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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




Maan and Geet will be married again and this is perfect to do...

the circumstances they were married no body enjoyed...

all are teasing Maaneet...sab dushman bann gaye hain unke pyaar ke...

now Geet have to go with her parents and she will be away from him until marriage...this is very exciting...this separation will make them crave for each other...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...





thanks for comment
dear hope you like upcoming track
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 18


she just pull geet and make her stand near maan and say with tear in eyes , we all are happy for you , bhabi you get diamond in your life I know he cant express his feeling with word , but he is man of action , bhabhi ...and she just bend to near them , and say in low voice , and his action we can see on your face , and your lips , geet just want to run from there ,because of shyness , maan give glare like meera ki bacchi , geet just , hug meera nd say thanks , di thanks ...


maan just admiring them , he was on 9 cloud , he want live every moment of their marriage he look to meera and softly mummer thanks , meera just nodded her head , all family member only discussing about their marriage , and maaneet lost in each other eyes , next day eng ,than sangeet and mehandi and than haldi and shaddi ... so next 4/5 days they cant stay in one room , and maan making face on that , meera just came to closed to him and mummer , Msk stop eat my bhahi with your eyes ...and wink to him , he just pull meera hair and say , stop to watch us meera ki bachi after some time pinky took geet in her room before going in room she watch to maan and saying with her eyes do something I don't want to stay away from you maan just his shoulder , like what shall I do , she make frown and went with pinky , where they chitchat for some time , pinky sleeping in geet , room , geet just lost in maan thought don't know when she sleep in night , after some time she felt some moment in her room and before she say anything some one closed her mouth with hand , and it is not maan


she so much fear , who is this person , where he drag me , how I will save myself , she shake like dry leaf all bad thought came in her mind , she want to protest but that person is more stronger than her tear start come in eyes , her heart only calling MAAN, MAAN but her word died in her mouth when she saw a man standing front of her ... she gasp as that man just pull her to himself and she landed on ...with thud ... in hug a gentle hug , she feel so happy that she got her life back , last few second just shake her , and when she get all this drama , she first give angry glare to maan and than turn to look that person who help maan , in this that is non other than , her brother Karan , she just start slap her , karan I kill I kill you , meri jaan hi nikal gayi thi , she just slapping him and he just running and try to not hit by geet , just than maan come from back and just pick her in his strong arm and say karan your job is finish , now you can go , I will look to this jungle billy ,karan , thanks jijaji nahi to ye jungle billy ... but jijaji , No Naughty , Naughty ha ...and wink to them ,maan just nodded his head in no and geet her mouth open in o shape ...








she want to say something but he just took her to terrace . which is fully decorated with flower candle etc , it looking like heaven first moon , light and diya and candle , make that place breath taking ... smell of flower , geet want to say something but stop by maan he just put his long finger on geet rosy lips , geet just lost in his touch ... maan bend near geet ear and huskily say , i want to confess something to you but you don't get up-sate or cry ok , promise me , geet just nodded her head , she know maan never hurt her


You know geet I am in love with one girl , geet world stop for moment so many thought come in her mind , like he is in force relation , he marry her because of pity etc etc , but her heart say don't geet give this reaction first hear him fully ...maan just continued one night i am coming from my office and my car stop near signal , I just watching hear and there when my eyes fell on that pari , my angle cloud in red dress , laughing full heartily I just forget to breath when I saw that beauty , she is so beautiful , like flower , innocent like kid , and her smile like waterfall , she just looking just out of world ... i feel so happy that i get my love , but ,but next moment I lost my first LOVE , geet , my first love , geet she is bride , she is bride of another , dadi say me that some time , destiny play with us and we have to fallow it, and you know geet this happen with me


Second time I saw her, like dead body, like life is far away from her, so lifeless , i just want to hug her took away all pain form her ...and you know in few days I got chance ,to weep her tear , to sooth her pain , to brought happiness in her life , she again become my life you know who is that girl ...maan ask geet , geet just looking him with confusion , she hurt with thought that another girl in maan life , maan first love maan got her mind state , he just brought near wall where , curtain is on , he just push that curtain and Geet Loudly Gasp Maannnji Ye tooo, ye to


yes geet it is you ,geet just cant hold herself ...she just hug him ,she want to hide in his hug her life her maan , maan took her in his hug and start to cress her back , there are silent both are not talking , but their Dhadkan are talking to each other Dhadkan Do dilo ki , which is become one yes , when geeet sobs stop he pull her chin to himself and nodded his head in No and weep her tear ...geet give smile to him just than he bend on his knee

geet yes winded in shock , yes he purposing her

Aab Hai Yahi Mera ArmaaN, Yuhi saada tu Hasti Rahe

Puri Karu Har Chahat Teri,

Tu Mujhse Aab Jo Bhi Kahe

Mera Sapna, Meri Baatein,

Tujhe Dekhe Meri AankheN

Tere Liye Hai PAGAL ye Mera MaaN

Janam janam jo saath nibhye ek aisa bandhan ban jao

Main ban jaon saans tumhari tum dil ki dhadkan ban jao

geet will you become my life , my bride , dhadkan of my heart ,geet fill so much emotional , she chock with emotions , she don't know how to react , it looking like fairy tale , she just bend on her knee ,meet maan eyes , their so much love and hope in his eyes , she just took maan lips in her rosy lips , tear falling from her eyes , and she just kissing her life her maan YES only HER maan

maan just shock with geet act , his shy geet he don't expect kiss from geet , he just took control of kiss and softly bite her rosy lips for entry , both lost in their world , when they feel breathless ,they part away from each other , now geet feeling shy to face maan , she now know maan tease her , her face turn red like cheery , poor maan blow away with kiss and now this red hu , he just slightly bite on her cheek , geet look him with shock and next moment closed her face with her hand , maan just pull her hand and took her in his hug and say geet I want to see you in this ...he gave one packet to her hand ,geet just took that packet and went to room near terrace for change

when she open that packet gasp come from her lips its saree , black net saree , beautiful word come from her mouth , but when she look blouse , she mummer babaji ye kay hai , ye jaha se start hua wahi kahatam hua , it is backless blouse , she wear it but feel so much shy to went front of maan , and she can't tie naught of blouse , she struggling with it and crushing babaji same time , a loud gasp come from her mouth when fingers touch her back she know who was he , she just closed her eyes , maan touch and hot breath making her crazy




she just run in terrace , maan just come near her and hug her from back and start to swing

Maula Ishq hai Khudaa, Duhai Deti hai juba,

Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke
Bolati sparsh he Baki muke muke

Dive lakho mannamadhe lagale lagale
Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke

it is silky moist everywhere

our silent touch speaking without any word

there are more than lakh lights in heart

it is silky moist everywhere

maan just start cares her long hand with his palm next his hand on her back that white skin of her making him crazy he just touching her so ..., which brought Goosebumps on geet skin

Maula Ishq hai Khudaa, Duhai Deti hai juba

Rang He saare tuzhe, ful mi kowale

Konti jaadu bholi zhali re kale,

Befikar mann he zhale, bhaan premache aale

Baware sparsh saare nave nave

Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke

Bolati sparsh he Baki muke muke - 2

this all color of yours ,and I am little bud

my mind become carefree from all when i get feeling of love

this new touch so new new

it is silky moist everywhere

our silent touch speaking without any word


geet just turn to him and start cares his face , his eyes , his lips with her soft hand , maan just grown with her nave touch ...

Won't you stay with me...Won't you be with me

No matter where I go..You are the one

Oh I Love you..baby I love you..

Jhelate halake halake pawasachya sari,

Aathaun ka tula re zhale mi bawri - 2

Befikar mann he zhale, bhaan premache aale

Sofe hoil sare tuzhya save

Daatale aahe reshami aahe dhuke dhuke

Bolati sparsh he Baki muke muke

i catch slowly rain drop

when i remind you I become mad

my mind become carefree from all when i get feeling of love

it become all easy with you

it is silky moist everywhere

our silent touch speaking without any word


maan just hug geet and geet don't do that or else I lost my control geet ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ek pal keliye karan ne tho darahi diya sab ko just loved maan's confession and yeh baath sunnkar geet ki he loves her from begining she is so happy. lovely moments
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome and very romantic part...
loved meera teasing maaneet...
oh poor geet waiting for maan to stop her...
but she doesnt know that maan planning big to be with her..
oh god karan ne tho darahi diya tha...
gosh maans confession was just dreamy...
geet response was just heaven for maan..
Waiting to see them getting married...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow kitna beautiful update thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
love maan perposal
and in response geet kiss maan
all the pics are nice
specially geet in black saaree
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
man you scared the hell outta geet and us
i thought kaun aa gaya
but it was just her brother and hubby
very naughty that
ahh so he told her about him falling in love with her
she was thinking he loves another
but it was her only
so he did manage to see her again
just as she requested
kya saree thi
man she was like hain back kahan gaya
ufff this is gonna test his control for sure
so cute right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful and Romantic update⭐️⭐️ 😳Thanks for the PM dear😃
Edited by jayshu17 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..maan proposing geet n saying she is his first love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just love it\
first i shock who is that guy but its karan n maan
maan confess his love to her
when he saw her how she became her life

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