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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N


Cause I thought I should provide one. šŸ˜†


@EVERYONE WHO READS THIS : BETTER COMMENT as well as LIKE.. 😔 NAHI TOH MAIN 😔 ... I'LL STOP WRITING 😔 šŸ˜†



For More Works of Fictions Do Have A Look At My Index 😳



ā¤ļø Ankie

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os...
u portrayed asad character so well...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kals82

nice os...

u portrayed asad character so well...


Something I feel, I should by now cause



🤣

Nevertheless, Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fits Asad's characterization so perfectly! :') if only we had actually seen this. 😭 Oh well!
This Drabble is perfection! <333
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely dear.
Asad with his late realization, as ever.
And my fav Abbu in hospital.
Get well soon Gaffur saab...
And Asya lived happily ever after...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesome...
Asad... hez d best man on earth fr me...
He IS your father, and I AM, the love of your life. 😳
u portrayed his emotions so beautifully šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliantly written ankie, as usual. But i know it feels good to read such comments again and again šŸ˜†

Your depiction of a simple scene in Asad's POV is so well written. How he feels insecure at the fact that someone else could love her as deeply as he does and then how he feels as if he is just a passing phase. Uff I can so imagine AAK brooding over this.


His realization that they both hold different meaning and importance in her life was written so well and his acceptance of this truth was done beautifully.


Loved it yaar. And please don't even think of stopping.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Chocoberry : Yaar i hope I am able to restrain myself from hogging you, i mean Chocoberry ice-cream, today once again 🤣

be back later! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the story is about Asad's hate for Gaffor ends up hurting Zoya.
ITS JUST AWSOME

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