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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

another amazing chapter 👏

Thank you so much, Hiyu!!!! 🤗

i love how you maintained the rudra-rishaan talk witty again inspite of the hospital background 😆
Yeah. That's how they are. I am glad you liked it. 😳

i love these two brothers😉 and u already know whom i love more now 😛
Haha. I know. You know I love him as well! 😉😆

i loved loved loved rudra's subconscious dream of his past life when he was fighting death during ganesha chaturthi and then he holds madhu's hand and here he panicked and held maya's hand...and only realized it was maya when she spoke and tried to jerk off his hand 😳

I felt really nostalgic writing it... already missing those days a lot!

looks like maya is still going to take some time until rudra's touch or eyes affect him?😲

Ahaan. 😛

so, both the brothers separately barge into maya's house at 1am 😆

Lol. Yeah. 😆

Rudra cares so much for his brother...not an RK like trait 😉 😛
Rishaan is worried about his survival now, and will go to any extent. isnt he alive just to take care of his brother but, not show it obviously?

You understand RR brothers quite well. 😳

update soon 😳

Working on it. 😛

luv u 😉

Love you too!!! 🤗


Thank you so much Hiyu for your comment! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha.366

wonderful update 👏 ,and thanks for the long update😃😃😃 rudra feels so restless present of maya ,and he did not remember any thing before when he goes unconsious and maya also ignore that ,i found you biwi 😭😭 i love RR brothers ,they so much care for each other ,and maya drinking alcohol and deliberetly doing ,that ,so rishaan should fire her ,poor maya ,kya se kya hogayi , loved the last part ,dhono bhai aakar maya ko dhamka raha hai😆😆 ,and ha my favourate jodi rishaan and meera , my poor meera ,,rihaan ki tho main he is jerk bewada 😡😡, kab rihaan ko akal aayega ,meera hi uskeliye sahi ladki hai waiting for next update😊😊


Thank you so much, Rekha!

He remembers it in his subconscious. Maya has enough evidence to believe that Rudra is crazy. 😆

I am glad you love both the RR brothers. 😳

Yeah. Maya wants to give it back to Rishaan and go away from the limelight but RR brothers won't let that happen that easily. 😆

LOL! You're such a loyal Rishaan-Meera shipper. 😆

Working on the next update. Won't keep you waiting for long.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply awesome update...very well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update Maria 😃
I like how Maya told Rudra to leave her hand and curse him 😆 It made me smile. You should have make her call him 'moron' or 'scoundrel' or something like that ..😆, just kidding. And poor Rudra trying hard to control his feelings and even wishes to consult a psychiatrist. So both crazy brothers land up to Miss.Tantrum queen to threaten her after mid night 😆 But i feel sad for Maya she is in a self destruction path, a perfect partner for Mr.Daredevil. Anyways, is there going to be any kind of friendship between Maya and Meera? I mean,Maya is really alone she need a friend. I am really confused about the relationship these brothers sharing 😕. Wants to know more about them. Waiting to read more. Pls update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wow maria this was simply a mind blowing fantastic update

Thank you so much, Dia!!!! 😳

the plot really deepens and thickens now well i love it

Glad to know...

but i find it bit strange that only rudra has the flashbacks
maya does not yet have any flash backs

Hmm. That's intentional actually. You will know why in the future updates...😛

i could not believe maya started drinking
i mean she too is sort of on a self destructive path

Yeah. She hasn't realized the intensity of it all. She isn't thinking that way.Yet.

and when rudra held her hand she just flinched ?
i thought she will get a tweeny weeny feeling
or a sort of a flashback or some blurred images

As I said ... you will get your answers in future updates.. 😳

i feel so bad for poor rudra for all this now
i mean he is so trying to get a grip or hold on himself
he is trying hard to stay away from maya
but he is failing so miserably always now

Yeah. Poor Rudra. 😆

and i understand rishaan must be feeling so frustrated
he must have thought that maya will meekly follow him
and follow his instructions and do as he says
but sure he did not know what he had signed up for

He surely didn't know that. But he always had a feeling that there is more to Maya than what meets the eye. And I can say the same about Rishaan (Yes, I just gave you a clue! 😛)

well it seems maya is equally stubborn and moody

She is a lot more than just that.

does meera still harbour the same feelings for rishaan ?

Yeah. She loves him. Just tries not to show it or get affected by his words... but you can see how that is working out.

sorry for being late again maria
i wanted to be the first to comment this time
well better luck net time then

Hey.. it's alright! I still love your comment! 😳



Thank you so much for your comment, Dia!! 🤗
Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maria090

awesome update 😳



Thank you, Maria. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ponochka

Thank you Maria. It is so good to start the day by reading your story


Thank you so much. Glad to know that... really. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Congrats for the tenth chappie 😃
I loved it 😳
The brothers convo, the wars waging inside Rudra and Maya, Maya's resistance ...
Awesome!!
Keep it up!
Love you 🤗



Anki... my Beta!!!
Miss you a lot!! Miss your long comments on the first page!!!
Cannot wait for you to excel in your exams so we can be a team again! 😳
I am glad you liked it... 😳
Love you too!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey!is there any possibility that rishaan is relative to sultan?i dnt know why i have this feeling,bt when you describe his cold blue eyes,i get that feeling
sorry 4 not commenting before
bt i really like this story and the way u r writing it!very interesting,pls keep it up!😛

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