TRULY...MADLY..DEEPLY - Updated Chap 5 - Pg 27

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Hi Guys...
HERE IS MY NEW SS :
THE DEPTHS AND INTENSITY OF LOVE VARY FROM PERSON TO PERSON... AND THE DEPTHS OF VEERS LOVE WAS SO POWERFUL AND ALL CONSUMING THAT HE FEARED THE PERSON WHO COULD MAKE THE MISTAKE OF GETTING IN HIS WAY...
IT WAS QUITE SIMPLE REALLY...
MAYA BELONGED TO VEER.. SHE WAS HIS AND HE WAS HERS.
THIS IS A STORY OF A MANS LOVE FOR A WOMEN. A MAN WHO COULD GO TO ANY LENGHT AND INSANITY TO OBTAIN THAT LOVE. ITS A STORY OF A WOMEN TORN BETWEEN HER HEART AND HER HEAD...
THIS IS AN INTENSELY DEEP LOVE STORY OF MAYA AND VEER...
VEER
MAYA
WHAT DO YOU THINK??😉
HUGS
SHAHI
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LYRICS MAULA MERE MAULA - FILM ANWAR

Aankhein teri - kitni haseen

Your eyes, so beautiful,

keh inka aashiq,mein ban gaya hoon

that I have become their lover.

mujhako basa le, in meh tu

Give me place in these eyes.

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Veer

I hope you are dressing warm, jai saw on the news how bad the weather is in London. You will be pleased to know I made your favourite chocolate cake today' and unnathi finished it. Yes, and i gave her the recipe so when you are back she can spoil you. By the way I should warn you dadi is very angry with you better be prepared' for some serious apologies. 😆😉

I know you have been waiting for my reply and please don't be angry with me. I have just been really busy' busy thinking so let me not drag this. I will keep it honest and simple. I have been doing a lot of thinking after your last letter'. YOUR PROPOSAL. Its given me a clear perspective on everything. At first I thought it was a joke of some sort, I thought you found a gorgeous English lady who has swept you off your feet

but your second letter proved me wrong' and it made me realise I am not the one for you

In fact I think even your feelings are wrong, we don't love each other, Love is too strong a word to use and marriage is a definite NO. I have just become a habit you were accustomed to. It happens we practically grew up together. I mean we are just good friends an when I said I loved you I do but only as a friend.

I am sorry I can not accept your proposal, I can not spend my life with some one I don't love' While I will always be obligated to you and your family for taking us in, it's a sacrifice I don't need to make. Its not like we didn't pay our dues, we worked for the roof over our head and the food we ate and now I cant do this anymore. I want to live and experience life and I can not do it by living in your home. Baba, jai and I will not be here when you get back next week.

This is my last letter to you. Thank you for being a good friend, I know you will understand. Please don't try to find me, I need to do this.

Take Care

Maya

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Its not like we didn't pay our dues, we worked for the roof over our head and the food we ate and now I cant do this anymore. I want to live and experience life and I can not do it by living in your home. WHAT?? CANT DO WHAT ANYMORE?

Love is too strong a word to use and marriage is a definite NO. I can not spend my life with some one I don't love' SOME ONE YOU DON'T LOVE' OBLIGATION, SACRIFICE??

Thank you for being a good friend, I know you will understand' UNDERSTAND WHAT EXACTLY ' GOOD FRIEND. I WANT TO HEAR THE WORDS FROM YOUR MOUTH

He read the letter again as if to make sure it really was real''. Rage deep within him building. His mind was having a discussion of its own and soon he was filled with so many questions, questions that he needed answers to. His jaws tightened as his eyes filled with anger and through gritted teeth he dialed a no'.

'Mumbai.. tonight'

'But sir its not'.

' I don't give a damn, I SAID TONIGHT'

IF THIS WAS MEANT TO BE SOME SORT OF A JOKE' ITS VERY BAD ONE MAYA !!!

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TID=3564805&TPN=27 - Chapter 5 - Page 27
Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooow shahi😳.ur new ss.like got a jackpot.😃

loved d prologue👏.mmm i think veer has proposed maya☺️

(y veer and maya instead of uday and manyata).but maya

thinks dat he proposed her due to some sort of sympathy

or may b he is confused about his feeling for her or smthg

else.only u knows.for dis reason she is leaving him 😭.and y

did she said in letter dat she wont b able to live life as she

want if she marries him. she is confused wid her own feelings.

now iam also confused.


loved d title TRULY DEEPLY MADLY👏.so i can guess it is going to

b a story depicting true deep and mad love of two persons.


continue soon.desperately waiting

Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow looking forward to read this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Supa Fantaboulous... thats all i can say.
I am already one of your biggest fans for both of your stories and this new story coming from you...
Its going to be epic... cant wait
oh god and shirtless uday i mean veer😳 what a sight❤️
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Loved the concept congrats Loved the prologue can't wait to read more thanks for the pm
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awesome loved it jiji awwwnn cho cute prologue nd chappy one omg y did she refuse her proposal plzz continue asap thkx for da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG.. This is seriously brillianta and supafantabolous.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Just read the letter. superb sha and your title is perfect i can already feel the intensity
of this story from just that and veer goddamn he is FINE, i was like in ashish heaven for a while and maya is beautiful and the quotes. omg i just want you to continue asap, veers anger after reading the letter, maybe manyata was forced to write the letter or seriously does she not feel the same way??
well like veer i too have many questions and i cant wait for you to unravel them.. once again sha brilliant piece of writing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woah,,...m tooo excited for this di...
plz plz continue soon...loved the start
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I Have got two words for this concept
Mind Blowing

Love it
It is true that each person is different
no one is exactly the same
hence the way a person expresses his/her love differs
So does the depth , intensity of Love

The Title itself is very catchy

Prologue was lovely
Why Maya instead of Manyata??
OR is Maya going to change her name to Manyata after Moving out
Same question regarding 'Veer'

anyways continue ASAP
Thanks for PM

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