The Hate | AsYa OS - Page 4

Hello..,actually i don't know what to call you and HUMPTY DUMPTY is different...as i say i love your work and this os also..was good clearly it always difficult to choose between your loved ones..this was all ASAD'S POV hope it also had ZOYA'S POV beco'z it is her who is suffering the most...lovely os and waiting for your FF's update...

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Brilliantly written ankie, as usual. But i know it feels good to read such comments again and again 😆 yaar you are too very kind actually 😳

Your depiction of a simple scene in Asad's POV is so well written. How he feels insecure at the fact that someone else could love her as deeply as he does and then how he feels as if he is just a passing phase. Uff I can so imagine AAK brooding over this. that has always been Asad Ahmed Khan 😆 .. he was a dayum possessive person who always visualized the world as black and white.. 😆 he cant share his loved ones.. and cant bear anybody loving them more than he did 😆 remember Bhai ka dil dariya daash saumdar hai 😳.. Ammi you dont need him, you have us 🥺.. Miss Farooowi ap bhi.. ammi chor ke chali gayi ap ayaan bhii 😭 I hate that man.. inhe jeene ka haqq nahi hai 😡

THAT MAN 😭 🥺

His realization that they both hold different meaning and importance in her life was written so well and his acceptance of this truth was done beautifully. Asad has always been a man who accepted his mistaken when pointed out.. redemption came to him naturally and he could do anything to make it up.. this piece was inspired from one of those tons of wish-lists that I always dreamt QH would feed me with.. and t was high time to write my own when turned down 😆

Loved it yaar. And please don't even think of stopping. stopping from? from doing nonsense shit? be pacified.. nonsense defines me so it'll never end 😆 😆

Fabulous os dear...
Asad character is soo perfectly potrait..
Very well written. .
Loved it..
Keep writing

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

he's the best cause he has he power to accept his mistakes..😊and he is ready to do anything for redemption😊

yes ur right ankie...I never loved any fictional char 2 this extent...I love AAK bass..

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Hii ankie.. ..

Woww, like always, this was awesome. ...

Sooo deep, thought full. ..

Mere purane QH days ki yaad aa gayi.. ..

Great job.. ..
N write more. ...

Originally posted by: Amulya9

yes ur right ankie...I never loved any fictional char 2 this extent...I love AAK bass..

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

Arre waah, Ankie! Different from your usual style... In tone! Passionate, strong, taje no prisoners! I like it! I like it a lot! Beautiful realization and conclusion! I always did say you possess a wisdom rare for your young young age!

Thanks for the PM! 🤗

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

^ Correction : you loved the way the character was written😆

Been there.. done that.. still there.. still doing..😊😆

haha... yes of course...

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

thank u 😊

MWAH Ankie, I love you for the way you reply to each comment. So witty and entertaining 😆

Pehle updates se entertain ho, phr comment ke reply se 🤣

ankie you are the best 🤗

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Ahh, as always, that was beautiful Ankieee...Well written, I could feel and knew that every word that you have written is what Asad Ahmed Khan would have thought, said, done...This is what I would have loved to see in QH too...This is what should have happened...😭

You know, you are one of those QH writers that when they write, they remind us all the good of QH...And how much we will always be IN LOVE with Asad Ahmed Khan... Iss liye, don't ever stop writing... 🤗