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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: mona12345

Hey Ankie ,

Beautiful OS !

Wonderfully penned !

Felt just what Asad did ! Remarkable writing .

How you portrayed each emotion. Those words hit at the right spot. 👏

⭐️

thank u so much mona for your kind words.. did i ever tell you how awesome a writer you are? Yes i just did right now 😊 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: mayurchan7
Hello..,actually i don't know what to call you and HUMPTY DUMPTY is different...as i say i love your work and this os also..was good clearly it always difficult to choose between your loved ones..this was all ASAD'S POV hope it also had ZOYA'S POV beco'z it is her who is suffering the most...lovely os and waiting for your FF's update...

oh my goodness i have a new reader ❤️

Thank you for gracing my little stupid fiction ❤️

Well you CAN always call me Humpty Dumpty I would ABSOLUTELY love that always 😳

it is always difficult to chose and i wish not a single soul is made to undergo such a terrible situation ever in life..

It actually was Zoya's feelings 😆

The angel is she, she forgave her father and reconciled with him which irked Asad away.. his possessive nature took colors all thanks to his insecurities and his love for her.. she else wanted Asad to start afresh just like she did forgiving and letting go of things that hurt.. Asad couldn't and when Gaffur falls sick.. he realizes how wrong he was and how an angel Zoya was.. and vows to start afresh when Gaffur gets well.. 😊

I feel inadequate as a writer and thank you for pointing out how i had failed to emphasize on Zoya.. critics are your best friends.. so thank you!! Will definitely work on it.. 🤗

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

thank u so much mona for your kind words.. did i ever tell you how awesome a writer you are? Yes i just did right now 😊 😆

Now you're just being way too kind. 😆
I'm still trying to get the abcs' of the writing world.😳

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Brilliantly described Asad's character ! 👏
Loved the drabble ! ❤️
Now i'm missing Asad again !!! 😭 (i sound like a girl who hasnt get over her 8 months old break-up !) 😆

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I finally spot some one here after 9 long months.. 😳 lucky to considerate myself as.. 😊 🤣

all i can is.. been there.. done that.. still there and still doing.. and it bellaaadddy HURTS asdfghjk 😆

Thank u thank u thank u so much sweetheart.. your comment brought a tear to my eyes.. thank u once again 🤗

Hahah..Ya, almost 9 months...

9 months, 9 months, can you believe we are still heartbroke...😭

Btw, hey, I did comment before...- > http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4101880&TPN=11

On your topic, as only you could make me comment...Baki becharoon ka "Like" or "Waiting-till-completed" pe hi guzara hai... LOL

YAAA...And it will always...The wounds are still open and fresh...IF, if they ever gets to heal, it will have scars on over souls...🥺 (I know, sounds dramatic, but can't deny the truth)

Aww, Ankieee...Anytime... *Aditya Kashyap's smile*

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

After a really long time, I saw my Asad Ahmed Khan. I don't know how you did it, but yaar you captured him in the perfect essence. You brilliantly used a simple hospital scene to capture us both in the moment and in the build up- the flashback and all. I really felt like I was ready his journal or something. The journey to acceptance and understanding his potion, truly beautiful! I wish we could've seen something like this on the show. *deep sigh* at least I have your Drabble! (: