THE LOCKET(3), MG FF, thread 4 link pg1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

oiii dhinkchika dhinkchika.!!

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thread no.3 !!!! Yayy !!

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Congratulations ... 🤗

This is for many more to come...
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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Avi I love you for this Dedication my dearest Angel 🤗

Coming to the update, I guess I have already told you that I like this style pf writing where in each part we get a sneak peak into the other characters of the story.

Adi-pinky... south meets north love story reminded me of two states only with a Avi-style tadka... 😆

Adi's dialogue of how the whole Indian map can be represented by them with Rosgolla & VadaPav, had me grinning ... I love Vada pav, its lifeline here in Mumbai. 😃

Loved this sweet si love story with many hiccupps in between, right from the man needing some guts & the girl needing to just let her see through her relations... 👏 Great way of introducing the characters. The convo which was one sided... was very well worded & combined that the other sided talks could be easily understood. This looks easy biut when you must've tried putting words to it & actually excuting it, it must have taken a hell lot of efforts.. kudos to you for it. 👏

Maan & Geet ... What I'm guessing is Geet couldn't come to meet Maan on his last day, farewell day to see him off. She must've gone to HP for her family issues & couldn't come. While he felt she on purpose didn't come or else he wanted some answers form her on this party, with Pinky's info of problems on that day while traveling he had hope coming back which his misunderstanding ruined all in the prologue. ... Now I can keep guessing but will wait for you to present it all in your style. I'm sure you've planned ity in much better way. 😊

Sujal... 😳 Liked his brotherly concern & love for Pinky. Guessing he too has issues in his married life. I agree with his POV as Adi needs to stand up for his love & declare it out in the open.

Liked how so many Love stories are being brought together along with all running on same plane prallely. 😃

Next is my fav... second leads... Dev-Tara... 😳

Waiting for more... 😊

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj
yay

oyye congrats!!

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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir
oyye congrats!!

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thankyou ji thankyou!! 🤗

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

thankyou ji thankyou!!🤗

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj
abb me chali. :|

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

North South Love story? Romba Nalla irukku😆
Ignore my lame attempt at Tamil though.
The one sided conversation had thrown a lot of light into three characters here. Maan, Pinky and Adi.
He might have planned to tell her how he feels about her or at least talk to her on the farewell party isn't it? Did she not come or something else happened which dampened his mood?
I will wait to find out :)
Sujal is a concerned brother and I quite feel for him. Had it been me in his place, and have seen my sister falling in love for a person, I would be as concerned as him. It is normal isn't it to want your siblings to have all the love and happiness in the world even if you don't.
I always had a thing for North South love stories and I am glad to have one to follow here. Lub you Avi and congrats on new thread🤗

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Present ma'am! Succeeded in reaching the class before the next lecture began! 😆

First of all, let me tell you that I haven't had a chance to listen to the song yet. I'll listen to it and then let you know about my opinion on it, okay?

This Adi is... I won't say confusing, but I'm unsure of the kind of guy he is. He seems like a great friend to Maan and with Pinky, he's a usual boyfriend. But thinking from Sujal's point of view, I think he has the strongest point. Agreed that brothers become protective of their sisters when the girls get into relationships, and they are cynical towards the guy that their sister likes, but still seeing from an onlooker's eye, we get a better judgment since we aren't emotionally attached to that person. Like Pinky is attached to Adi so much that she cannot even think on the lines that her brother is thinking.

Putting Adi's personality aside, there was one thing in this chapter which irks me to no end. No, not something about the chapter but something in the chapter. The differentiation between castes and creeds. Not accepting the person just because if the family he/she is born into is utterly unfair. I feel like shaking some sense into those parents who do not accept a son/daughter-in-law because they don't belong to the same darned community! Come on!! Why would you place your so called naak in society higher than the your own kin's happiness?! Oops! I think I got a little carried away. 😆

Hmm... The mystery surrounding Maan and the change in his demeanour from a love-struck teenager to a man who seldom speaks, is getting a little clearer. 😊

At the end, I feel a little sad for Sujal, for the way he's suffered in his marriage, for the way he doesn't want his sister to suffer and for the way his sister can't understand what message he's trying to get across.

Thanks for updating Avi! 🤗
*Silly me* Forgot to congratulate on the new thread. 😆
Congratulations! Now you get how much loved this story is? 😊

Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago