Tuj mein rab dikta hain.PUNIR FF PT 14 PG 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tuj Mein Rab Diktha Hain

This is my first attempt in writing a ss😊😊😊. arvi fans please avoid reading this as some might not like it. as far as punir fans concerned tell me whether i should continue😊. the story starts from today's episode.

In the court onir is proven guilty and has been banned from practicing his profession. Sachin, manav and are shocked onir is devastated and prays to his durga maa to give him strength unknowingly, tears were pouring from his eyes. All his dreams are shattered in a moment. He cant place anything happening around him. His vision has become blurred. All he can hear was that his license has been cancelled. On the other hand purvi didn't know what to do and say and she has been crying all along after hearing the verdict. Her worries increased after seing onir standing like a statue, his face showing no expressions. purvi felt responsible for the whole mess created around everyones's life. she cant see onir's pain. Her pain doubled after seeing tears in onir's eyes. She cursed herself for spoiling onir's life. A person, who without any expectations was the reason for her happiness is surrounded by sorrows only because of her, she remembered the happy, content, kind hearted onir in Kolkata who was helping everyone without expecting anything back. His life had no sorrows. He had spread happiness wherever he went. I found my aai in him, I have found a long lost friend in him, he was like raindrops on the parched land in my life. I still don't know how I would have been received by this world when they had known about my pregnancy. But I was blessed, cause a savior called onir came into my life who took away my fears, my nightmares, my worries, my insecurities, my awkwardness , my sorrows and replaced everything with happiness only happiness. You dreamt of having our baby together. You have never asked about my past or about the child's father. You accepted me with all my flaws. You were there all through my troubles but I have given you only pain, worries, sorrows, shame. Now because of me you have lost your profession which you considered very precious. People were right, I am a bad omen to everyone. But why did you listen to me onir, why did you married me,you stood by my side when the whole world was pointing their fingers at me. Why? Why? Why? All these thoughts were going in purvi's mind and she started to cry even more and she asked why onir ? why? She could feel her body tremble. When her mind was processing these things arjun had come there and he called purvi. Purvi couldn't able to overcome her emotions hugged arjun and cried. She cried her heart out. While crying she whispered why onir? Why? On the other hand onir regained his control and he searched his wife but to his shock he found purvi hugging arjun.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandithajeru

Tuj Mein Rab Diktha Hain

This is my first attempt in writing a ss😊😊😊. arvi fans please avoid reading this as some might not like it. as far as punir fans concerned tell me whether i should continue😊. the story starts from today's episode.

In the court onir is proven guilty and has been banned from practicing his profession. Sachin, manav and are shocked onir is devastated and prays to his durga maa to give him strength unknowingly, tears were pouring from his eyes. All his dreams are shattered in a moment. He cant place anything happening around him. His vision has become blurred. All he can hear was that his license has been cancelled. On the other hand purvi didn't know what to do and say and she has been crying all along after hearing the verdict. Her worries increased after seing onir standing like a statue, his face showing no expressions. purvi felt responsible for the whole mess created around everyones's life. she cant see onir's pain. Her pain doubled after seeing tears in onir's eyes. She cursed herself for spoiling onir's life. A person, who without any expectations was the reason for her happiness is surrounded by sorrows only because of her, she remembered the happy, content, kind hearted onir in Kolkata who was helping everyone without expecting anything back. His life had no sorrows. He had spread happiness wherever he went. I found my aai in him, I have found a long lost friend in him, he was like raindrops on the parched land in my life. I still don't know how I would have been received by this world when they had known about my pregnancy. But I was blessed, cause a savior called onir came into my life who took away my fears, my nightmares, my worries, my insecurities, my awkwardness , my sorrows and replaced everything with happiness only happiness. You dreamt of having our baby together. You have never asked about my past or about the child's father. You accepted me with all my flaws. You were there all through my troubles but I have given you only pain, worries, sorrows, shame. Now because of me you have lost your profession which you considered very precious. People were right, I am a bad omen to everyone. But why did you listen to me onir, why did you married me,you stood by my side when the whole world was pointing their fingers at me. Why? Why? Why? All these thoughts were going in purvi's mind and she started to cry even more and she asked why onir ? why? She could feel her body tremble. When her mind was processing these things arjun had come there and he called purvi. Purvi couldn't able to overcome her emotions hugged arjun and cried. She cried her heart out. While crying she whispered why onir? Why? On the other hand onir regained his control and he searched his wife but to his shock he found purvi hugging arjun.

😲 nice u also gtr writter 👏👏👏
plz continue...dear i wanted to read future track as ur POV...
once again 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tarza

Will Onir turn negative now???

no he never c onir if thot purvi love arjun still so he decided reunite arvi bt not turn in negative so...
plz don think negative abt onir...n also punir...dey made for eachother...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati86

no he never c onir if thot purvi love arjun still so he decided reunite arvi bt not turn in negative so...
plz don think negative abt onir...n also punir...dey made for eachother...😃

Oh! Then it's okay.
Nice story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati86

no he never c onir if thot purvi love arjun still so he decided reunite arvi bt not turn in negative so...
plz don think negative abt onir...n also punir...dey made for eachother...😃

dont forget guys im a punir fan😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice start👏...keeps continue😳 and please pm me when u updates it😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tuj Mein Rab Dikta Hain

At the deshmuk's house, ovi is restless. Few minutes back she was informed about onir's arrest. She don't know why she is feeling bad for onir. Her mind was against onir but her heart supported onir. Finally giving up her anger she went near bappa and prayed for the well being of onir.

AT THE COURT

Onir was shocked seeing purvi and arjun hugging eachother but couldn't hear anything they were speaking. He couldn't process anything that's happening around him. He went outside from the court room. On the other hand , purvi became aware that she was hugging onir and withdrew her hug. She turned around and searched onir but couldn't find him.arjun suggested that he may be waiting outside . they both went outside and saw onir crying on soham's shoulder. Soham didn't expect this action of onir, he felt very bad for onir and wanted to console him but didn't know how. He cannot find the proper words to console him. He became stunned. All these years he was seen as goon, street dog by others but archana, varsha and purvi were exceptions among them as they considered him as their son and brother but onir was the person apart from the three ladies who respected him and loved him. He had spent just a day with onir but felt like he knew him for a long time. If onir had wanted, he could have avoided talking to me considering my background but he never cared about it . he believed that im also a good person. soham found his cheeks wet and realized that he was crying. He consoled onir that nothing will happen to him and he will support him throughout his troubles. Then he saw arjun and purvi approaching them. Arjun was taken aback seeing onir ion this condition and he questioned god why does he punish god men like onir. He apologized to onir was coming late as he got stucked up in the traffic. He consoled him that they can appeal further in the respective court. Onir gave faint smile to them. Soham told that they should go back home.

AT THE DESHMUK'S HOUSE

Ovi was shocked after knowing about onir's verdict. She very well knew that onir loved his profession very much and she also witnessed his treating abilities during her pregnancy period. He was really a gifted person. he had helped her to come out of her shell and become a matured person. if I hadnt become that mature during the pregnancy time, by now ,after knowing all the truths, she would not be standing here where she is now. If I were the old ovi ,I would never coped up with the situations and im sure I must have taken a very bad decision. But how could onir betray her, she trusted him the most. She did follow what ever he asked her to. I considered him as my brother . ovi consoled herself that she should not cry anymore. She decided to meet onir cause she want console her brother.

NOTE: IM TRYING TO SEE OVI IN A POSITIVE WAY CAUSE I DON'T CONSIDER AS BAD CAUSE ANY NORMAL WOULD BEHAVE LIKE HER (EXCEPT THE MARRIAGE FIASCO) I ALWAYS WANTED TO SEE THIS SIDE OF OVI SO I TRIED TP PEN IT DOWN.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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god i just loved it continue soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice plz continu...clap for u vandita grt superb job...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you guys for encouraging me😊

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