Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april - Page 53

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
Poor adi & karan...msk se panga lena bahut mehenga pada😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
i soo much loving this story mahi
that was nice going you are doing good job also

sorry for being late i am not well and quite upset in last few days thats why delay

i love sangeet and pinky and adi act that sensore cut scene i am grining like idiot

ohh how sad u made that as maan's dream not fair but hope that dream will come true 😉 😆

all things they did actually i am shocked with geet's boldness at that part it became dream now 😆

i love maan craving geet giving up every time for his wishes what ever it may be

uff u making me all blushy re

lolzz maan taking revenge on adi and karan that was cool

ab mehendi bhi hogaya waiting for more

thanks for all pm's mahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

i soo much loving this story mahi

that was nice going you are doing good job also

sorry for being late i am not well and quite upset in last few days thats why delay

i love sangeet and pinky and adi act that sensore cut scene i am grining like idiot

ohh how sad u made that as maan's dream not fair but hope that dream will come true 😉 😆

all things they did actually i am shocked with geet's boldness at that part it became dream now 😆

i love maan craving geet giving up every time for his wishes what ever it may be

uff u making me all blushy re

lolzz maan taking revenge on adi and karan that was cool

ab mehendi bhi hogaya waiting for more

thanks for all pm's mahi

sparkle






hey don't say sorry for late comment because it hat filed i am big late 😉😆 glad you like update , took your own time for comment but always think that i am waiting for your comment

why you up-sate in last days


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Posted: 11 years ago
part 27
awesome...
lovely part dear...
cont soon dear...

PS - i like the second pic...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update adi karan is forget that they take panga with maan
adi is little afraid of maan but karan said dont worry
poor they not no that maan ka ten head monster brain
will eat kill them in his way
when they watched tv i just imagine their face
geet total jhali
maan said her his dream
she want to made it reality
marjawan

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update👏👏Maan had revenge...Poor Adi and Karan😆😆Muskan pic. no 2😊Thanks for the PM dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
oh no that was just a dream. i thought it is really happening with them😳
poor adi & karan, maan ne inn dono ka band baja diya🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
maaneet chupke chupke meeting

adi self thought
maan telecast
their bachlor prty cvideo
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi every one thanks for your love and support it is nice journey till today i update Dhadkan last parts today
feel sad 😭 to say but it is last part of my writing also
please don't ask any thing
your
Mahi


Dhadkan
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 28

adi mummer lo karo bachelor party , now you become bachelor because of this ,he just give pleading look to pinky but pinky just ignore him and say loudly out of room now , maan just give his famous Msk look to adi and pinky , adi just mummer ok beta now you won but tomorrow we have chance so wait for tit for tat Mr Msk ,maan just look to geet , like saying with his eyes , just more 24 hours Ms geet than you become MAAN ki Geet in all sense , maan gaze just make geet cheek red like apple

meera and pinky giggle on maaneet , that they cant hide their feeling their face say al things , after lesion meera and pinky giggle , geet turn to live but maan hold her hand and say both lady whose mouth open as O shape , you both closed your mouth or some insect went inside , both make face on maan comment ,meera give teasing smile to maan and say bro can I called dadi also meera don't you think about that all else or else you have to see live kiss of us , three gasp loudly with maan words , pinky just run from their and meera just slap on maan shoulder and say bro you become shameless in love

and went from their after give wink to geet

geet just turn her back and make baby face and start to talk with babaji ye kitane besharam ho rahe hai , he talk shameless , and also watch dream shameless , just than she feel something wet on her cheek , she look in mirror it is haldi , just than maan mummer in ear meri misty ko haldi to main hi sabse phele lagaunga na ...rahi bath besharmi ki to sari besharmi abhi shadi ke baad on our S...just than geet put hand on his mouth and just hug to maan maan just pick to her forehead , geet expecting on lips she make face , maan just don't make that face misty now kiss also after our marriage dear and he just went from their geet just hide her face in pillow and their her BG come with naughty grin


Three girl just start to fight with pillow, they are just talking and giggling next morning in early dadi just saw adi and karan in hall ,she just wake up them and ask what happen why you come hear ...adi and karan just start to say wo wo just than geet come their with pinky and meea say dadi we want to spend time with each other so we three sleep in adi bro room nothing else dadi

adi just mummer thanks to geet , geet nodded her head just than dadi order that all man went go to outhouse for haldi ceremony , it is only women are allowed in house , all went to out side, their msk already present in his haldi attired looking as usual handsome dadi , rano come along with women and start to applied haldi on maan , all are giglling just than karan saw rano took some haldi from maan face and mix in haldi bowl , he ask ma what is this , she just slap him and say karan , geet ko maan ki lagayi hi haldi lagegi na


Maan just bend his head to hide his emotions a thought that his haldi applied on geet brought so many naughty thoughts in his mind , meera say in low voice , control yourself naughty bro ...maan just give glare to her , all women went to geet room and applied haldi on her after that give her bath with milk Now she is already for her dream wedding with her life her maan

meera and pinky make her ready , geet sitting in front mirrior just than meera say hai , if bro is hear , they will get confuse phele shadi karni hai ya phele S... geet just hide her face in her plam , pinky and meera just hug her , meera went to ready and pinky also start to go just than geet hold her hand , geet hand was so ccold with worry pinky ask what happen geet ,


geet just say in low voice der lag raha hai

pinky - don't scare it is our love and desire which make us nervous dear and maan veerji is know how to handle you dear so don't worry he is matured person and if you scare like this it make him nevous na

geet - nodded her head

pinky -you trust maan veerji na

geet - more than babaji

pinky -than enjoy this moment it will your life long memory dear , just liv this moment geet

geet just hug pinky and say I will pinky I will

just than dadi and rano come their to took her in mandap along with karan and geet babuji , tear start to come in geet eyes but karan just geet don't cry warna make up kaharab ho jayega , bidai main hum crying ka program alage se rakhge na , geet just hug karan and say bro ...all start to laugh

They brought geet in mandap their maan sitting in mandap looking hot and handsome, just waiting of his better half their she come from steps , maan just froze in his place in bride dress geet just looking breath taking , he just looking her without blink his eyes , adi just put hand on his shoulder and say , stop look my sister like this

maan just bend his head , geet come and sit beside maan ,

geet dress and jewellery










maan with eyes say her beautiful , red hu come on geet face panditji start ritual of marriage maaneet marriage , both feel something change in their life good change , new hope , new dreams , new life and new responsibility with humsafer ,






panditji say imp of marriage that two people bond in most holy/pure relation of world , it binded two soul together their you have to share happiness , sadness ,wealth , pride with each other , trust and love is foundation of this relation , where you become one by wealth my mind and by body , it is journey of togetherness from body to soul


panditji ask to fill geet maang with sinddor and tied mangalsutra in her neck ,





maan just look to geet eyes with so much love and maan mark her as his dulhan in front of god in front of society after applying sindoor in her maang and tied mangalssutra in her neck ,



both stand for fare , maan just took geet hand in his hand and start to take fare , both become wife and husband after comlete 7 phere , both went to took blessing from dadi , geet parent and went near adi and pinky , adi want to stop , pinky say veeji , but maan stop her and say adi is big brother for me he is father figure in my life with that maaneet took blessing from them


adi just hug maan and say iwant to see happy in your life , and take care of geet she is your responsibility now , you got it , maan just nodded his head in yes , karan took all for lunch now it is more than 3.30


all come in lunch area , maaneet sit near each other , maan just looking to her watch , all know about his restleness , but all ignore him like they don't get it and all are busy in chit chat but two devil missing from their karan and meera , but maan is so lost he don't figer out , and he don't have idea ,about bidai , if they going back today itself to delhi or staying in geet house , staying in geet house is bad idea for maan because he know about this four devil


Maan , himself what maan how can you forget this imp thinks , now you cant ask dadi in front of all , you get golden chance to take your bride from away but you lost it , lagata hai SR to postpone karni padagi , ye dadi bhi to kuch blo nahi rahi hai , ager hum 1 hour main nikalte hai to there are some chance to my sr but dadi ...

maan just lost in his thought and his misty lost in his handsome face , she just looking to his face , without blinking her eyes , just than pinky mummer in geet ear

Choclate jasi sweet lag rahe na veerji , do you want to eat them


geet just nodded in yes but next moment she turn red , for her ans , she just bend her head , she so lost in maan and pinky took chance to pull her leg , just than maan ask with lot of couage , he don't want to show his despo


maan - dadi , what is next program


Dadi - make serous face and say ,its up to maan , now we can do anything , you have to do yourself


dadi double meaning words make maan more confused , he mummer , dadi ko yahi time mila hai puzzle puzzle kehelna ka , geet ke babji save me

precap

Maaneet SR ? hogy ke nahi hogi


( next part will be in some hour )

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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