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Puja

@..FrozenHeart..

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Read all the chapters , its awesome . Please add me in your PM list 😳

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mydrashti

@mydrashti

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

sorry i forgot to mention the goons part in prvs reply 😳😆 i loveddd ittt though rishaan got the message whom he is messing with she beat them n thn only the goons attacked her fr their own safety🤣 okkk cming to the seventh one awsummm i 👍🏼was just spell bound when maya gave back to rishaan in her mayavi style👏 this girl amaze me so rishaan first do all the nautanki thn blackmail her my god this man had nerve 😡 u better watchout dude wat goes around comes back around..

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mydrashti

@mydrashti

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

eight one is giving me sme other vibes🤔 wat is this rishaan upto try out all his charmss on maya which failed then he forced her to come india n trying to embarass her in all the possible ways 😡 loved his concern fr rudra 😊 dnt knw bt this rudra is giving me goosebumps 😳😆 his smirk when he answered rishaan that he became more gorgeous after the accident😉 n what maya is in rudrs arms feeling warm n all n rudr is on the same pitch😲 so its rudr or its rishaan😕 ok comment after i read the ninth one😊

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mydrashti

@mydrashti

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

my god😲😲 it was a shockkk of a lifetimes so rudra is the real one tooo goodd u r going to rule this forum all i can say star in the making👏 damnn goodd this twisttt is far moree better than the st n nautankis twist so accrodng to the present track u gave this idea fr double rk except changed eye colour 😆 i think u can also sue st n fr stealing this idea of urs the only difference is that in show one rk is after madhu n daru n the second is milkoholick 🤣 n i like both of them😳😉 so rudr is haunted frm the age of 5 the paintings of madhus maya s eyes ofcourse n maya is going through the same bt behaving in her manners hw dare rudr to kiss any random girl to fight his all restlessness jb jaanta hai ki end kya hone wala hai bar bar try kyun karta hai😡😆 n rishaan is one our right kameena justifies so he goes for a tatto bcz he is rk after that seriuosly man in dono bhaiyon ne jeena mushkil kar diya hai maya ka.. n then rudr ka accident ho gaya aur kaun laya hospital maya😛 n he said i found u biwi... too gooddd👍🏼

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mimibm

@mimibm

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Maria Maria...don't be so cruel Maria...

I will become a psycho like Rudra if you do not update it sooner

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: mimibm
Maria Maria...don't be so cruel Maria...

I will become a psycho like Rudra if you do not update it sooner

I am so sorry!!!

I know I have been saying this for a long time, but I will update real soon and then I will try to update regularly like I did previously, I think it was better that way.

Actually I got my interest back in the show so I was busy discussing about it and spamming CCs with my friends whenever I came in the IF. I know it was mean of me. Sorry.

But I have not abandoned this FF. I won't do that ever. Will update soon and then will try my best to be regular.

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Aasatha

@sizzlingDiva

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

I am in love with this fanfic!!! Read the whole thing in one go! Do pm me the next time you update it.

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Waiting Waiting Waiting Waiting Waiting Waiting 😆

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

FF BANNER

I'm so glad i got a chance to make this! 😊 😳

Thanks Maria😊 awaiting your update 😛

i hope you and your FF readers like the banner and find it apt 😊

- Love Hiya

here you go v v

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#510

Disclaimer - Except the concepts borrowed from Madhubala - Ek Ishq Ek Junoon, the rest of the story and its characters are the sole property of Valar.Morghulis (Maria). Please do not copy or use this story in any manner without the permission of the author.

Note: Firstly, thanks Hiyu for making such a beautiful banner! Love you!!! 🤗 I am talking about the banner Hiyu posted in the above comment! Isn't it gorgeous? I love it as it is more than perfect for the the FF! 😃

Teaser

"A pool of blood made its way near her feet, moving slowly in the white slush... She stood rooted to the ground but her knees went weak and she could not take it anymore. She fell down to her knees and the blood soaked her jeans. She wanted to scream, she wanted to cry, but not even a whisper escaped her lips. She watched as the snow turned crimson with the blood of the only family she had... What seemed like ages passed by, before, she was dragged from the place by two pairs of arms... but the vision did not leave her ... and the pain never left her ... Something died in her that day..."

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P.S: I know I said I won't give out teasers but I just felt like giving it this time, plus Hiyu also suggested. Now do no curse me nor throw brickbats at me please...I know I am really really late... I apologize... I am going to update later tonight. 😳

Chapter Eleven: The Deal...: Page 77

Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 12 years ago