AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 98

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

I read the story thrice already..

I think it is Zoya that his friends brought 7 years back
And he was the savior about whom Sameer was talking about ..


Thrice 😲😲! Yay! Read it another time 😆! I am so happy you are enjoying it. Well you may be onto something here..but I can't say for sure...guess we'll just have to wait and see 😆. Good guess though 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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Wow what an update
I have read it in 2 parts apparently days apart so lets see what I remember
Ahhggg hindi how I wished
Asad my all time fav character but thrn when thry becomes asya will be it
Asad and zoya loving their dynamics
He so now have to get his dose of zoya more than his cup of coffee
Love the drive to the mall their nok jhok the cafe his tease
So the snoring mad cow was sleeping in his living room
And can I say tht was the only night asad can say he had the most peaceful sleep byt watching said mad cow and then waking up to her melodious tinkling laughter
But then when he lashes out he lashes out hard he forgets everything and just start letting out the verbal vomit
But I believe he was most scared if hwr getring harm then them facing a bad image bcuz he dont seems to gives a rat ass abt anyone
Love bhai behen moment zoya thought his gf and went looking for her to cure her jahspanah depression
But instead she found trouble with a capital T
So Anaya was the victim
Good job zoya to azlan I eould have used the bigger brick though
Malik is like the head angel for the khan family and the devil for the royals
Azlan got told and told well damage is his expense
Azlan snd asad relation oh boy ...pari will always love chachu more he is precious
So seems pari mom caused asad heartbreak she played with his feelings and then bed the other brother
A modern opportunist girl and now zoya is being palced in her shoes by asad
Oh and the icing on the cake is zoya saying she will be staying with ayaan she was painted wirh the same paint
It is sad how zoya and her bros cant reveal their relation
Ayaan cant even tell asad who she is to him love the way he warned him after seeing another magazine front page this time in rogue
It looked real to asad the pic and he wanred it ro be real hecame to rogue looking for her and akram but no luck then not seeing ayaan thinks she is gone with him
But couldnt help imagining her on the dance floor her santuary
Akram a wolf in sheep clothing looking forward to asad to see his chilhood friend true face
I know he is the one to grab zoya bcuz he knew she was to meet him and he would want his revenge after all she defame him and his family
Dilshad seems to not like said friend when she learn he was zoya prospectively groom
She was disappointed in asad he made her bow her head in front zoya
But she can aleays talk to him and make him see light hope she reveal some of zoya truth to him one day so he can stop being a lion and roaring
His worry mind was working clockwise when he learn zoya wasnt with ayaan and ahe didnt come to rogue
Sorry for akram in the next chapter
The royals pain in the arse
Gaffur a snake
Razia and shireen heartless witches
Maya an fairy amounts them
Rashid ughhh
Cant judge the rest but all are stomped under my feet for what rhey did to asad and his family and what they made happen to them
Shopping in Dubai for a mere engagement not even caring abt what is happening in their city
If it was not for the hawks to watch over
Kasauli ...Had to be ayaan who helped dilshad after asad ran behind the Angel and dilshad dilemma for her son in chaos
And asad (S..wink) face off azlan
I guessing zoya was the angel who came up with the idea of helping the less fortunate after all asad recognized the bags
Love asad opening up his house to them and loving zoya for sleeping amounst them and even had jahapanah loving her for tht too
Aww where did she get her bicycle from and parking it amount such beauty and where did jahapanah get bike to come home on if he went out with the limo..dilshad relief on seeing him and zoya witnessing tht family moment and feeing like an neglected outsider and craving for love
Hope I have covered everything if I forget any part to comment on I am sorry as I said I read it in 2 parts nearly 5dys apart
Looking forward for more and guessing we will be having more changes in the relationship of asad and zoya
I so want to say asya but they r not their yet
Waiting to see if my revelation of "S" turns out to be truth
And looking forwrd for appi visit hope jiji is along with her
Wonder if zeenat would share anything abt zoya with Asad
It is Sunday waiting
Soon plz


Aww thank you! So glad you are enjoying it. I am so sorry about the hindi I do try my best whenever I remember you (which I do) but when I'm writing it in a flow and so most of it comes out like this but I will still continue trying my best. Asad is my favourite too so happy you also love him! Happy you love their dynamics. Yup he is now more dependent on a dose of Zoya then him, LOL the sleeping mad cow...so loved writing that scene. Yes, when it comes to Zoya his heart doesn't work his mind doesn't work he has no idea what he's doing. He lashes out, and he falls hard to. Yes in that scene he was more worried about her than him. He doesn't give a rats ass about anyone but things between him and the police are very tensed as you probably have seen and will see in the future too. Yes trouble with a capital T. LOL I would also use a bigger brick too. He is an angel for them and I love writing their scenes together, I love writing their scenes where he tells off Azlan on behalf of Asad and Dilshad. Yes chachu is a precious gem and so Pari loves him more. Can you blame her? No you are wrong about Pari's mom. Her & Asad were NEVER involved romantically, I just wanted to make that very clear. Zoya and her brothers relation will start getting out in part 18, there is only so much you can keep hidden. Dilshad will definitely make Asad see the light soon. Royals are always a pain and hate them for what they did to Asad. A lot of mysteries will be revealed soon. Akram is in a LOT of trouble. Yes, they can shop, leave and go as they want and then try to come back and pretend like nothing happened. Want to be accepted and act like children when they don't get it. Well we'll see who it was that ran after Dilshad..Can't say anything that's my new mystery to torture you guys. Same with Angel. Both AsYa are angels for all they do, and open their hearts and homes to others. Zoya bought the bicycle, and there is NOTHING Jahapanah can't do. He has a lot of tricks up his sleeves as you will see later on. Jeeju is coming for sure in part 18. No they are not AsYa yet, but they will be soon and they will be SOMETHING. Can't wait to write on them together. Thank you for such a long and beautiful comment, I appreciate and love them so much. Keep them coming, hope you enjoy the next part too.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow mindblowing upd@te
Loved it to bits its was nearly all abt asya
Love how asya moved forward not by one step but abt 5 steps
Asad crazed behaviour on finding zoya was commendable loved it how u described his reaction to the fear of finding her even with a paper cut,the betryal of his friend
I can imagine what he would be like when he accepts his feelings and something happens to Zoya then
Aww our poor poor zoya her life us such a chaos she believes she had no one but she is zoya farooqui she does not give up she does not go down without a fight
But little did she know indeed she is mot alone her prince is definitely in the way and he will destroy all to get to her and bring her back safely
Nasty much akram he will not be her only husband so he had to be two timing asad he is working both sides asad and sameer and he do t want disappoint him again has yk mean sameer
Qubool nahi hai when tht was said in tht velvety voice even I like zoya came back alive I just had to watched tht episode...lol
And zoya just knew she was saved when though he put her in yhiw position he was there to take her to the light her jeeju made sure of tht
Wiping my tears ...
Yayyy
"S"(Shawn)is asad knew tht all along wouldnt wait for u to bring him to the limelight I knew it bcuz the chain in his hands he found outside the cabin then at the cafe when she got tht feeling of him being there but when the person step to the light it was only ASAD.
I believed akram shit his pants when he saw him and knw he betrayed and doublecrossed a brother
Akram should bury himself alive before asad get ahold of him after all he has dared to hurt his GIRL ZOYA
Wow the way thwy react to each other to seeing each other pain to the touch of the other to the feelings of peace to the fear of destruction
A silent. Promise to akram and the brotherhood invade to right a wrong
Nick (ayaan)doesnt hear abt this a promise in the clan
He was all in he was a goner it was inevitable Zoya Farooqui was his destruction and their will be no turning back
Of couse she was molded to fit u asad she is ur soulmate ur saving grace
He felt her jagged skin on her hand but he couldnt investigate
Dilshad told asad and put him in his place she had to bring up his bitter past to show him the difference
Maha the girl who played with his feelings the destroyer of he and his brother relation the person who ruin his thoughts in love and trust
Aww so pari is like her mother maha prefers asad over azlan
Love pari and asad convo
He tries to learn more of chutki but thinking of her brings him back to another angel zoya the one who never leaves his thought for a second
If only he knows it is one the same
So asad told pari no such thing as like a boy or girl they r just friends or enemies but what is his category with zoya
As pari said Asad say sorry AAK can say sorry too
So assd ired feet took him to zoya he learned she has an older brother if only he know not 1but 5
Aww zoya told him off and told him.not to talk to her or she wouldnt talk to him.too
But all this after some amazing chemistry between them
The thought.of asad just taking the empty spot on he bed next to her just to soothe him
The pain he felt when dhe said if she had got married he couldnt stomach tht her belonging to someone else anther man tht just didnt digest well
Asad lifr is filled with so much women
We have the ones who haunt him in horror shireen(wicked stepmom)maha(girl who played with his heart)screaming girl from 7 yrs back
And the ones tht entice him the faceless beauty 7yrs ago, chutki di,the blog angel and zoya
All tht entice him and also the screaming one I believe to be one the same ZOYA
I also believe the person tht was shot was not the girl but her beloved jeeju...so tell me if I am wrong but u wouldnt u like to keep us at the edge of our seat
Love how zoya assure her phupi who was ashamed to face her and zoya telling her it is not her fault but she feels responsible and tell zoya she has the right to be mad and and angry but our zoya the golden hearted girl already to forgive the akdu and get her quota of love from her phupi.
Love the breakfast the car ride (haha a sports car not the limo so they can be closer to each other)the tension between both not the bad kind but the good kind the kind tht say I just want to have u in my arms and cherish u the kind tht say I worry abt u the kind tht say I want to worship u both physically and emotionally and loving dilshad keen eyes she was happy to see his worry for zoya and zoya maturity in asad presence
Ughhh the haveli and haseena can i puke now so full of themselves so aahil visits will he get thw courage to speak to his ammi or will arsalan had to step in and poor anaya sad to see her weaving dreams for a man and future so uncertain
Asad comes for his sugar high and his zoya therapy but he was disappointed no zoya
Haha the mannequin challenge I plan to do it at Christmas dinner
HIS SUGAR awww shelia caught him out so a kiss for his sugar for a normal coffee
Zoya was too much really Margaret and wouldnt she think he will know her voice
Omg asad sermon on zoya carelessness carefree behaviour really wished it was in english
I keep begging for more english but daisy doesnt like me
He was so worried so scared for her as his ammi and aisha said kissi
Really he took the bike in the pouring rain to look for her not a car wonder why
A telling off by her mysterious stranger she craved to meet him have him touch her and ser her ablaze again and her wished was granted as she felt him but dhe was disappointed he was not there it was only Asad her prince charming on his metalic white horse
The heart desires and the hot sexual tension by both tht witness them in their drenched state if only they give in to tht
Zoya couldnt belive she was having dirty thoughts of her Akdu
So asad has figured it out zoya the cafe closing up, his coffee,the sugar,the barista and all adds up to ZOYA HIS SUGAR.
Ok u need to bring asya together now or sooner plz than later bcuz even I am getting hot and bother by their flowing desires
Tht almost missed kiss outside the cafe damn
When asad cant take a hold of his feelings he lashes out and lashed out fierce bring her parents again
Zoya still couldnt believe he came for her especially with the bike and she refuse to go with him u know pride I tell u but he threaten to use force and oh boy he did the good kind
The intimacy of the bike ride had me in awe assd always put himself in torturous spots and zoya is faring no better
The love care concern when he drape his jacket around her had her speechless and those feelings r feelings she would expect from him as of now and soon him only
Zoya sleepy image a sight to behold and only Asad Amhed Khan can find her adorable
His joy in hearing sis and bhai in zoya and her bros convo
His hope in it being truth but he still needs confirmation
Her brothers the concern for her injury and her protecting her jahapanah he feels so guility and and was ready to face the truth but she saved him with hwr white lies after all she dont like seeing her jahapanah all forlorn
So he bros buy the BS but not malik
Asad meeting with Margaret his sugar ...haha zoya really an old woman but she was shocked in seeing asad kept his word and kissed the old lady and then he escort her out all in knowing his real sugar is in hiding snd pranking him
Asad loves his present from zoya
I forgive u dummy... she did long before she wait for him to say sorry so when he did she was shocked and then she jad to give him a piece of her mind abt her and her nikaah
Haha he drank the sugar coffee for forgiveness and like it too
Anticipating the party it hasnt started but 2 people are already on fire
I owed u a kiss sugar
Zoya was speecheless
The genuine apology from him was breathtakingly beautiful and the mischievous glint in his eyes has us craving for.more of this Asad
Waiting impatiently


Yay! Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Always about AsyA is always a good thing eh. Glad you enjoyed my describing of Asya and Asad's craze on finding her. Oh yes, I can't wait to write what Asad will be like when they are together. Yes our poor Zoya she really is a tough soldier who is a fighter. But now her prince is with her. and she no longer has to fight alone. Well lets see who he is talking about, Sameer or someone else..you will see in part 18 who it was. I had to watch that episode when writing the scene too lol. Aww, don't cry..Asad haina..Faizan sent our Zoya his and her angel. Well I'm still not commenting on "S" until next part. LOL quite literally he would've shit his pants because he knows whats about to become of him as you will see in 18, Lol so sure nick is Ayaan already? Yes, he is a goner. She will be his destruction, his soul mate. He just doesn't know it. He will find the jagged skin soon don't worry. Dilshad will always make Asad bow down, and who doesn't love an adorable Pari and Asad they are just so adorbs! He will know about her five brothers soon enough, don't worry and Ayaan will never let him live it down. LOL Asad is such a playa! 5 timing women all in his head. Hmm...is it the same girl? yes, no maybe? Also you may be on to something about the Jeeju but I am not going to say anything. Glad you are also loving DIlshad & Zoya too. Yes, a sports car because Asad LOVES to torture himself by being closer to her. We will just have to see how Aaahil handles this situation. Don't worry I hate Haveli people too, but every story needs a villains or in this case, many. Best of luck for your mannequin challenge. Hope it goes well. Yes, only Zoya has the guts to pull such a devilish prank on Asad. Aww, don't think like that I readlly do care for you just in the flow it doesn't come out when I'm writing but when I write it just comes like this but whenever I take time to remember I always try to write in English. LOL if you're getting hot and bothered meaning my efforts are working. They are both suffering from this tension too. LOL these scenes are only just starting, it's going to just get worse from here. LOL there is more of this mischievous Asad and Zoya and it's going to be one hell of a ride. Hope you enjoy. 18 is coming..please do leave a nice comment, love reading them!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Kya bataaoo yaar bas chal rahe hai


Aww, I understand what you are going through. Hang in there you will rock!
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Posted: 8 years ago
I see you around so I hope to get an update soon from you..
I can't tell you how addicted I have got to your story,,
U write awesome really..

I'm enjoying reading this story to the extent that I check everyday if it's is updated or not..

So please please update quickly,,

Now I think I should have started reading more later so wouldn't have to wait for the updates..😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Aww, I understand what you are going through. Hang in there you will rock!</font>

Lets hope for best
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Posted: 8 years ago
So you are going to update on your Monday(our Tuesday)
my last exam hai Tuesday ko
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Posted: 8 years ago
And if i am not wrong seening your OCD habit it will be on page no 140
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Posted: 8 years ago
I cannot wait to finish my exam to read your update after that

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