Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD)

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> My life's mistakes

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hi I'm Maan, Maan Singh Kurrana'. I'm bored. In my 26 years of life I have never been so bored. I'm lying doing absolutely nothing. So I've decided to walk towards the light which seems to call me for the past few weeks' so I moved my self towards the door of the hospital room which has been my home for the past 3 months.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hello son I heard someone call me.. I looked at the direction of the sound and found an old man sitting and patting on a seat next to him for me to occupy. Ok, what can go wrong. Just for sometime. I thought sitting down. So where are you planning to go son? Asked, the elderly man with a smile on his face. Usually I'd just glare at anyone questioning me, but somehow i dint mind this question'. Nothing much just going towards the light I said pointing towards the light. You do understand that once you walk through that you'd never come back here? Questioned the man.Ya I guessed that before..</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">So you don't want to come back or live?</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Not really. As you can see I have no one in this place waiting for me. So I just</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Why is that so son' do you want to share it with me?</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hmmm why not.. so are you u really interested in listing to my life story? no wait, actually I'd love to tell you the story of <font size="3">my life's mistakes</font> if you'd like to listen' I said thoughtfully'</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hmmm I think I'd love to hear it son.. so lets get hearing'.</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I saw him making himself relaxed on his seat. Mean while where shd I start I thought' shall I start with my love or marriage or betrayal' hmm I thought'</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ok here I go'</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> My story starts on the day of my parents 4th year ceremony, the day I read their letter which asked me to build a hospital in hoshiyarpur. I couldn't deny this so I left to that place taking my jeep.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Today when I think abt it.. I surely curse the thought' here began my series of mistakes</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ok this is the introduction. as usuall it'll have grey stuff in it as i'm the writer.. This ff is Maan's POV on his life as he narrates his life to the elderly man. As you guy would have guessed, here Maan is a spirit or his soul which has planned to cross over (the light) but is stopped by another spirit or soul (according to him).</font></font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Below I'll introduce you to the characters starring in this ff but their characters are for you to find out.</font>



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Posted: 12 years ago
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DIFFERENT CONCEPT - MAAN IS A SPIRIT
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hi... its me maan again... i'm gonna introduce my family and others...

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    <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">firstly </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Dev Singh Kurrara is my younger brother he is 3 years younger than me.</font> <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">then comes</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Vikrath Singh Kurrara my last brother. he is 6 years younger than me.
    </font> <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">then my wife... </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Geet Singh Kurrana/Handa. she is 17years and from hosiarpur</font> <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">how can i forget </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Samira Shah, the love of my life. i loved her to the core... she is 24 years old</font>
  • <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ofcourse </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Ronith Gujral the mystery man.. all i know abt him is that he is 24 year old friend of Samira and a business man</font>
    <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">importantly my staff people, </font>
      <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Adhitya Sharma, my trusted right hand man.. he is my chief accountant</font>
    • <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">then comes pinky kapoor,</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Adhitya's secretary... the only work she does is eating..</font>
    • <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sasha my chief architect</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and tasha her secretary...
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  • <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">abt myself is that, </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I'm 26 year old and i handle the Kurrana constructions. i'm considered a quiet person. not that i mind though. i'm known to attract lot of female attention, but after the breakup with Samira i'm not very much intrested in any women. staying away from them is better off for me and my naive bros... and i make sure of it.</font>

precap: <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">next i'll tell you what happened in hosiyarpur.. and whom i met and saved...</font>

<font color="#FF0000">ok... the above is the cs... not fully but still... hope this is ok... will give update next sat or sun... will try to give before that but still... press the like button and comment... for pm just say so in your comments and will buddy you...</font>

INDEX:

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

chapter 5

chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

chapter 9

chapter 10

Edited by ar_art - 11 years ago
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Presenting the INDEX:

prologue and CS abv
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Maan is in hospital from 3 months and where is his wife i.e. Geet...

did she left him...

he loved Samira but now broke up with her...

interesting start...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Concept 😉
Loved it 😛
Cont. Soon
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Precap:

Hi this is me' remember me'.? Ya its me maan' ok now will give you a precap of what I'm gonna tell you in the coming chapter.

As I have told you before, I've planned to leave to hoshiyarpur. i have gotten into all lots of problems from the time I reached there.

First a girl came running towards my jeep and I would have probably hit her

Next the same girl goes swimming without knowing how to swim. I told you women are weird. I guess she was doing this to gain attention.

Then when I decide to get that girl home' all hell goes lose' I had to witness their stupid family drama'

The ugliest thing was what the people of the village decided to do with a widowed girl. I can't believe such things happen even in today's world. But then my life takes a u turn from that time'

So follow my story to know what happens next in detail.

So this is the precap for chapter 1'.. ' will update on Fri. or sat'. if you have any questions do ask, will answer. Comment and like it

Edited by arthir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting precap. Waiting to read the part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting precap buddy 😊
Looks lyk Geet's gonna enter soon in his story 😉
Waiting for chapter 😃
Thanx for PM 😊

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