The Hate | AsYa OS

Page

Next Last

Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

125

Quote

Frequent Posters

Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

A/N

Cause I thought I should provide one. 😆

@EVERYONE WHO READS THIS : BETTER COMMENT as well as LIKE.. 😡 NAHI TOH MAIN 😡 ... I'LL STOP WRITING 😡 😆

For More Works of Fictions Do Have A Look At My Index 😳

❤️ Ankie

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 10 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

nice os...

u portrayed asad character so well...

Quote

Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82
nice os...
u portrayed asad character so well...

Something I feel, I should by now cause

🤣

Nevertheless, Thank you 😊

Quote

Mehreeeen

@SurbhikiPankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Fits Asad's characterization so perfectly! :') if only we had actually seen this. 😭 Oh well!

This Drabble is perfection! <333

Quote

GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely dear.

Asad with his late realization, as ever.

And my fav Abbu in hospital.

Get well soon Gaffur saab...

And Asya lived happily ever after...

Quote

Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

Its awesome...
Asad... hez d best man on earth fr me...
He IS your father, and I AM, the love of your life. 😳
u portrayed his emotions so beautifully 👏

Quote

ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Brilliantly written ankie, as usual. But i know it feels good to read such comments again and again 😆

Your depiction of a simple scene in Asad's POV is so well written. How he feels insecure at the fact that someone else could love her as deeply as he does and then how he feels as if he is just a passing phase. Uff I can so imagine AAK brooding over this.

His realization that they both hold different meaning and importance in her life was written so well and his acceptance of this truth was done beautifully.

Loved it yaar. And please don't even think of stopping.