction well penned. Yes sister, only HER, he would only take out his sports car & then his BIKE for her. I always love writing the bonding between the Farooqui kids and since it's less than what it was earlier I always greedily await for opportunities to write about scenes on them. Asad will find out their bond in part 18. The Caf seems to be everyones favoruite scene including mine. Yes, she really does have some gut! Only she could pull such a thing. So Glad you are loving the story! Continue loving it. Remember to leave a nice comment for 18 too because I love reading them.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#955

Originally posted by: --Mirage--
Did I really wrote that comment??!!!UNBELIEVABLE!!
This is the longest comment I ever wrote...
Thanks to your amazing work...

Glad and thankful that it was my story that received such a long comment from you. Really humbled and appreciative. Continue enjoying and leaving such wonderful comments!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#956

Originally posted by: anuv6
U just made my day...WHAT A BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.
Thank u fr the long and so beautiful update dear.
god...really its freaking awesome, sooo damn gud dear.
when i finished reading of this update with the last line "he was falling, hopelessly for her", trust me i realized i'm crazy nd falling hopelessely for this story,
Each nd every line...mind blowing, fantabulous.
the emotions expressed through out the story, its like i'm can see nd feel the emotions
honestly i overwhelmed...no words to say,
bz i missed ASYA like Crazy nd this story is one of the story i have nd had alwys looking for, nd every time the update comes...its more than worth wait
i just want to say u r an amazing writer yaar, its from my heart. Trust me.
so coming to the update ,. i luvd ASYA parts, LUVD IT So so much. the longing, pain, loneliness of them, their attraction towards each other...so beautifully written. Marvellous
i laughed via the "sugar" barista parts...So funny
nd that bike riding...WOW
u reminded the QH 1 too,...beautiful parts
I really LUV the way of ur writing...intense nd cute ASYA parts., i cant ever forgt them,. EVER.like asad felt that zoya looks adorable when she is in her half sleeping state.
nd yess that scene is so adorable , when zoya scold everyone fr disturbng her sleep...its cute nd hilarious.
ayaan- aahil-zoya conv, bhai's concern towards their lil sis Zoya...cho chweet they are.nd asad finally relieved bt kind of confused at ayaan -zoya relation.
nd i thnk every one is realizing asad's care towards zoya as Mr. khan feelings are out of control day by day ;)
totally it is an outstanding , marvellous awesome amazing update which i couldnt get enough nd LUVD IT TO THE CORE.
Nw feeling so so exciting nd impatient too fr the nxt update...dreaming on of ASYA.
update sooonish as u can dear...waiting nd waiting .

Glad I could make your day, just like your guyzs comments make my day. 😳😳😳😳😳😳Really touched and humbled by your kind words. I too am helpless in my need to write this story so you must remain helpless in reading it. Glad my thoughts are being translated and you are able to enjoy it and see the emotions play out as I plan. I too always wanted such a story in fact this is what I wanted QH to be which is why I decided to take things in my own hand and write it myself. Guess it all worked out for the best. The sugar barista parts were a pleasure to write so glad you enjoyed them and I was able to do it justice. I miss QH SO MUCH! I enjoyed writing that scene of Zoya scolding everyone for ruining her sleep a LOT so glad you enjoyed too. Yes a lot of people..especially Ayaan, Malik and DIlshad are catching on as Mr. Khan's feelings really are spiralling out of control..18 coming soon..hope you enjoy it! Don't forget to leave a comment!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: fatima30
Well today I finally have some time to type a comment!

I read every single one of your updates and smile laugh and cry with the characters! It is simply amazing and written beautifully. ...
I would like to thank you wholeheartedly for writing this wonderful story...I love the lengthy updates and I look forward
to each and every one of them...

I'm loving the tension between Asya now...and wow that kiss on her hand...was so sweet and cute

Looking forward to the next update! 😃

NGL I'm probably more excited you had free time than you are after reading your comment. Hope you continue having more free time so that you can continue leaving such wonderful comments that I love reading so much. Glad that my efforts are being translated successfully enough that you are able to laugh and cry with the characters and feel the feelings I try to portray. I am so thankful to you for reading this story and thank you for loving it. You are most welcome for the story and the lengthy updates I try my best and am happy that you find I am able to do it justice and it turns out to be successful. I am LOVING writing the tension between AsYa too so more of that coming soon, hope you continue loving it. 18 is coming soon so I hope you enjoy it. Please try and leave comments on the coming part to, I love reading them.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#958

Originally posted by: piyalijpr
Awesome update 😊

😛! Thank You!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#959

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

unres

finally read it

firstly really sorry mujhse long comment nahi likhe jate ( or u cn say i cn't describe my thought/views in words )

But again words can not describe my feelings for this worder full update ( whole story )

so coming to update ..

love ever bit of it ( i luv asya parts the most ) their nok jhok ,..fir wo gift n wo kiss hayee ...

he is falling for her .. ( i knw same with her also )

ab to next prt ka bhi w8 ni hota continue soon,,( i pls asya prt jayada rakhna mujhe bake log pasand nahi hai .)

THE PICS U POSTED ON LAST IS BEAUTIFULL . ( or zoya he dress toh ,,,AAK ne use lacture nahi dia asie dress dekh kr worndering )

plsss update soon

or ha mere chote chore comment se he kaam chalna padega

Something is better than nothing so I am very thankful for this too! Just keep commenting, anything at all but something..I love reading your thoughts. So glad you are loving the story and enjoying it! Glad you are enjoying AsYa and everything that comes with them. Yes he is TOTALLY falling for her and he does NOT know it. AAK lecture toh tab deta na jab who usko dekhn band kare and stops falling for her, uske khayalon se nikle toh daante ga na. But party abhi shuru hui hai, who is to say ke abhi woh usse lecture nahin dega. Happy you liked the pictures too. 18 is coming soon, looking forward to reading more of your comments soon too.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#960

Originally posted by: anuv6
is there teaser ?? if there, then i missed.
Where is it ??
did i really missed??
here i'm going mad by thnkng wat'll happen nxt, !!!!
U'll not delay the update with the teaser, na !!
dont do that na,...
waiting very eager fr the nxt update...update soon dear

No there was no teaser..don't worry you didn't miss anything.