Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 20

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awsem update who is that person
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awesome part
geet sad and maan comforting her
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Awesome part well written kaun hai yeh jo geet ko tang karne ki soch raha
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beautiful dear😊
whole family is trying to act normal and making geet laugh
but who is behind that too geet for getting married. maybe someone from geet's family as they dont believe in widow marriage
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part 16
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THANKS 2 ALL OF THEM WHO MADE ALL 4 BANNERS FOR MY FF
LOVE U ALL

Part 17

Maan : geet kahan ho tum

Geet : maan mai kitchen mai hoon aabhi aati hoon

Maan : geet jaldi aao

Priya : geet tum upar jao maan ko tumhari zarurat hogi

Geet : lekin maa

Priya : geet mai sab sambhal loungi jake dekho ussko kya chahiye

Geet : ji maa

Geet goes upstairs

Maan : geet dekho na meri tie nahi mil rahi hai

Geet : maan aapne yeh kya haal bana diya hai room ka sirf ek tie ke liye

Maan : geet woh sab chodo phale mujhe tie dekh ke do

Geet : maan kaun bolega ki aap MAAN SINGH KHURANA ho

Maan : kyun

Geet : yeh lo tie aur aapne kyun ka jawab mujhe yeh room saf karne 1 hr lage ga aur mujhe mom ki help bhi karni hai

Maan : offo geet nakul ko bol do woh room saf kar dega

Geet : koi zarurat nahi hai mai khud aapna room saf kar loungi

Maan : aacha geet aaj mujhe aane mai late hoga aaj ek bohat important meeting hai iss liye mera dinner pe wait mat karna

Geet : maan

Maan : haan haan janta hoon maan aapko kitna bhi late ho mai aapka wait karungi

Geet : chado aapse baat karna bhi mushkil hai

Maan : hmm chalo aab mai chalta hoon bye

and gave a kiss on geet's forehead and left

It was afternoon

Geet was in the room she was thinking of the days with maan

Geet : zindagi ke kitne rang badle kitna kuch maine dekha kuch pal maan sirf mere liye ek ajnabi the aur aab woh hum dono ek saath ek aise pavitra rishte mai hai joh koi nahi badal sagta maan ne mujhe mere past ke saath aapnaya mere har bure aura ache pal mai mera saath diya aab ek pal ke liye bhi maan se dur nahi hona chahti
babaji mujhe kahin maan se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya hai she blush
haan mujhe maan se pyaar ho gaya hai
I love you maan I love you
yeh kaise jadoo kar diya hai maan aapne aab ek pal ke liye bhi aapse dur nahi raha jata aaj mai aapko aapne dil ki baat bol doungi
mai ready hoke maan se milne jati hoon unhe surprise doungi

Geet was going to get ready

Geet : aye lo geet tut oh bhul hi gayi maan toh important meeting mai honge soch geet soch kya kare haan idea maan ko call karti hoon aur bol deti hoon

Nahi yeh aacha idea nahi hai aise kaise bol doun kuch romantic toh hona chahiye na woh nahi karte romantic mai toh kar hi sagti hoon na hai na babaji ek kam karti hoon ek call karti hoon agar woh aabhi free honge toh baat karke unhe ghar jaldi bulaloungi

Geet was about to call maan but her mobile rings

Geet : hello

Person : ji Mrs khurana

Geet : ji bol rahi hoon

Person : ji woh mr maan singh khurana ka accident ho gaya hai

Geet : kya kaise hai aab woh

Person : jis who aabhi behosh hai aap jaldi se xyz hosp aa jaiye

Geet rush towards the hospital without informing

But who knws destiny will play with them

Maan reached home after a long meeting

Priya : aa gaye maan aap chahliye jaldi se fresh ho jaiye

Maan : ji maa

Maan goes towards his room and geet was no where to be seen he thought she must be in kitchen he freshen up and came downstairs

Priya : chalo aab aap dinner karo

Maan : maa aapne yeh sab kyun kiya geet hai na woh yeh sab kar legi

Priya : maan aap bhi na kaise mazak karte hai geet toh dopahar se nazar nahi aayi hai mujhe laga ki woh aapke saath hogi ya nahi toh soo gayi hogi

Maan : nahi maa geet mere saath nahi hai aur na hi woh room mai hai

Nakul comes running

Nakul : badi memsahib yeh dekhiye

Nakul gives a letter to priya

Maan takes it

Letter

Geet aab tum logo ke pas kabhi bhi wapis nahi aane wali hai ussne dusri shaadi ki samaj ke khilaf jake uss ko isski saza milegi aur woh saza hum denge bhul jao geet ko

Maan was hell shocked to read all this


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hi thanks 4 da pm n interestin wonderful update! Well written! Maan gng to wrk n tells her he will b late! Geet realises she loves Maan! she receives a call tht Maan was in an accident n rushes without telling anyone! Maan gets home n looks 4 her! Nakul gives him the note! Maan shocked! Where is Geet? Who is this person? update soon!
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geet has realied her feelings for maan but before she could confess she is kidnapped
hope maan will find her soon
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nice updt
now who kidnaped geet
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awesome update
geet trapped
hope maan saves her
do cont soon
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