MG SS:Our Journey From Marriage To Divorce-part13..Pg 24--21/4/25

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Prologue:

Beautifully decorated bed for the wedding night of the newly wed couple.

The groom is already in the room sitting infront of the TV and watching cricket. He is so engrossed into it that he doesn't even notice someone has entered the room.

The bride who entered, doesn't look happy, she places the glass of milk on the table making sound

"THUD"

That distracts the groom, he gets up

"Oh, I'm sorry. Interesting match chal rahi te aur maine aap ko notice nahi kiya." He proceeds to switch off the TV

"Aap pade likae to ho na?" the bride asks arrogantly. That freezes the groom who was putting away the TV remote.

He turns towards his wife with a frown

"Ha. Kyu? Doubt ha? Kya mujhe certificates dikhaana chaye?"

"Pada likhe ho aur aap aise dikhte hain jaise aap sab kuchh jan te ho. Par shadi hone se pehle ladki ko ek bar pooch na chaye, ye aap zaoori nahi samji?"

"Tumne iss shaadi keliye haan kediya hai, isliye meri mamma pappa ne tumko pasand kiya hoga samaj kar tumse shaadi ke mai."

"Mathlab tumari mama papa pasand kiya iss liye aap ne shaadi ke! You didn't think it's your life and u have the right to take the decision of it, didn't you have this simple sense? "

"Teek hai meri pass nahi the, tum to mere pass aakar batana tha na ke tum ko meri se shaadi nahi karna hai!!"

"No one had the patience to listen to me nor they gave me a chance to speak. A girl needs her mother so that she can speak her heart out but I'm unfortunate that I don't have her. Dad didn't understand my love." she cries while saying this. Groom is listening to this silently, aur kay kar sakthi hai bechara!

"Dekhye, aap mujhse shaadi ke hogi, lekin meri maan sirf Dev hai. My father might have forced me into this marriage but I take it as my freedom. Agar insab kehne ke badh be aap ne force kiya tho...!"

The groom raises his hand and gestures her to stop.

"Tumhari tan milegi mann nahi, right? *pause* Vo sab to teek hai, aab tumhai kay chaye?"

"Divorce "

"That's it, right? Tum bohot takgai ho. Aab so ja kal bath kar lenge."

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I'm sorry, "the sunrise of my life"topic got posted twice. So had to post the other prologue now.


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Thank you ❤️

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Index:

Prologue (above)


Part 1

Part 2

Part 3


Part 4


Part 5


Part 6


Part 7


Part 8


Part 9


Part 10


Part 11

Part 12


Part 13


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Interesting story lookout forward

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Congratulations for new story ☺️

Waiting for reading

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Woww interesting. One of my favourite movie ♥️ imagining maan and geet in this story lead is very interesting. Congrats. Continue soon. With twist 😉

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Congratulations on another SS

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Curious Prologue


Is Geet unhappy that Maan

allowed his parents to select his bride

oh so she is in love with Dev

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this one was my fav

also hope they wont get divorced at the end...egaerly waiting for next

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Oh no

So geet loves dev is it but marries Maan??

Hmm

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