AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#961

I read the story thrice already..

I think it is Zoya that his friends brought 7 years back

And he was the savior about whom Sameer was talking about ..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: hatelove2012
This was super duper awesome. Full of Asya. Love it. Can't wait for more. Finally Asad is eating an inkling about Zoya and his relationship with Ayan and Ashli. Poor Aahil. Hope he is managed to get away from the engagement and poor poor Anaya. I feel so bad for her. She is going to be so heart broken.

So glad you are enjoying! Hope you enjoy the coming parts just as much and leave just as much a sweet comment I love reading them. Asad is finally getting an inkling about Zoya because these days because he is hyperaware and attentive to everything related to Ms. Farooqui these days. I am also dreading writing the coming scenes of Aahil & Anaya it really is going to be heartbreaking but don't worry Aahil will handle it as well as possible given the circumstances and how well it can be in such situations..18 coming soon!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update

Loved it

He asked the kids abt the girl who was kidnapped & shocked to know that it was zoya.

He reached there & saved her on time. He was guilty for his action which was his biggest mistake as it could destroy her life & anger on himself as his best friend betrayed him.

He know what he do with akram even akram knew as well.

He wanted to apologise but zoya is zoya, never let him complete his words. Liked the bike scene. It shocked them but he can't control himself when it's related to zoya.

Aahil saw her injuries & asked her. He was relieved to hear sis from Ayaan. Liked the way she handled the situation. She can fight with him but can't see his head down with guilt. Malik uncle didn't buy that reason. Gift was wonderful, I simply loved it.

He got to know finally who that new coffee barista is. Finally he completed his task to apologise her & she forgive him.

In sum up, all the scenes written beautifully.

Waiting for next update soon.

Thanks for pm

Thank You, so glad you enjoyed it. He does regret it more than she or anyone can ever know and the pain he feels on his friends betrayal is also excrutiating and more of that will be coming in part 18. Akram knows and Akram will see what Asad does to those who betray him in the next part. He really can't control himself when it comes to Zoya and he doesn't even know what grave he is digging himself. He is destroying himself. Falling for Ms. Farooqui more and more day after day. Ms. Farooqui is no less either, she can say and do all she wants but she can't see his head hanging low no matter what because she is coming to love the same ego, arrogance and pride she once was irritated by. Glad you loved the gift, I really enjoyed writing it. Finally he is being put out of his misery by being told who the Barista is. Thora sa toh ghum kam hua uska, 😳😳! Thank you for such kind words hope you really enjoy the coming parts too! Don't forget to leave comments on the coming parts I love reading them.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo
What an update!!!
Intense and dhamkedaar in the beginning.
And intense and hot was the least I can say about the rest.
Loved the shifting dynamics of asyas relationship. And loved the intensity in asads wanting of zoya. This love story is going to turn out to be very intense and passionate.
Really liked the part in the living room where zoya and ayaans relationship was almost reviled. And the prank in the caf was amazing. What am I saying? This whole update was amazing. By far one of the best. Very less of haveli ppl and that is always a positive
The picture was a good addition to let us imagine the scenes better.

Good luck for ur exams.
Will be eagerly waiting for 15th to come so we can get update after that!
Thank u for ur efforts in each update to make this an experience for us readers.

Loving this ff and this update was, in zoya style, MA 😛

Thank You so much! SO SO happy you are enjoying it. Love the comparison, intense and dhamakedaar in the beginning and intense and hot in the end. I wouldn't describe it any other way, I am LOVING writing the shifting dynamics of AsYa's relationship and Asad's wanting of Zoya too. Intense and passionate you have that right it is going to be just that. Asad is soo desperate to know their relationship and he is willing to do whatever it takes to find it out, as you will see in part 18. Glad everyone loved the prank, my hard work paid off. LOL writing less about the haveli people is always great for me too, not just reading it. So happy you guys enjoyed the pictures too! Thank you so sweet of you for wishing for my exams which were just 🤢. I am so so so so happy that you are enjoying this story and making this an enjoyable experience for me as a writer too. I love reading your feedbacks.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
FINALLY I have managed to catch up on the story
I was actually waiting to be on track and I am so glad that finally it has happened
And I am actually speechless with your writings
You know, somethings just touch your heart very deeply, and your writing is just one of those things
I am so in love with this story and with the characters
I loved how you have developed the relationship of asya
This is actually what I can call a perfect love story
With everything in the perfect quantity
Finally asya are somewhat realizing their feelings for each other
The kiss was unexpected but definitely a beautiful surprise
I even loved the scene where asad saves zoya from the goons
Though he was the one to put her life in danger in the first place but was glad to see him guilty for his act
And loved our fire-cracker zoya
Definitely leaving no stone unturned to make asad apologize for his act
Just reminded me of asya days
I am actually in love with the progression of their relationship
And am looking forward to know what happens next
The next part is going to have some mysteries unveiled and I am so very excited for it
Please try to continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently for the next part😊

So glad you have caught up and enjoying it. 😳😳😳 so touched by your words. Thank you! I am truly humbled and touched. Such sweet words. Glad you enjoyed the way AsYa's relationship is being developed, I am loving writing it. A perfect love story that is just...WOW 😳. Yes they are realizing it and even if they are not they are slowly beginning to realize how helpless they are in falling for each other. Glad you liked the kiss, it was unexpected and I was doubtful if I should include it or not but it just felt write in the scene and so I just went with my gut. I too loved the scene where Asad saves her, and his guilt. Zoya will never leave any stone unturned to torture the poor guy. 18 is coming soon and I hope you enjoy it, do remember to leave a comment. I love reading them. Yes next part is going to have some mysteries unveiled hope you enjoy it.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Please put up the link in the pm when you send..
It becomes easy..

I will try my best to remember to do so!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: Cancerian111
Wow again an amazing updates daisy...must say u shud write in some professional grounds da way u portray everything is beyond words to explain.asad zoya chemistry is out of world and even better than qubool hai drama..if this type of chemistry ka 1% b serial ma dikha d'tay tu baat he kuch aur hoti..I loved da ending scene of last update most beautifully portray maza a gya, da best sorry scene ever.akram fiasco..amazing entry of our S..cafe scene...bike ride...action scenes portray in previous updates..asad helping those poor ppl ,,,haveli ppl show off ,,and stupid ghafoor hilarious media talk and many more...I like all.again many thnx for da LNG updates even in mishap situations @ur end..hats off to ur writing skills...keep writing but plz not forget to gv ur studies 100%.i want u to reach da highest goal in ur life ..even we greed for ur more updates but not on stake of ur career..sorry was too much busy nw a days so nt comment earlier...

Thank you so much, glad you are enjoying it. 😳😳😳 such sweet comments, professional grounds...😲 I am touched, and humbled. I am so so happy you re loving AsYa and their chemistry. KaBhi had a LOT of chemistry and potential but Gul just 😡..maine qubool hai direct kiya hota toh I promise you things would be different. I think the last scene was everyone's favourite, definitely one of my favourite parts. Same with the sorry scene. Glad you liked the small initial entry of "S" before his main entry in the coming part. Haveli people and ghafoor are just frustrating to read and write as well. You are most welcome for the long part. Thank you for the prayer I am so touched. You are so sweet to pray for my hopeless career 😆. It is okay that you weren't able to comment earlier. As long as you comment now. Something is always better than nothing. 18 is coming soon, hope you enjoy it and leave a comment. I love reading them.