Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 14

Part-14

Din hawa ki tej raftar ki tarah gujar rahe the...maan aur geet ke beech ki duriyaan bhi kum ho gayi hai...aaj geet ka pehla Karwa chauth hai Geet jaldi se uthke niche jati hai jahan priya aur dadimaa geet ka wait kar rahe hote hain.

Dadimaa : aaiye geet bete

Geet dadimaa ke pair chute hai aur phir priya ke

Dadimaa : sadha suhagan raho

Priya : sadha suhagan raho aur khush raho. Yeh lejiye bete yeh aapki sargi

Dono milke sargi khate hai

Utne mai maan niche aata hai aur dadimaa usse dekh leti hai Maan dadimaa ko isharo mai bolta hai ki geet ko yahan se leke jao

Dadimaa : geet bete agar aapka khana ho gaya ho toh aap zara humare saath room tak chaliye

Geet : ji dadimaa

Dadimaa aur geet room mai chale jate hai Maan dinning table ke pass jata hai

Priya : arre maan aap yahan aur woh bhi iss waqt

Maan : maa woh mai yahan

Priya : maan aap saaf-2 kyun nahi bolte ki aap yahan kuch kahne aaye hai aur aap bhi geet ke liye varth rakhna chahte hai jaise geet aapke liye rakh rahi hai

Maan : ji maa

Priya : toh chalo aap kuch khalo iss se phale ki geet wapis aa jaiye Maan finish eating and goes back to room and sleep.

In morning Geet maan ke liye breakfast laga rahi hai jab maan waha pe aata hai...

Maan : geet ...yeh sab rehne do ...muje dair ho rahi hai...

Geet : Thoda sa hi kha lijiye...

Maan : tumhe ek baar m baat samaj me nahi aati kya..maine kha na muje dair ho rahi hai...

and he lefts pretending to be angry on geet. On the otherside geet apne kamre me jake rone lagti hai...

Annie : kya baat hai bhabhi...aap ro kyun rahe hai...

Geet : maine itne pyaar se nasta banaya tha maan k liye aur woh gusse me kuch khaye bina hi chale gaye...kitne gusse me the woh...

Annie : aap abhi tak Bhai ko samaj hi nahi sake...

Geet : kya matlab...????

Annie : woh aapko is tarah bhuka aur pyasa nahi dekh sakte...is liye unhone bhi subaah se kuch nahi khaya...

Geet : kya...main hi unhe samaj na payi...yeh mujse kya ho gaya...

Annie : Bhabhi muje aapki aankhoin me bhai ke liye bepanah pyaar dikh raha hai...aap meri ek baat manoge...

Geet: Kya..??

Anniee: aap aisa kariye...apni aankehin bandh kijiye...aur bataiye ki aap ko kya dikhai de raha hai...

Geet apni aankhein bandh karti hai...annie ko yaad aata hai ki woh stove pe dudh rakh ke aayi hai...woh kitchen me chali jati hai...geet apni bandh aankhoin se maan ko dekhti hai...

Geet's momolouge:

yeh kaise ho sakta hai...main rahul se pyaar karti hoon ...to aaj kyun mere khayal me sirf aur sirf maan dikhai dete hai...

Geet Jab apni aankhein kholti hai to samne maan ko dekhti hai...

Geet : aap...

Maan : woh ek file bhool gaya tha...tumne dekhi hai...kal raat ko maine yahi table pe rakhi thi...

Geet : haa maine kal dekhi thi aur almari me rakh di thi...abhi leke aati hoon...

Geet almari me dhundhne lagti hai...meanwhile maan geet ke ek dum piche jaake khada ho jata hai...

Geet : yeh mil gayi...

As soon as geet turns..wo maan se takra jati hai...maan pulled geet towards him from her waist..while geet was having goosebumps wid maan's proximity and touch...both were standing very close to each other...that they can hear each other's heartbeat...geet's heart was beating very loud...but both were lost in each other...maaahiii

Wid some noise from outside both came out from their lala land...

Geet's face was fully red...

Maan : geet ...meri file...

Geet : oh...yeh rahi...

Geet : suniye

Maan : jee...

Geet : woh aaj sham ko jaldi aaiye ga...

Maan : janta hoon...mehmaan aane se pehle aa jaunga...ab main chalta hoon...bye...

Geet : bye...shambhal ke jaiyega...

Maan: Hmmm..u 2 tkcr...

After maan left

Geet's self thought...

Geet jhalli...kaise kho gyi thi aj unki aankhon main...wo kya soch rahe honge...jhalli..stupid kahin ki...n ye dil...stupid kahin ka...bas unhe dekh te hi jor-2 se dhak-2 karne lgta hai...mujhe to lgta hai ki kahin ek din unhe dekh k bahar hi na aa jae...bt m kya karu...unki aankhon m dekhti hu to bs khud b khud kho jati hoon..pta hi nai chalta...aisa lgta hai jaise mujhe kisi ne hypnotize kar diya ho...aisa to mere saath pehle kbi nai hua...rahul ki aankhon m b m kbi nai khoyi...babaji ye mere saath kya ho rha...

Anniee's voice brought her thought's chain..

annie :bhabhi...aapko mom bula rahi hai...

geet : thik hai...tum chalo m ayi..

geet priya ke room me jati hai...

geet : mama aapne muje bulaya...

Priya: aao geet...yeh lo...aaj tumhe yeh lehnga pehnana hoga...tumhara yeh pehla karwachauth hai na...aur yeh gehne bhi lo...

Geet: thik hai mumma...main yahi pahungi...

Priya: ab chalo chal ke sham ki pooja ki taiyariyaan karte hai...

Geet : thik hai..aap chaliye m ye lehnga n jewellery room m rakh k aati hu...

Priya: geet chalo pooja ki saari prep to ho gyin..ab tum jao n thoda sa rest kar k ready ho jao...thodi der m pooja ka muhurat b hone wala hai...n uske baad guests b aane shuru ho jaaenge...to hame us se pehle pooja finish kar leni hai..

Geet : thik hai ma...aap bhi thodi der rest kar lijiye n uske baad ham pooja k liye milte hain...

Geet just came out from washrooom after getting freshen up tbi use neeche garden se kuch aawazein aati hain...geet apne room ki balcony se neeche dekhti hai..wahan anniee kisi ladke k saath kuch baatein kar rai thi...n kafi disturbed lag rai thi..

Geet's Monolouge:

Yeh annie waha pe kya kar rahi hai...aur woh ladka kaun hai...kya baatein ho rahi hai jise annie itni pareshan lag rahi hai...muje anniee se baat karni hogi...par is waqt nahi...abi anniee bahut disturb lag rai hai...pooja k baad poochungi anniee se...tab tak anniee ka mood b thoda theek ho jaega..abi jaldi se ready ho jati hu...

Geet strts getting ready..she was struggling wid the dori's of blouse of her lehnga...

Geet : Uff ab ye kya musibat hai..ye dori kahan chali gyi...mil kyu nai rai...

At the same time maan enters into the room...and he stood frozen at his place...seeing geet in lehnga and her milky white bare back..she was struggling with the dori's.

Geet was so lost in herself that she didn't knew when maan came...

Maan with thieve steps walk towards geet and holds her hand...geet when felt maan's hand over her's she stops struggling.

Maan: May I geet...

Geet nods her head in positive...

Maan was tieing the dori's of her blouse...n was planting small-2 kisses on her back...while geet stood still...she was so affected by his proximity and then he was planting kisses...she was feeling butterflies in her stomach and her heart was doing summer assault..maan completed her dori tieing along wid kissing.

Maan: Geet kya main tumhe ready kar sakta hu aaj..??

Geet: Aapka haq hai maan mujhpe...

Maan starts from her feet...

Maan made her wore payal...and palnted kiss on her ankle...while geet just holded maan's shoulder tightly...

Maan then made her wear bangles...and he kissed on her wrist while making her wear bangles...

He was making geet ready and at the time was kissing her...

Maan: Geet 2 min bas...

Geet nodes her head

Maan goes and brings a beautiful waist band...

Maan fixes geet's chunni..then make her wear waist band...he was taking his sweet time in tieing geet's waist band...and was making her finger's touch geet waist purposely...while tieing waist band he was palnting kisses and it was looking like he was tieing some kiss band and not wasit band..at last he palnted a deep kiss on her navel...making geet moan.

Geet was turning scarlet red...wid maan's touch and kisses.

While maan was grinning seeing his effect on geet.

Maan : Chalo geet sab kuch ho gya...ab bas ek cheez reh gyi..

Geet: Kya..??

Maan: Ek min...

He took a pinch of sindoor and filled her maang.

Maan : Ab tum puri tarah se ready ho gyi ho.

Geet : Maan aaj maine aapke liye traditional kapde nikale hai...aap jaldi se taiyaar hoke niche aa jaiye...mehmaan aate hi honge... n aapka towel maine washroom main rakh diya hai...

Maan (holds her hand): geet ...ek min...he goes near her and plant a small kiss on her forehead...and says..geet bahut sundar lag rai ho tum aj...

geet blushes and leaves from their...

While going towards pooja room she was thinking about their moments of sometime ago...she was blushing while thinking about those moments...

Ye mujhe kya ho rha hai...?? Kyu har waqt mere kahyalon main sirf maan hi rehte hain..?? Unke choone se mujhe gosebumps kyu aate hain..?? Mera dil zoron se kyu dhadkne lgta hai..?? Aisa to mere saath pehle kbi nai hua...wid maan i feel different...kahin mujhe maan se pyaar to nai ho rha hai..

Whereas in Maaneet's Room

Maan : mai pagal ho raha hoon tumhare pyaar mai geet I love you

Geet enters pooja room...where Priya and anniee were already there..

Priya: Waah...!! Meri bachhi kitni pyari lag rai hai...bilkul pari jaisi...kisi ki nazar na lge meri bachhi ko..she places a small dot of kajal behing her ear...

Anniee: Sach m bhabhi u r looking breathtaking...

Geet: Thank you ma...thank you aniee...chalo now let's start the pooja...

They do chauthmata and lord ganesh's pooja..

After doing aarti...geet prays

Hey chauthmata...hey ganeshji..bhagwan ji..plzz mere maan ko lambi aayu (age) dena..and mere parivaar m hmesha sukh-shanti bani rahe...mujhe apna ashirvaad dijiye...

After a while guests start coming...everyone strt praising geet for her beauty..some were praising her wholeheartedly while some were jst faking..while some were jealous of her beauty...

Everbody moves towards terrace...

Thodi der m chand b nikal aata hai...sabhi suhaganein..chaand ki pooja karti hain..uske baad apne-2 husbands ki.

Geet maan ki pooja k baad..maan geet ko pani pilata hai aur jane hi wala hota hai ki...

Geet : suniye...aap pani nahi piyenge...

Maan : tum bhool rahi ho vrat mera nahi tumhara hai...

Geet : lekin aapne to subaah se kuch nahi khaya...ab yeh pani pijiye aur jaldi se neeche aaiye main khana lagva deti hoon...

Geet maan ko pani pilati hai.

Priya : maan aap geet ke liye koi gift nahi leke aaye kya

Maan : laya hoon na mom mai dad jaise thodi na hoon

Ram : mere jaise matlab

Maan : aab dad aap mom ke phale karva chuth ke din gift lana bhul gaye toh mai kya karun

Ram : yeh yeh baat tujhe kisne bola tujhe

Maan : hai koi

Priya : chod maan who sab phale meri bahu ko gift de

Maan : ji maa

Maan take's out a beautiful ring which was simple yet elegant and make geet wear it

Priya : maan yeh kya itni simple ring

Geet : maa yeh simple nahi hai balki iss mai mera aur maan ka name likha hai

Priya : dikha It was written maan ki geet

Priya : arre wah maan loved ur choice beta Chalo aab sab

Geet : thank u maan

Maan : geet tum apne hi pati ko thank you bol rai ho..?? Not Done...Waise tumhe ring achi lgi na..??

Geet: Haan maan..ring bahut hi sundar hai..

sab log khana khake apne apne ghar chale jate hai...maan bhi apne kamre me chala jata hai...geet abhi bhi kitchen me kuch kam kar rahi hoti hai...thodi dair bad geet apne kamre me jati hai jahan maan khidki ke pass khada hota hai...

Geet : kya baat hai...aap abhi tak soye nahi...

Maan : geet ...tumhe kaise pata chala ki maine subaah se kuch nahi khaya...

Geet : aapki patni hoon...aapse jyada aapko janti hoon...lekin aaj me aapse bahot naraz hoon...

Maan : kyun...

Geet : kyun nahi bataya ki aap ne bhi vrat rakha tha...

Maan : agar bata deta to kya tum muje vrat karne deti...agar meri patni meri lambhi zindagi ke liye yeh vrat kar sakti hai to mera bhi farz banta hai ki main apni patni ki lambhi zindagi ke liye vrat karu...ab galti ho gayi...aainda se tumse kuch nahi chupaunga...ab to maff kar do...

Geet : ek shart pe...main aapko mafi de sakti hoon...agar aap zindagi bhar aisi hi mera saath dete rahe to...

Maan : vaada

Geet : chaliye bohat dair ho gayi hai so jate hai

Maan : haan kal subha meri ek important meeting bhi hai

Geet : goodnight maan

Maan : goodnight geet

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