AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 95

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: addicted_93

Cliff hanger 😲 😲

Argh. I hope Zoya is safe and Asad comes back to his senses. He really needs to start listening to his girl!
I like how you've justified Asads reaction to Zoya running away from the wedding as compared to the show. I always found it strange that Asad would be so persistent on Zoya meeting Akram and giving him an explanation when he was only Asads employee.

The part with the homeless at KM were lovely! Reading the contrast between the Khans and royals was amazing. I guess you need to understand the value of money to be able to do something so selfless as compared to going shopping to Dubai in a private jet for an engagement. Starting to really dislike the Haveli people. They're supposed to be the ones helping instead of watching the idiot box like the idiots they are. They definitely categorise as some of the most selfish and thick headed people in Kasauli.

Personally, my favourite parts are when Zoya gives her cute dua to Asad and when Ayaan is mad at Asad about the magazine picture. Can't wait to see Asads reaction when he knows what their relationship is in actual terms 😆
Even loved the cafe scene that you mentioned in the precap

Loved the scene where Dilshad is frantically searching for Asad too. I think 'N' is Ayaan or Jay. Cause the one azlan confronted is definitely Asad.

Even Zoya standing up to those goons was fabulous. Loving Zoya and Maliks bond. I think it's going to get even more adorable in the future. I feel like he's one of those cool and loving uncles she needs and deserves.

Waiting for the climax of the Akram fiasco. Hope Dilshad, Anwar, Ayaan and Zeenat go easy on Asad post that. I might be mad at Jahapana six packs but he's my favourite man in the whole world 😆

Eagerly waiting for your update!


Glad you enjoyed! I know he really needs to get his head straight..but don't worry alls well that ends well and it ended okay for the most part..her knight saved her and SOON let's hope he starts listening to her so such unfortunate circumstances can be avoided! Yes I just couldn't bring myself to use the reasoning from the show it was like you said so...W*F? 😕! IT HAD to be more justified and here it kinda was because Akram is his childhood friend and so Asad did not want to see him get hurt. I loved writing the part of the homeless at KM it made me fall in love with Asad even more! Exactly, you said it sis! That's the difference between the heartless creatures and AsYa. Yet, our beloved Ghaffur arrives to take credit for Asads goodheartedness. Oh no, trust me they are THE most thickheaded and worst people in Kasauli as you will see later on. Aww, the dua part brought a smile on my face the entire time I was writing it. I love writing Ayaans overprotectiveness towards Zoya and love for Asad simultaneously...that conflict of his is going to get even more adorable and amusing later on when things worse than magazine pictures come out. It was suppose to be in 17 par ab 18 mein to definitely the relationship secret will be out for the most part. 😆😆 I really loved writing the caf scene so I'm glad you enjoyed it too! I also really loved writing the Dilshad searching for Asad part so I'm happy it translated well and you enjoyed it. Let's see who "N" is. He is the new secret since the secret of "S" will be completely out in 18. You are definitely right about Malik and Zoya they are going to have an adorable bond down the road. Akram Fiasco will reach the climax in 18.. It's not done in 17, and not just her brothers but her Jeeju Anwar is not very pleased about her injuries and like Malik he too is looking at Asad skeptically but don't worry just like you and like me Jahanpanah is his favourite person in the whole world and so he'll HAVE to go easy on him! Hope you read 17 and enjoyed it, I missed your comment ! 18 coming soon Hope you enjoy that too!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
You stopped it in suspense.
Hope zoya will be fine.
Asad in anger, hurt her again without getting any explanation. He should be thankful to her as she saved his both sisters & I hope he will do when he get to know abt that. Asad Ayaan talk was nice. He was shocked & worried after Ayaan told him abt girl. If it's akram doing then he will be in trouble now. Waiting for an update soon. Thanks for pm


Yay, Glad you liked it! Zoya's prince charmings there..not to worry everything will be okay 😆! Don't worry he's going to find out about her saving both his sisters soon and he will regret it. Akram is in MAJOR trouble as you will see in part 18 which I hope you will enjoy!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Mind blowing part

Asad and zoya both are angels and so sweetly helping others
Omg that fight is very ugly
Zoya's gesture of help is amazing
Asad's decision for helping needy by staying in mansion that's so sweet
Zoya's Masti with kids lovely
Omg so that's how asad find zoya snoring
Asya fight in cafe thsts always my favourite and asad made zoya speechless that's amazing
Two literally behave worse than kids
Omg zoya's stunt to save that girl and making police realise mistake I loved it
Well really there is no fear when Malik uncle is present
Malik taunting azlan I loved it
Omg the big blast by asad and finally asya fight regarding akram fiasco
But you gave us really cliffy end and I also want asad to know soon about ayaan and zoya relation
Very eager for next part
Plzzz update soon
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next


Yup! AsYa are both ANGELS which nice people like you can see but idiots in Kasauli like many of their family members and citizens can't which is why they are unfortunate enough to be so distant from such angels. Only Asad can find her snoring adorable too 😆. Their caf fight is one of my all time favs too, and yes they are definitely worse than kids 😆! I too loved her stunt, hence why I wrote it 😉 and yes never fear when Malik Uncle is near (so cheesy but true 😛). Malik taunting Azlan is always a pleasure. Asad will definilty know Ayaan and Zoyas relation in 18, coming soon. So I hope you enjoy it. Glad you are enjoying so far!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Wow superb update yr ..n ya sorry fr late comment

Really love all asya moments...
With QH scene I really feel like watching my fav show again
Ab toh cn't w8 fr more

Again I hate alarm 😡..n asad 2 fr sending her to akarm

I just luv their nok jhok..ye inske bina ni reh sakte. Or me asya bina..hope they fall in love soon

Update soon ..like u said this weekend..I m waitng


Thank You! Glad you enjoyed! Better late than never so as long as you're here and taking time to comment I appreciate you SO much! I am shocked that you love AsYa scenes...really 😆😆, such a first 😉! They definitely can't live without their nok jhok and you better not be able to live without AsYa, I'll make sure of it. Don't worry they are falling in love every second of every day, every step every fight of the way...Hope you enjoyed 17 too and 18 too which is coming soon! Keep commenting, I love reading your thoughts.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Awesome story!!!!!

A long one...
Loving how you are adding scenes from the show in between
Great going...

Read all the parts..
Loving the tale of Shawn and Angel..
Asad and Zoya...
One haunted and other Broken...

He has already fallen for her but still forbidding himself ...
I think what happened 7 years before have some connection with both of them..
Excited to read further
Loving your writing skills..
How you pen down the emotions n angst of the characters is magical..👏





Thank You! Aww, so good to hear from you! Like I said in the start I will be adding all my favourite scenes from the show but with a twist to how I wanted the show to be. Hopefully I'll be able to do them a bit more justice than Gul did. He doesn't know what hit him. He is hopelessly fallen for her and is now at her mercy but is still in denial and forbidding himself from wishing for something that has already happened and he let happen. He is IN TROUBLE 😳! Hmm..you may be on to something about what happened 7 years ago. 😳😳 Thank You, I really thought people here wouldn't like my writing style because it's different and well I pretty much am an amateur at the whole writing thing but being told you find it magical is just 😳😳😳😳😳😳! So heart touching and humbling I am seriously just...😊! I'm going to go gush about this now 😆...18 is coming soon so I hope you enjoy it!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

Thank u for giving so much time to this ff and updating these major updates in lightning speed. It cannot be easy to write these updates and then editing them and having to withhold all the other responsibilities too.

Coming to the update! What an awesome update, as usual.
Loved the joking and maazakiya asad! The car part was hilarious and even the car on the scene to the mall. Hilarious!! Loving the mellowing side of asad. And his secret adoration of zoya is just adorable. A little creepy when he was watching her sleep 😆 but absolutely adorable!

What do u say about zoya! Your version of zoya is my hero! She lives in the moment and just grabs everything she can to fill her life with laughter. She is selfless and cares for ppl on a level that makes her risk her own safety and health. She is a fierce person and I'm loving her. But there is so much pain in her and the yearning for a mothers love is so heartbreaking. But I think she is going to get a big dose of motherly love from our fab dilshad!

There are so many emotions and revelations to come, I guess, for our main characters and I'm really looking forward to it. There was a clear display of dilshads anguish when asad was "missing", but I hope we get a more clearer view of her involvement in asads "destruction". I know she couldn't have done things intentionally but still some of her actions has made asad the man he is.

I hope asad regrets his decision of sending zoya of with akram, and not just regret it but show he's sorry to zoya. Just have to wait and watch. And I hope asad gets to know the relation between the faroquis and zoya. Or at least the relation between zoya and ayaan. There is this part which I'm a bit confused about. And that's about this girls that is referred to in asads past. A girls that double-played him. Paris mom? Maybe the revelation has not been made, or am I the one who has totally missed it?

I hope azlan is not going to start chasing zoya now, and if he does I hope he gets a dose of the fiery zoya. Their meeting though would be a good laugh.

Loved the update to bits! Less of haveli ppl is always a good thing 😆

And I'm the most happy that we just have to wait a couple of days for the next update. Yey!!


You are so so so welcome! Thank you so much for taking time out to give such long and beautiful comments, I know many readers prefer to be silent readers (ahem ahem..😆). Yes it is hard but I am just as much in love with my characters and this story as much as you are and I enjoy writing them as much as you all enjoy reading them so I can't help myself and my whack ideas..I NEED to write this story. I am so glad you enjoyed! I honestly LOVED writing the maakiya Asad in the car, it brought a smile to my face. I wanted to so bring out that side of him more in the story and in that scene but it's too soon. I want to explore that side of him more but there is a time for it and that time hasn't come yet. I too LOVE writing all the scenes of his secret adoration of Zoya where he consciously rebukes all his own rules and mantras of staying away from her...and is helplessly falling for her without even knowing it. LOL, 😆 don't worry he's not a creepy stalker, he as usual couldn't sleep and she just HAPPENED (cough, creative freedom, cough) to be before his eyes. How could he possibly shut them then. I am glad you are loving my Zoya 😆 and glad her character is being translated just as I want it to be through all the scenes and dialogues. She is as you said a hero! She is Fierce, Lives in the moment with a heart of Gold (just like Asad)! Yes Dilshad is going to fill the BIGGEST void in her life and Dilshad's son will fill all the other voids, especially the void in her heart ever since she lost her Jeeju. The void of loneliness. Lots and lots of revelations to come it really is going to be an emotional rollercoaster from here on out once all the darkness seeps into the happy and lighthearted moments. I will definitely be exploring and clearing more of Dilshad and Asads pasts in the next few parts, where be it unintentionally but yes like you said Dilshad is responsible for what Asad has become like. As you probably saw in 17 Asad is TERRIBLY sorry for his actions, more than he is able to say or show and yes he will start getting a bit more clued in regarding the Zoya and Farooqui, especially the Zoya and Ayaan relationship in 18. No the revelation has not been made so you haven't missed out don't worry. Yes a girl did double play him but NOT in a romantic way..as in he wasn't involved with her in any such way. Zoya IS the first girl he has ever even spared a glance to. But you will see how she double played him, that will start coming forth in 18..the part of mystery revelations 😆 We'll just have to wait and see how Azlan & Zoya's relationship is going to shape up. Trust me writing less of the Haveli people is much more relieving for me than it is for you guys to read. My brain goes BLANK and my fingers just want to write cuss words directed at them for what they did to my Asad 😡. Hope you enjoy part 18 as well...which is coming soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

A question popped up in my mind...

Zoya didnt visit her family in last 7 years
but in her convo with Farida bi, Farida bi was telling it was the second time she was visiting in last 4 years..
that means did she visited India without informing her family?


Yes, as mentioned in early parts Zoya has visited India before but not Kasauli (as far as her family knows). Her Jeeju had passed away, her sister was in Delhi, Ayaan was in London and her other brothers in Mumbai so she really had no-one in the Farooqui Mansion to visit. She has visited her sister in Delhi as I mentioned in the early parts once but even she doesn't know that Zoya has come to Kasauli before for certain secret reasons that will be exposed later..hope that helps 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Hello daisy...

I finally managed to read this story..
I have reached part 13..
and first of all I love the superrr long updates you give us..
Thank you so much for that..
Well your one update is equal to atleast 4 parts which we usually get from other writers..
And I love you for this..😉

Coming to the story it is very well defined and presented very nicely.
Your use of language is a plus..
I am glad I dint read in the beginning coz now I get to read it continuously...

Well there have been so many excellent parts which I can't remember right now throughout the 13 parts which makes me more and more interested to read more.
I love asad here...

Too good.

Some points which I don't get..

Why is gaffoor staying with the royal family..
What connection do they have except for shireen and why does everyone obey him more?

Why isn't haseena aware about khan's background considering sapna is already a part of their family.

Other points I had thought but forgot right now,😆


Yay! Glad you caught up and are enjoying the story. You are most welcome for the long parts. I find them to be more enjoyable plus I can't stop rambling. Takes a lot of effort but it's all worth it. 😳 Can never get used to reading that you guys actually enjoy my writing style instead of hating it like I thought you would. But hey, this is me and this is my style. Glad it's worked. Yay! I love Asad here too and I hope mostly everyone else does too 😉. Ghaffur is of course related via shireen but he has other connections to the Khans and reasons why he lives with them, why they let him and take all his B.S without throwing him out on his face like they should (aside from the fact that they are all spineless). Also don't forget guys Ghaffur's brother is married to Rashid's elder sister Saima (Humeira's father) and they too live in the house.

I don't know exactly what background of the Khan's you mean here. Haseena is aware that they are the royal family which is precisely why she had her eyes set on them and wants Anaya (the only reason she wants her). If you mean about Asad and Azlan then NO one knows the truth about that relationship, no one in Kasauli other than the Haveli people and those in the Khan Mansion along with Ayaan know that Prince Rashid even has another son. People know he had another daughter (as you will see how later on) but no one knows who her or her mother were. Also I want to clear this but Sapna and Faisal did not exactly marry with his parents blessing. They SORT of in their own way ELOPED (as in got married one day) and since she is not n ideal BAHU like Haseena 😕 in her saasumas eyes and is a strong business women who lives away from her in-laws for the most part no one in the house interacts with her much so that's why they don't know much about the Khans. She is determined to keep her brothers secret and she knows how strange the elders int he Farooqui Mansion are (just like in her Haveli) so she doesn't talk with them much and they don't like or value her enough to care. Ayaan could care less for any of them so he doesn't bother either 😆 plus they are not his secrets to tell and he can really keep his mouth shut when matters don't concern him...hope that clears it and if you remember more questions feel free to ask. Continue reading and I hope you continue enjoying!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Finished reading part 14..

Very interesting it was
Asya scenes wee nice too..

Welll I don't think we need to guess who the S guy is..
It must be Asad.

I am back with more questions..which I remember now😉😆
Well 1st didn't Anwar and Dilshad find it necessary to let Asad know the back story of Zeenat and why Zoya was coming along with her.
Dint they get the time to inform him even once.

And even now when he is hurling abuses over Zoya about her parents why doesn't Dilshad lets him know the truth?
She is still standing as a spectator.
And when she herself said that Zoya is family why does she keep referring to her as the Mehmaan..

And Asad and Ayaan share such a deep bond then why doesn't Asad know about Ayaan that he has a sister and his family story..
Even when they first went with zeenat's rishta dint he realize this was Ayaan's house...whereas Ayaan knows everything about Asad..

These are some doubts I have while reading..rest is up to u how u show things.


Glad you enjoyed! LOL, another one so sure it's Asad...we'll just have to wait and see in 18 who it is, why and how! Coming soon. Glad to answer any questions you have so keep em coming! They do find it necessary and Dilshad has tried many times to tell him but something or the other comes up when she is about to and then since she knows she assumes he does to (plus I'm taking creative freedom here because I want him to find out a certain way and that isn't Dilshad telling him 😆 She doesn't mean mehmaan in that sense. Yes for her Zoya is as much family as Zeenat is but she knows that Zoya isn't staying here forever as both Zoya and Zeenat have said so. Zoya plans on moving once she finds out what she wants to, either to Delhi with her sister or back to New York and her sister believes the same albeit it for different reasons (i.e. when her college finishes) hence why she says mehmaan...Zoya won't be living there forever (little do they know). Yes Asad and Ayaan do share a deep bond and Ayaan does know everything about Asad but there is a reason to that as will be revealed later. The circumstances their friendship was built on caused for this to happen. For Asad to tell him everything and you will see why. Asad does know a lot about Ayaan but Ayaan is a very non-serious carefree guy who doesn't really like talking about his family as you will see later. He just doesn't like talking about things that pain him and his relationship with Zoya is probably one of the most precious and delicate things in his life so he keeps it as protected and private as possible due to the tension surrounding it. But Asad DOES know Ayaan has a sister, somewhere somehow..a girl he CONSIDERS his sister because he knows Ayaan's uncles only have 2 sons each. Other than that he has never met her or seen her. Remember Ayaan and Asad only became friends 7 years ago in LONDON and only moved back about 4 years ago. This is the first time anything about his sister has even come up because Zoya was in NY till then. Hoe that clears it and more will be cleared as story goes on. Ayaan as mentioned before has his own house out of town and that is the only house of his Asad has visited. He doesn't know the Farooquis nor has he ever visited their home because the base and dynamics of his friendship with Ayaan aren't such that he go hang out and play video games with him at his home. There is a LOT more going on as you will see later on. But yes everything will be cleared up slowly and in the coming parts.

If you have any more questions, feel free to ask! Hope you enjoy the coming parts!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Phew finished reading all the parts..

I'm seriously in love with your story and now can't wait to read more.

Just read your note and sorry for your loss.
Tc and take your time.


So glad you are loving my story! Yay! Hope you continue reading & enjoying it. Do remember to leave comments because I love reading them. 18 is coming soon hope you enjoy it.

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