Tuj mein rab dikta hain.PUNIR FF PT 14 PG 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
wow...really awsome and emotional update ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

now i want purvi to find onir and confess her feelings to him...๐Ÿ˜ณ

continue soon.
thanks for pm.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
mindbloinggg work...๐Ÿฅณ
bt i sad u separet punir...bt i knw very well u reunite dem very soon...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Simply awesome..Onir is a gem ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow awesome update "VANDU DEAR" as always๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ ,so sorry for late reply ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ,Please updated soon as possible for you because i am eagerly waiting for your next update๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ... THANKYOU so much for PM "VANDU DEAR"๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ ...!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wer ur 7th part off ff dear m egarrly waitingh vandu dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends thanx for encouraging me and bearing with my writing. from the upcoming parts you all will witness three more characters revolving around onir. their chracter sketch is given below

dolly : best friend of onir. studied with him in college. a kind hearted girl. runs a NGO for children in delhi. during college days she had a crush on onir. she also runs her father's business.

divya : childhood friend of dolly and a partner in her NGO. she is the only person who is aware of dolly's feelings about onir.

dhilip : onir's college friend and managing the NGO.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

TUJ MEIN RAB DIKTA HAIN

All were shocked listening to ovi but on the other side onir is sleeping unaware of the happenings. He wanted to forget everything and start his life afresh. He couldn't think anything. He slept cozily on the large bed. He woke up hearing the knocking sound.

Onir: come in.

Dolly: are you sure? ( carrying a tray having two coffee mugs and biscuits) and by the way , good evening.

Onir: dolly, whats the need to bring these here. You can send someone to call me downstairs. And did you say good evening? Did I sleep so long? No doubts that I have headache now.

Dolly: yes mr. sleepy head. I wish I could sleep like you. I thought I could wake you up with a bucket of water like you used to do to us.

Onir: ah! You still remember that? Those were golden days. Why do you take trouble in bringing tea. I can walk downstairs.

Dolly : I didn't know that you could walk. Just stop complaining like a small baby and have your coffee.

Onir: ( took the coffee mug and smiled at her) still you are the same. Thought you might have changed a bit atleast.

Dolly : what wrong with me. Im perfectly fine.

Onir: yes, you are perfectly fine. Still the same old monkey.(started to laugh)

Dolly: even you didn't change. You will never leave a chance to tease me ( took the pillow and started hitting onir)

Onir: ok ok, let me have my coffee

Dolly : still afraid of me? Excuse accepted

Onir : oh my god !!!!!! this coffee is horribleโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.

Dolly :onir , how dare you ? you are making fun of my coffee. I have never been to the kitchen all these years but for your sake I made coffee and even I got a burnt scar in my hand. But here you are teasing my coffee.

Onir : don't get angry. Im just playing with my friend. Do you remember ? during our college days, you used to make coffee for me. Even today it taste the same. Hereafter I will be able to drink coffee made by you.

dolly :helloโ€ฆ.. don't dream. Im not your servant. You have never changed. You always use me to get your work done.

Onir : that's why friends are there for. A friend in need is a friend indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dolly : that's why all these days you didn't call me right? I mean how could you do this onir? So many things have happened in your life so far and not even once you did think of me. You could have called me atleast but you didn't. during our college we were called as the inseparables but now we are like complete strangers. Is this called your so called friendship. You never cared about my feelings. You always like to hurt me. ( started to cry)

Onir : dolly , im sorry please don't cryโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ please try to understand me.

Dolly : first you understand me onir, do you know how worried I was after seeing in news that you were arrested? I was searching for you and atlast I found you walking on the road like a pauper. Do you know how horrified I was? You used to call me as your best buddy but now I have become a stranger in your life.

Onir: im sorry dolly. Please forgive your stupid friend. Sorryโ€ฆโ€ฆ.

Both unable to control their feelings hugged eachother and cried for a longtime.

Onir was happy that he got his best friend by his side now.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.! Again am the first one to comment :) it was just mindblowing . Make purvi found onir fast so that she can realise her love towards onir by watching the inseperable bonding btw onir and dolly... U have done a gr8 job by including this extraa characters... All through i wanted little punirlious scene but this was also nice... Now pls update the next part soon, Dnt make as wait so much..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice part...
plz continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TUJ MEIN RAB DIKTA HAIN

AT SULOCHANA'S HOUSE

All were shocked listening to ovi. For sometime they were confused whether it is the same ovi who was angry on the trio.

Manav : ovi , are you alright? Do you even understand what you spoke now?

Ovi : don't worry papa im alright. I know what im doing and for the first time im doing something which makes sense.

Manav : but ovi are you sure that you are making the right choice? Both my daughters are important to me. I want both of you to be happy.

Ovi : all these days you have supported me even when I was wrong. But today you are not helping me to do the right thing. I want to amend my ways. Please help me in this mission.

Manav : I will support you in your decision. Afterall , purvi has sacrificed so much for this family. But its upto arjun and purvi.

Ovi :thanks papa. I will speak to them.

Ovi went to check purvi and saw that she was sleeping and so she decided not to disturb her.

She went to see arjun who was sitting with pari. He was totally taken aback by the entire fiasco.

Ovi: arjjun . I wanted to tell you,,,,,,

Arjun: ovi please , please don't start again. Let me speak first. Im happy that you did realize your mistakes. Im also happy that you understood purvi. Thanks for forgiving us in pari's fiasco. But I feel hurt that you couldn't feel my love for you.

Ovi : I know arjun. You love me as a friend. You and purvi are meant to be. Please accept it. Its for everyone's betterment.

Arjun: just stop it ovi. What do you guys think of me? Do you girls think that im a puppet to play with?. All are worried about you and purvi. Have you guys even thought what im going through , what I feel. You and purvi have messed up my life. Just listen , im going to lead my life according to my wish. Neither you or purvi have got the rights to decide my life on my behalf. Just let me breathe. Stop toying my feelings. Let me live my life.

Ovi : but arjun listen to me.

Arjun : im done listening to the sister duo.

With that arjun left the house .

Manav : I think arjun wont listen to us.

Ovi : no papa he will. I think that he just need some time. He cant stay angry on us for a long time. He even left pari with us.

Manav : but what about purvi?

Ovi : I will talk to her. Don't worry papa.

At dolly's house :

Onir is sitting on the couch. Now he is living in a luxurious house of his friend. He remembered his college days with dolly and a smile crept on his face . he had always discussed with dolly his desire of opening a NGO for children and to his wonder, dolly has achieved it. He is really overwhelmed to see his best buddy after a long time and also feeling very proud of her achievements so far. But his happiness is short lived because he cannot share this happiness with his mishti. His eyes are longing to see her angelic face , hear her sweet voice. He is complete only when he is around his mishti. He is feeling suffocated without her presence. He feel soul less now. He want his soul back , his purvi back. Onir remembered his moments with purvi. Their first meeting , his confession, their life at Kolkata. Tears were flowing from his eyes. He wanted to see her face. He took his purse and saw her photo in it.

Onir : mishti '''.. im sorry that I have left you. You know what ?I am the one who is suffering a lot because of my decision. Im going through hell here. I miss you a lot mishti . I don't even know whether I could surviv e fom now on. I just want you to have a happy life. He kissed the photo and cried even more.

At karanjkar's house :

Purvi is just sitting on her bed and staring at the wall. She feels hollow. Its like someone has sucked out her whole life from her. Yes without onir she is lifeless.once again she has become an orphan. She feels completely wrecked.she wants to end her life but could do because she knows that onir would be shattered if she takes this decision. He took the letter wrote by onir and started to cry .

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