AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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mummyoftwo

@mummyoftwo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#931

What an update!!!
Intense and dhamkedaar in the beginning.
And intense and hot was the least I can say about the rest.
Loved the shifting dynamics of asyas relationship. And loved the intensity in asads wanting of zoya. This love story is going to turn out to be very intense and passionate.
Really liked the part in the living room where zoya and ayaans relationship was almost reviled. And the prank in the caf was amazing. What am I saying? This whole update was amazing. By far one of the best. Very less of haveli ppl and that is always a positive
The picture was a good addition to let us imagine the scenes better.

Good luck for ur exams.
Will be eagerly waiting for 15th to come so we can get update after that!
Thank u for ur efforts in each update to make this an experience for us readers.

Loving this ff and this update was, in zoya style, MA 😛

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#932

Please put up the link in the pm when you send..

It becomes easy..

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Cancerian111

@Cancerian111

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Posted: 8 years ago

#933

Wow again an amazing updates daisy...must say u shud write in some professional grounds da way u portray everything is beyond words to explain.asad zoya chemistry is out of world and even better than qubool hai drama..if this type of chemistry ka 1% b serial ma dikha d'tay tu baat he kuch aur hoti..I loved da ending scene of last update most beautifully portray maza a gya, da best sorry scene ever.akram fiasco..amazing entry of our S..cafe scene...bike ride...action scenes portray in previous updates..asad helping those poor ppl ,,,haveli ppl show off ,,and stupid ghafoor hilarious media talk and many more...I like all.again many thnx for da LNG updates even in mishap situations @ur end..hats off to ur writing skills...keep writing but plz not forget to gv ur studies 100%.i want u to reach da highest goal in ur life ..even we greed for ur more updates but not on stake of ur career..sorry was too much busy nw a days so nt comment earlier...

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#934

Daisy exam kaise jaa rahe hai tumhare?

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#935

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Alrighty guys so finally the nasty lil inconvenience called 'exams' are done! Let's just leave it at that and not get into how they went..
But on the bright side I am finally back! I'm functioning on no sleep for like 35 hours and just got back home so Imma hit the bed but just wanted to give ya'll a heads up that I will FINALLY be responding to all your sweet comments from this part and the last. Your comments brought a smile on my face during these dark exam times..so thank you for that! I also see a lost of questions regarding the story and will answer as much as I can w/o giving the story away..I will also give you guys heads up and insights about the upcoming updates..so if you wanna come back around tomorrow you can find that. Once again thank the you all for your loyalty, love and support you're tooo sweet! I missed this story, missed my crazy AsYa..missed ya'll and it's been like a week only? Anyhow, I'll be back tommorow with more! For now..

xoxo - DailyDaisy!!

Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#936

Hope your exams went well..

update soon..😳

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#937

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Heya! Alright guys before I start responding to comments I just want to address the next update. So as you guys know I had exams this past week 🤢 so I had no time to write, at the moment I have next to nothing written (except the parts that were unable to be included in part 17, which was not that much according to my standards) and I am going on Holiday on the 20th of December (Tuesday) so I only have 2 days to get as much writing done with Monday left to edit. Other than this the only chance I have to update is in the new year but I don't want to leave you guys hanging for so long so I will update on Monday (My Monday Night) BUT as mentioned since I only have two days to write, the update size will be rather small. Probably half or less than half of what I normally give, given the circumstances. I know it's not ideal but something is better than nothing. I hope you guys will understand and still love the update! I'll be around on the forum but just won't have time to update over the holidays, BUT I will be back early in the new year with another dhamakedar update that will be the regular Daisy size and in the new thread. I'm going to start a new thread for the new year which part 19 will be on! I'm going to finish this thread by responding to your comments for the last 2 parts, update 18 and respond to comments for that too!

Now that that's done! I'm going to go finally respond to your comments! Again, I hope you all understand and continue loving Mohabbatein & AsYa even if it's in a shorter dose 😆 until the new year! Until then love and xo to ya'll, hope you have a great last few days of 2016! Happy Holidays ⭐️ !!

xoxoxo - DailyDaisy!

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#938

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Awesome update
LOVED IT YAAR
asad become mischievous with zoya
loved their banter in car
zoya bought bicycle
i think she is angel
zoya's innocent dua won my heart totally
so asad was watching her sleeping
and their cafe banter was really very awesome
zoya think asad is in love
loved the way she saved anaya and broke the windowshield
malik saved her
and her fight with poor theif
asad miya finally roared
he did not heard zoya fully
ayaan still did not tell his relation with zoya
asad is going to regert now
update soon

Thank You, Happy you liked it! Yes, Asad is breaking many norms for Zoya, no comments on Angel she is as much a mystery as "s" 😆! That's just Zoya...she wins hearts wherever she goes. Yes, she is very much a reason for Asads sleepless nights..their banters are just 😆 Zoya has some serious gut to fight those goons and get arrested, Asad definitely didn't agree, Ayaan will finally end Asad's misery and tell him their relationship and as you've probably seen in 17 Asad really does regret his actions A LOT! Hope you enjoy the short upcoming part 18. Hope your exams are going well, best of luck for all the ones you've finished and all the ones you've left and I hope they end soon cuz I miss you stalking my thread 😆! So come back and continue reading and loving Mohabbatein!

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

😉

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#940

Originally posted by: hatelove2012
Oh no. Cliff hanger. I hope Zoya is safe. As always beautiful update and can't wait for more. Please update soon.

Thank You! Glad you enjoyed! Don't worry Zoya is perfectly fine as you must've seen in part 17, aakhir her knight on a white bike is there na! Hope you enjoyed this and 17 and 18 which is coming soon!

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