The Hate | AsYa OS - Page 7

Magnificent piece of writing 👏

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

oh my goodness i have a new reader Thank you for gracing my little stupid fiction Well you CAN always call me Humpty Dumpty I would ABSOLUTELY love that alwaysit is always difficult to chose and i wish not a single soul is made to undergo such a terrible situation ever in life..It actually was Zoya's feelingsThe angel is she, she forgave her father and reconciled with him which irked Asad away.. his possessive nature took colors all thanks to his insecurities and his love for her.. she else wanted Asad to start afresh just like she did forgiving and letting go of things that hurt.. Asad couldn't and when Gaffur falls sick.. he realizes how wrong he was and how an angel Zoya was.. and vows to start afresh when Gaffur gets well..
I feel inadequate as a writer and thank you for pointing out how i had failed to emphasize on Zoya.. critics are your best friends.. so thank you!! Will definitely work on it..

Hi...Humpty Dumpty...well it is not a criticism...but just my POV about how Zoya's POV should also been shown in an another O.S...that is it and thanku for acknowledging it.

Awesome...

Nice OS..

That was beautifully tragic and I absolutely love it.

Hey Ankie... I know I am so very late in reading this and also respoding.. Sincere apologies.. This is another marvellous work of yours.. you just know how to touch hearts of people with the emoitonal flow of your words.. Asad POV is beautifully brought out.. and I have not changed in terms of imagining KSG as ASAD as always.. 😊