Zehal-e-Miskeen - The Tale Continues - note pg 12 & blog link - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5 - Of Truths and Lies

He trekked to the cottage, the Kashmiri mountains standing tall and proud around him. The bitter chill of the piercing winter served to be brutal to most, but his soul was very much alight and blazing with her kiss.

She hadn't given him a chance to respond before she pulled away, realising what she had done. He had attempted to reassure her by reaching out for her hand, but her temporary recklessness had shaken her to the core; resulting her in pushing him out of the door, bolting it firmly shut.

He hadn't even had a chance to say goodbye.

The familiar female figure was noticeable from the window, and a ghost of a smile played on his lips as he watched her rush from the window. The door opened, and he was pulled into a hug.

"It is so good to see you," she muffled into his shoulder.

"You too, Naina."

...

"How is she?"

They were settled on the carpet by the fireplace, nursing small cups of chai. Naina sat facing the front; her husband on one side and brother in law on the other.

"She's not coping well. At all." Maan's gaze flickered to Dev, who stared down into the cup blankly.

"My heart aches for her. Every time I put myself in her shoes, I feel every fibre of my being clench." Naina's sympathy turned into disdain. "How could you do this to her?"

"She brought it upon herself."

"You meddled with her life."

"And you didn't? The root of the problem is you."

"Of course it is, just like everything else that goes wrong on the universe."

He stood up, placing the chai on the table. "I need some fresh air."

"Maan, wait!" Naina called after him, but he had disappeared through the archway.

She shot a cold look at Dev, who sighed and threw his head back against the armchair which he had been leaning against.

"I'm going to check on Ayaan," she said, taking her chai with her and leaving her husband to battle with the demons of his mind.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I though dev was with geet then now he's married 2 naina?!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ji 😳
I read the latest chapters and ...let me just reserve my place !! Since its my first to be the first to press the like button!! I should revel in the fact that its for u .. I have so much to say to you on all that you have written, but I shall come back at a humane hour and fill this space below ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry to do this again but I mean it as a compliment. Your writing reminds me so much of Zarin.
I love the way we see the characters but don't. It is a wonderful technique which is not easy in writing. Scenes as if thru different filtered glasses, sometimes distorted, sometimes clear; wonderful.

Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😲
is it more possible to make anyone fall in love with ur words and writing??

Awestruck...!!! 😳
no no...its just understatement...

WHoooshhh 👏

DEV- they "DEV' IL' " guy 😆 he is still alive... and naina...😕 she is his wife...

ill rephrase my statement...im curious "everyone's past" 😃

Naina.-- i dont know y...but i still wonder about ur identity...hasini?? nah...but..
anyway...


@avi darling... 😆 u r still guessing who is she?? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one...but super shocked!! Dev is also alive...and who is this new entry,?? naina??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
too much confused
isn't it dev married to geet??!!!
now naina!!!
maan is there with dev n naina??!!!
what is happening...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

I though dev was with geet then now he's married 2 naina?!


I did say there would be twists in the tale...

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Ji 😳
I read the latest chapters and ...let me just reserve my place !! Since its my first to be the first to press the like button!! I should revel in the fact that its for u .. I have so much to say to you on all that you have written, but I shall come back at a humane hour and fill this space below ...


I look forward to it, but you are giving me far more praise than I deserve. I'm humbled, and I thank you.

Originally posted by: dqno1

sorry to do this again but I mean it as a compliment. Your writing reminds me so much of Zarin.

I love the way we see the characters but don't. It is a wonderful technique which is not easy in writing. Scenes as if thru different filtered glasses, sometimes distorted, sometimes clear; wonderful.

Thanks for updating.


Being compared to Zarin is truly a honour, and Gehraiyan most definitely has inspired me with this story, along with many other writers and their stories. I'm relieved that the feel of the mystery behind the story is still very much prominent, so I can only thank you for your words of encouragement and support.

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

😲

is it more possible to make anyone fall in love with ur words and writing??

Awestruck...!!! 😳
no no...its just understatement...

WHoooshhh 👏

DEV- they "DEV' IL' " guy 😆 he is still alive... and naina...😕 she is his wife...

ill rephrase my statement...im curious "everyone's past" 😃

Naina.-- i dont know y...but i still wonder about ur identity...hasini?? nah...but..
anyway...


@avi darling... 😆 u r still guessing who is she?? 😆


You are far too kind with your words. The suspense has gotten the thread gripped, which is good - exactly the reaction I was after!

I wish I was Hasini! I miss her work terribly, but unfortunately I'm not. She is in a class of her own when it comes to telling tales.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

nice one...but super shocked!! Dev is also alive...and who is this new entry,?? naina??


Questions, questions! All part of the parcel, my dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon

too much confused
isn't it dev married to geet??!!!
now naina!!!
maan is there with dev n naina??!!!
what is happening...


I promise that everything will become clear eventually...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
brilliant updates..so many twists.

Dev is alive 😲

Dev is married to Naina 😲

Maan comes to meet them 😲


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