FF: Broken Hearts[Pt.27 Pg.78, 30th December] - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Beautiful sisters wish... just love the convo
between zoya and humaira


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what wedding gift. ...asya got from the siblings


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update soon

update soon


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what is happening next


Thank you soo much, I just love your comments❤️really puts a smile to my face😃 Aur woh wedding gift ke baare mein, next update mein you'll know, it's finished lekin way to long so it depends on if I make it into two parts😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful...so nowzo gets humz as a sis
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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely update

Please keep writing

Update soon

Will be waiting

Thanks 4 the pm

Love
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rosered1

res

unres
me first
surprise gift kahin suhagraat tho nahi😆
awesome update 👏


Thanks 😃😃 Aur surprise gift ke baare mein toh you'll find out in the next part 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

wonderful...so nowzo gets humz as a sis


Thanks dear😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linnet


Lovely update

Please keep writing

Update soon

Will be waiting

Thanks 4 the pm

Love
Linnet
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Thanks dear😃😃I'll post the next part in a bit, still can't decide on if I should make it one part or two😳😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey a superb n lovely update...
its beautifull...
luv it...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update and pm me.. thanks...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay I couldn't find any good place to cut it into two and decided it wasn't to long any more😆 Thanks to all of you that comment especially Linsie, thanks yaar for your sweet comments, they always make me smile 😳😳❤️
Okay main phir se shuru hui😆😆 enjoy you guys 😉😆

Part 27

Zoya looked up to Asad and nodded her head shyly. She really was mrs. Khan now. He held his hand out and shyly she placed her hand in it. The walked up to the door and was then suddenly stopped by a man standing in the door.

Seeing Ghaffur standing in the door everybody hurried to stand behind Asad and Zoya.

Who main tumhe rokne ki liye maafi mang te ho, lekin main tum dono ko aise jaane nai de sakta. Maine uss nikaah nama par aapna signature likha, Zoya ka abu baan kar, aur main bas.. he got quiet and looked down before looking up again and staring right into Asad's eyes. Asad jo tumne kaha Humeira, who sab maine suna, aur main jaanta ho ke tum na mujhe pasand karte na hi main tumhe pasand karta ho, lekin yeh sab ko bula kar tumne kabhi Humeira ke saath koi galat salut nai ki, uska direct opposite tum ne use aapna behen maan kar use pyaar diya, use aapna family ke hisa banaya. Aur aaj mujhe jaha dekh kar tune phir bhi uch nai kaha, aur mujhe pata nai ke who Humeira ke liye tha ya Zoya, lekin phir bhi main bas itna kehna chata ho, ke aaj ki liye tum ne humara dushmani bhoola di aur main bhi wahi karunga. Aaj maine uss Nikaah nama par sign kar ke Zoya ko aapna bethi maana aur main 2 beethiya ke baap hone ke naate jaanta ho ke mujhe Zoya aisa nai jaana chahiye. Bina maa baap ke dua toh bilkul nai. Main zyada toh nai kar sakta kyoun ke main jaanta ho ke who tum kabhi accept nai kar paoge lekin Zoy ko dua toh de sakta. Maine ab tak meri dono bethiyon ko yeh dua dene ke mokha nai mila.. and almost to quiet to be hear he said, aur shahid kabhi bhi ek ko de bhi nai sakta main yeh dua, before he whipped a tear from his eye and continues gently placing a hand on Zoya's head, Allah tumhe hamesha khush raake, tumhe hamesha sahi rah dekhaye aur hamesha tume Shakti de take tum aapne pati ko aur aapna sasural mein sab ko khush rak sakte. Allah tumhe duniya baar ki khushi de aur tumhare yeh nikaah ko hamesha haar bure nazar se bahut door rahe. Main sache maan se hamesha aap se yahi maangona mere malik, ke meri Humeira, meri choti si jaan Zoya aur yehi pyaari bachi ko bhi hamesha khushiya aur kamyabi de zindagi mein. Ghaffur once again whips tears from his eyes and looks at Zoya with eyes filled of love, not noticing the shock in everybody else's eyes. So lost in his dua he didn't realize that he had some of the words he had said was not meant for everybodys ears. He looked at Humeira and frowned seeing her shocked look.

Aapki "choti si jaan Zoya" kaun hai abu? She said with a shacking voice.

Ghaffur looked at her shocked not realizing how she could have got to know about. Who main, main na Zoya ke baat kar rahi thi, suddenly remembering his dua. Yeh ek choti se jaan toh hai na. Aur Tum aapne abu se aise baate karti hai, he said pretending to be angry for his younger daughter questioning him in front of everybody. Then his face expression changed and he said smiling ab yeh dulha aur dulhan yaha par kitne deer aur raakho. Tum bachelog ne ek surprise plan ki hai, toh let's get on with it.

Everybody's expression changed and began focusing on the couple again, some of them making a mental note to not forget all of this.

Asad once again toke the hand of his new bride and began walking to the car that was decorated with flowers and lights all over. It wasn't his own car he noticed and hoped it wasn't his ab.. no! Not Mr. Rashid Ahmad Khan's car. That man had stopped being his father a long long time ago and he had no right over him anymore, not since the day he walked out on them. As a kid he would think back and tell himself that it was his abu's majboori, because of the tears he had seen in his abu's eyes when he was leaving them. Lekin now he had grown up, he knew that those tears never existed because they had to have been something he made up to save himself from the pain as a kid, but by the age of 15 he had already began hating him and stop referring to him as his own.

And Ghaffur and his wife, they were the reason behind his father leaving him, not that he thought that any longer. But as a little boy he had hated them to such an extent that it had been hard to stop, even though he knew it was all Rashid Ahmad Khan's own fault, and their bad behavior over the year had given him a reason to loath them. Actually to think about it Ghaffur had personally never done him any harm but his wife was a devils spawn, shaitan must have been proud over her, he taught. But he should have stopped her, he thought and decided that was a reason to keep hating him even after today, but was finding it hard to do, khair this was not the time to think about all of this. He turned his head and looked at his beautiful bride who was looking out the window, lost in toughts.

Kya hua Zoya? He gently asked making her jump.

She looked up to him and smiled, but there was a sadness behind it. Kya aapko lagta hai ke he game for a reason? She asked Asad.

Reason? Mujhe nai lagta ke use pata bhi tha ke woh log kaha jaa raha tha, toh nai uske side se koi reason mu..

Woh matlab nai tha mera, Zoya lowered her eyes and with a shaky voice said, kya aapko lagta hai ke shahid mere abu ne kabhi meri liye dua ki hai aur woh through Mr. Seddique mujhe tak paunch gaya ho. Meri matlab yeh hai ke us na mujhe aapna beethi jaise dua di, iss liye main.. her voice got more and more quiet until it completely disappeared.

Asad looked at her, and slowly lifting her head up and nodded, and even if he didn't believe it himself the joy seen in Zoya's eyes was worth it. He hugged her tight and prayed to God to always keep her happy and never let anything else happen to her, she had been trough to much already.

Suddenly the car stopped, and they both looked up to see where they were. Asad look at the biggest hotel in Bhopal and then looked at Zoya who was blushing and looking down. He looked at the clock on his hand and saw that it was only 22:18. They had to be home again by 5:30 AM as the latest. He opened the car door, walking out and then helping Zoya to come out of the car.

Mr. Khan kya hum ghar nai jaa rahe hai, Zoya said blushing as he had never seen her blush before.

He suddenly had a broad smile on his face seeing Zoya in this halat and winked at her making her blush even more before taking her inside.

Once inside they walked to the reception and Asad said, kya yaha par Asad Ahmad Khan ke naam par koi reservation hai.

The receptionist was glaring at him and then noticed a shy Zoya behind him and understood that he was taken. Jee, phir se naam boliye, she said with a formal tone this time, he Hi had been a bit too obvious that she liked what she saw.

After looking in the computer she smiled at what she read, then realizing that it was all about the eye candy in front of her, yeh lijiye aapke room ke card aur waha par elevator hai, your room is on the 15th floor and you room number is 1507.

Asad not registering anything toke the card and smiling said a thank you before taking Zoya's hand and leading her to the elevator, noticing that she could hardly go and that she kept looking back to the reception with a murdering look, he smiled and picked her up in his arms, making her forget all about the receptionist looking at HER Asad. She came back to lushing and kept saying mujhe neeche rakh Mr. Khan sab dekh rahe hai. Asad carried her into the elevator smiling and completely ignoring all that she said..


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