Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago
Cute and Beautiful update👏👏Loved sangeet part❤️❤️they are all teasing Maaneet😛😛its so funny...poor Maaneet😆😆it is so cute and beautiful also😳😳Loved it❤️Waiting for the Next updateThanks for the PM dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi Mahi...
thanks for pm
will definately read dhadkan very soon...as its exam time i dare to start reading any new story.
Also would like to tell u that m really luking forward for ur new story...start sooon waiting eagerly😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
loved it
so sweet maaneet journy is shown by karan and meera
loved it
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb wala update.. great work dear!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
sooo cute msk
hahaah they never let them meet each other
poor maaneet
they act maaneet story how they meet n beame maaneet
love their teasing n dancing
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Ahh Maan wants to see Geet n he does n is mesmerised! Geet feels someone is watching her! Geet looking gorgeous! She is shy! superb sangeet! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 25(18+)



all get emotional with unconditional love of maaneet ... all just come near them took them in group hug , just than adi say to maan ., waisei have doubt , why you higher house boat for four hours , geet eyes winded in shock and she just hug pinky in shyness , maan just slap on adi shoulder , all just enjoying family time with singing and dancing , including dadi and geet ma ,papa ...all are happy for maaneet ...after taking dinner with family all disappear from their ,geet just went to her room , she went in front of mirror she just looking to herself and small smile playing on her lips ...she just remind snageet , she make baby face and say babaji you see how they all make fun on us , even they wear same cloths like us karan and pinky ko to main dekh loongi ...just than loud gasp come from her mouth , when she feel hand on her tummy under her duppatta , and chin on her shoulder



she know who is it ,her heartbeat start to increased , he just caressing near belly button , she try to stop her moan ...at last moan come out from her mouth and maan just bite her near neck ... give her love bite and start to ease it with his tongue ,poor girl have goose bump on her whole body maan passion making her crazy ...maan just stop his act after some second and say naughtily in her ear , geet you can breath now , her cheek turn dark red shade ,she just hug him and cried Maaan ,he just parted away from her and pick on her forehead and say geet you looking so beautiful like pari from haven ...geet iwant say something alos he ask with gulping his Silva .geet sense some hesitated his voice , like something trouble him



maan just say later geet now tell me why you troubling babaji at this late hour ,he ask her to distract , he just say it and geet make baby angry face and start her non stop complaint that how all make fun on her and maan , maan just sheke her head and mummer miss hosiyarpur express ek bar start ho jati hai to rukane ka naam hi nahi lati , but he smirk and say but msk have his own way to stop her talking , and without any further notice he just give hard smootch on geet lips , she make o shape with maan act , maan say don't five me open invitation , geet and wink to her , geet just hit his shoulder and cried maan , you also tease me ...she fold her hand and make angry face , maan just hug her oh my baby get angry on me , so baby you want chocolate ...she make face on word baby , but next maan just give he big chocolate , she just kiss his cheek and say thanks with happiness and just start to eat chocolate with so much consternation like maan is not present their , she make sound with nibbling that chocolate , maan just grown with her sound , same time some chocolate fall on near her lips , and near her cleavage where her duppata slip slidly , maan eyes turn dark with desire



maan just brought his face near her lips and clean that choclate with his tongue , geet just clutch her chocolate more tightly and result is now that spared on her finger also , that melt choclte , maan just smirk on her and start to clean her every finger like , it is most imp work of world , poor girl just lost in him he make always black magic on her ...just than she found his dark gaze on near cleavage , her cheek start to burn with hit she just bend her head in shyness , and maan say with most husky voice , may I geet ...she just hold her breath and closed her eyes , she expecting his tough on it ...but it not happen ...when she don't feel any moment from maan she saw him , there he standing with MSK style with folding hand and that sexy smirk on his face , she just turn herself , to hide her embarrassment and mummer ,you prevent geet what you thinking ...his tongue on your ...



maan just hug form back any say ...misty , she again feel hesitations in his voice , she just turn to himself ,hold his hand in her hand and say , maan we are soul mate , you love me na? maan lookher with qus mark face ...


geet than why you have hesitation to talk with me


maan wo wo I don't want that you misunderstand me so ...


geet ...Maan ki geet kabhi maan ko galat nahi samaje sakti ...she say with pride



maan ...just blow with her trust and say oh geet ...how you can love me ,trust me like this

geet because your are my life , my Dhadkan maan , and how we couldn't trust our heart ... maan she ask him with her innocent eyes , which way of her soul


maan just clear his throat and went near window and say , in evening I came to see you , because all day ,our family stop us from meeting or calling ...when I came hear through balcony , isaw you , you laying on bed without duppatta ...his voice shake little bit , and small gasp come from geet mouth ... maan just closed his eyes and say in low voice ...from that time I just want to see you without ch... , you get it na geet ...he ask with most pleading voice , few second went like this totally silent ...he just scare for her reaction ...if she mistook him ...



just than room light went off ...only light of moon coming from balcony and window , it give blue shade to whole room , maan just turn to look why geet not reacting and what happen to light ...but he froze in his place his geet standing in front of mirror and she just took out her necklace , her bangles , her ear ring and she just pull of duppata from her shoulder that piece of cloth just slip from her body in slow ...speed next she just open node of her choli and undo hook of it and in swift moment that cloth come out from her body ...she took bold step with lots of courage for her maan but she is girl she just cross her hand to hide her feminist part ...the mirror give full view of geet front , and her back just shining in moon light


maan just try to hold his raising heart beat ...closed her hand to control his moan ...oh god what beauty is standing I front of him he just scaer if he hurt this beauty with his touch ...he just pull like magnate to geet , room just filled with raising heartbeat ...like DHak Dhak Dhak ...he just come near geet and stop just inch away from her ...he just start to stair her in mirror her hand blocking his view , he just bend and blow on her back ...that just give Goosebumps to geet she just hold her breath , so much butterfly dancing in her tummy ...with closed eyes also she feel his hot gaze on her ...just than maan mummer in her ear geet just once , please ...geet just give up to his pleading and with lot of courage she took away her both hand from her blossom she turn red like cherry with shyness and it is last blow for maan ... he just mummer oh misthy like he moan with desire ,he looking to mirror without closing his eyes ...


in swift moment he just turn her to himself now his nude eyes just roaming on her womanly beauty ...his hand etching for touch that feel that with his hand , with his mouth ...all erect thought start to come in his mind he just say perfect and beautiful geet you are more beautiful and perfect than I imagine ...geet cant hold her any more and she just hug to maan but that is wrong move ...he just grown with geet action , her blo... touching to his to-ant chest , and his thin cloth cant helping him ...he feel her bare touch ...he just hug her tightly and start to cares her flawless ,back it feel like some silk is under his palm ...he just parted for second and just pull his shirt and just again took her geet in his hug ...a current pass trough their body when their nude upper side touch to each other ...both moan with desire ... maan just bite near her cleavage to hold his unlimited desire and geet moan in pain and pleasure ...maan ...maan just pick her in his arm and went near bed ... and lay down her on bed and cover her with duvet and next moment he just sleep beside her and took her lips to passionate kiss ...geet know now also he want touch her on her bl... but holding himself , she just took his hand and put it on her blossom ...maan just shock with geet action bust next moment his hand ...start his work and that room fill with geet moan ...he just playing with her blo with his long finger ,big palm and ... but his desire not satisfied with it , and next moment he just put his hot mouth on her ...geet just hold duvet tight in her hand ...moan ohhh maaan and maaan just put his hand on her lengha for for...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a place to stop
oh ho thats why he was hesitating
hmmm maan scared she will take him wrong
but she can never do that to him
and she told him too
wow control sure slipped
that was so funny with her cribbing to her babaji
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

what a place to stop
oh ho thats why he was hesitating
hmmm maan scared she will take him wrong
but she can never do that to him
and she told him too
wow control sure slipped
that was so funny with her cribbing to her babaji
cheers for pm




yes and i stop till Monday 😉😆😡 don't hit me

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