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Next part…..

I got up in the middle of the night… my hand was numb…. that is when I found her sleeping on me… I smiled at the innocence radiating from her face… I gently lifted her up and placed her on the pillow as I knew very well she would call her Babaji million times the next morning if she found herself sleeping like this…. After some time I too fell asleep….

It was nearly 9am when Maan ji called me into his study... I waited there for him to finish his call and to talk to me….

Geet… tayar ho jao… hum kapde lane ja rahe hai… he said arranging his files….

Accha??? Samira ji bhi a rahi hai kya???? I asked enthusiastically

Nahi… aur kabhi nahi…. Geet me nahi chahta tum use kabhi milo

Par kyu???

Kyoki kal jo hua me nahi chahta wo phir se ho…… me tume khona nahi chahta…. He said and then looked embarrassed….. Mera mathlab… tumhe iss shehar me kissi ko nahi janthey aur tum meri zimedari ho…. He said again looking here and there….

Par jo kal hua usme Samira ji ka kya dhosh???wo tho mere liye salwars lene doosre part me gayi thi… unhe tho insab ke bare me pata bhi nahi chala…….

Kya??? Par wo tho….

Arre Maan ji… unhone mujhe sadi dikhayi aur salwars dekhne chali gayi... door hone ke karan unhe mere aur saleman ke beech hui bath cheeth ka pata nahi chala hoga……

Accha teek hai he said looking disturbed…..

To aap unhe bulayenge na aaj???? Me tho unke sath teek waqt bhi bita nahi payi

Hmmm teek hai… tum tayar ho jao me bula dunga……

What the hell was that…? I thought Samira might have gotten jealous of Geet and had done something… but Geet had an entirely different story…… I then made a call to Samira and asked her to join…. I first felt hesitation in her but then later she accepted…. It was decided that we would pick her up and then go to the mall… this time a different one….Geet and I left the house and reached Samira…. There she was ready and waiting for us… we left and the girls go busy in shopping…thought I dint like it... I stood with Geet not wanting a repeat telecast of yesterday…. I had told Samira to get Geet some night clothes along with casual and party wear of her(Geet) liking…. I really was happy to see that smile and excitement that shone from her (Geet) face…. She was really a kid… and that was the time my mind riled back to the time of that night when she was changing…. God I needed to stop thinking of this…. I need to really I told myself…. I knew Nani was leaving tomorrow… may be I could arrange another bedroom for her to stay in… Nani would not know… I thought this idea would work out…. As I dint want to corrupt that innocent child with my dirty mind….. After nearly 6 hours and two snack breaks the ladies came out with countless bags…. Luckily the shop had extra people to carry the bags… they placed it inside the car and we road back to the house….. it was nearly 7 when we reached home after dropping Samira and to office for a small job… we freshen up and had dinner…I was happy that my day was done and tomorrow I would convince her of going into another room…… but God had other plans…. The minute I entered the room I was shocked at the sight… Geet had opened all the bags and had placed all the clothes on the bed…..

Maan ji aap agaye…. She said… bet jayiye saying she took one dress and ran inside the closet…… I dint know what she was upto so decided to wait on…. There she came wearing a blue anarkali dress with thin golden work on the edge... giving it an elegant look without being gaudy…..

Kesa hai… she asked twirling around….

Very nice I answered trying to be as cheerful as her….. But then she again took another dress and ran into the closet when I understood she was gonna wear these each and every dress and show case it to me… I was shocked…. The time was already 9… I calculated that all this would take another3 hours to finish…. God I whispered as I saw her coming out… another good compliment made her smile…. The next 2 hours passed with her trying on salwars, kurtas and sari's of different colors and designs….. First I was really annoyed but later I really got interested in seeing how those clothes looked on her... and most importantly how my words of praise affected her making her smile……after the time, when I thought it was over… I saw her peeping through the door…. I got curious…. And then she walked out my throat stuck and I couldn't bread….. She was wearing a night dress…. Or what you call it… the black silk material stuck to her like second skin… her curves were so well defined through this dress….. These were the dresses designed to increase curiosity and boy was I curious to know more…. I smiled and told her it was beautiful…. She got all chirpy again and ran in to get another….. I was getting impatient to see her in another one…. Next she came in a knee length dress…. It was so damn transparent… luckily it had a coat and Geet had worn it….. For the next hour…. I was miserable…. As I could feel my self harden… Damit I was … lusting over a kid… she needed to be out of this room if I was to remain sane…. I had decided by the time Geet was done with those sexy night dresses of all the sinful colors in the world….

Apko pata Maan ji she said as she lay beside me….

Hmmm I sang trying to not participate…. I needed to calm down

Samira ji ne yeh sab pasand kiya…. Unhone kaha ki yeh sab mujhe pe accha rahe ga….. She said

I was really shocked…. Why did Samira select this…..? Was it her way of telling him to move on… or dint she care?? Dint he read pain in her eyes that day..? My mind was thinking all this when Geet continued taking abt Samira and how beautiful she was and how wonderful her taste was……

First I felt really embarrassed when Samira ji told me to wear all these clothes and show it to Maan…. She told me how every husband would like to see his wife in clothes she had bought…. But later I too felt she was right…. She shd be as she was Maan ji's friend for so long…. And she was so correct….. Maan ji seemed so happy seeing me wear all those clothes in front of him…. I was really shy to wear those short clothes that Samira ji described as night wear in front of Maan ji but seeing him smiling at me encouraged me to go on… I understand that there is nothing abt these clothes as Maan ji dint seem to dislike them… I wore each and every one of them….. I also told Maan ji how Samira ji had helped me….. she was the one who had selected each and every dress… she was so nice… she made sure she selected the best and not a bit reveling dress for me…… I really liked her… May be she was a friend that I would get in this unknown city….. I concluded before sleeping………

This was the first time in my life I was waiting for Nani to leave…. I saw Nani smiling and chatting with Geet… Nani then got up and came towards me…

Maan bete… I am really happy… Geet is the answer to my prayers to this house….. Never do and say something that would drive her away……. She said calmly…..

Nani… you know I wont…

I know bete… one more thing….. Pls give her time….. After yesterday I understand it will be difficult for you but still my son patience is virtue…. She said smiling at me… I could very well see her hiding that tease inside…. I nodded my head and then she left bidding bye to the family… this time was right….. I called her….

Geet….

Ji Maan ji??

Wo Geet….. Me chahta hun ki tum aaj se mere bagal wale kamre me so jao….. I said it at last

Par….kyu????

what shd i say that i cannot control myself around her.. that i get all x rated thought seeing her...Wo han… tum college join karo ga na tho tume alag kamra chahiye hoga na… isliye….. I said managing the issue…

Me college jaongi??? She asked surprised….

Han…. Tume nahi jana??? Wo… I started but stopped by her screaming and then she hugged me….

Sukriya Maan ji….. She said jumping again…..

Damit I could feel something grow in me…..(i'm talking abt feeling... 😉) I gently pushed her away from me and smiled at her….. han… aur mene tumara exams ka jo bhi certificate hai na… uska intezam kardiya hai… kal subha thak ajayega…. I said as I saw tears well in her eyes… unable to stop my self I cupped her face and gently rubbed the tears by my thumb… Geet….. Pls rona nahi…. I whispered…..

Sukriya Maan ji… me tho aapke ehsan ke badle sirf yahi bata sakthe hun she said sniffing….

Chup… yeh sab tumara haq hai…. Mera ehsan nahi….. ainda tum yeh sab nahi kahogi… I warned her…. She nodded her head and said she would take those bags to the next room…… I know I shd be happy… relieved that she would no more be there to tempt me… but I was not…as I entered the room at night… I felt it cold and uninviting…. I felt lonely once again……..

I am so happy….. I felt like flying…. I hummed the song as I took the bags to the next bedroom… Maan ji is so considerate... he gave me a bedroom for myself…. First he saved me, and then all this… how will I ever be able to repay all this I thought as I arranged the clothes in the cupboard….. Maan ji had left to office and I had the whole day to myself…. I cooked and cleaned Maan ji's room and mine too…. Nakul kaka told me that I was really shrewd… I had grasped the functioning of all the electronic devices in the house… I smiled as this was the first time I had not cried…. actually from the past 3 days I have not shed a tear out of unhappiness….. At last baba ji might have become soft towards me….. I thought as I settled inside my bed and let sleep take over me…….

No one knew how time passed off…. It was nearly 2 months now that Geet had come into this house and now she had settled in very nicely…. Her day started with giving coffee to Maan, who had gotten used to that coffee so very much…. Dev too had started getting used to seeing his bhabhi's smiling face and cheerful good morning's with tea…. And Vicky was loving the happy face of his choti in the morning as she gave him his protein shake… Nakul kaka couldn't be happier…. Today he was seeing a Kurrana house which had a woman in it… and the house was now truly a home…….. He prayed his Babaji to keep his meher on this family like this for ever……

It was the first day of college…. And I was really tensed….. I had never stepped outside the house alone…. And now I had to go to college…. Maan ji had told me that he would send in a car only for her personally use…. And the driver was Nakul kaka himself as Maan ji said he dint trust any one more with her safety…… Vicky bhai too did his PG there but his classes were at a different time….. I wore my anarkali salwars and prepared myself as flashes of ragging from '3 idiots" movie tormented me…. I got down and begged Nakul kaka to come with me… but that Danav had forbade him…. I a bichari nanhi si jaan walked al alone in this big no no huge no no… monstrously huge college…. I felt like a mice now… Babaji I mumbled as I meekly went inside my class evading all the senior's eyes…I felt so happy and proud of myself… I have for the first time accomplished something alone….. I smiled and settled down …….

I know I was being hard on her…. But when will she learn she needs to face this…. Thought I had sent her off…..I just couldn't sit here and wait for her to come back and tell me…. So I went along with the car and hid from her view... I had already warned the dean of the college that ragging shd be avoided or he would stop the huge grant he gave every year….. and by his words…. The college was clean and clear for my misty to come….. I was really happy to see that smile on her face… but now I remembered I had a meeting and rushed out but unfortunately I banged into some one…. I looked up and was surprised and embarrassed to see my brothers Dev and Vicky flashing their teasing smiles at me…… God…. I wanted to yell…. This girl was defo driving me crazy……

Precap: Geet in college….. Leap if possible…….

soo sorry for bugging you with these crappy updates... sorry yaar.. but promise will get to the actually plot soon.. after that you'll be asking me for a normal update... i promise you on that...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayeee i am first...
Such a lovely update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know I have to be patient to know what is Sameera doing in between Maaneet...and why Maan is so lenient towatrds her...

ok Geet don't know that what relation Sameera and Maan shared but Maan knows this so if Geet also say to bring Sameera then also he should not oblidge...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update.
Geet likes Sam. Confused will Sam character.
Poor Maan can't get near also can't go closer.
Geet joined col. Maan making her do things on her own was nice.
Geet wearing all the dresses to show Maan was funny.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update like button not working dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 9
awesome...
what are Sameera's intentions?
Geet is so innocent...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...
maan is so good...is there a catch behind it...?
Edited by adventure_roks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




I know I have to be patient to know what is Sameera doing in between Maaneet...and why Maan is so lenient towatrds her...

ok Geet don't know that what relation Sameera and Maan shared but Maan knows this so if Geet also say to bring Sameera then also he should not oblidge...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...



Samira's charecter you oly have to decided... me no helping here😆
Maan yaar... he is still confused... he wants Sam to feel jelouse of him and Geet and also not to pull Geet in all this...
he will never tell Geet tat Sam was his fiance... and Geet in all her innocence will bring Sam closer...
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Hi guys... I'm updating through my phone so pls avoid and ignore mistakes in this one... Will go home only by may end so till that time oly mobile updates possible...
now the update...

I am really really so happy... Today was the first day and I had already got 2 friends... Though one of them is a boy... His name is Yash... He and Pari are now my friends... I wonder what will the family think of Yash being my friend... Especially Maanji???? But I'll defo ask him abt this today... Making up my mind I went home... I needed to ask him few things also... on reaching home, I helped kaka with the dinner and waited for the brothers... It was by 7 that they came home... After dinner I went up to Maanji's room and found him working on his computer...
wo maan ji???? I called him and he looked at me... Then I saw tat beautiful smile on his face... He gestured me to sit on the bed... And I did so... God this night dress tat Sam Di bought me are short... They slid up my thighs when I sit folding my legs... Anyway I let it be as it was only Maan ji here... I decided to ask what I wanted from him...
maan ji... wo mujhe na... English bat karna seekne hai... I asked him...I saw him think for a while

ok... me kal hi iska intezam karta hu... he told me... And then started typing... wo ek aur bat hai... I said trying to pull the end of the night dress down a bit...
kya bat hai????he asked me...
woo..oo a..aap na... Sam Di se poochiyega... saying I ran from the room... I just hope he calls Sam Di... I have told her what I want... I dont want to get teased again... Thinking of all this I laid on the bed to get some sleep...


After tat embarassing meet with my bros I left for work... And today had been a very fruitful day for me... The meeting was a success and I had completely finished my work on time... I could wait to reach home... And as expected Geet was waiting there with all her day's events... I had mentally noted her frds names.. I need to have their background checked... After dinner I left to my room...there I was sending a mail to my detective agency to check them out, when Geet came... In one of those hot night wears... God I think they are testing me... The material was sticking to her body like second skin giving me all x rated thoughts.. worst of all was when she sat down on my bed... I could feel my throat getting dry... Her soft..glowing skin... So inviting... Luckily geet started talking and I was distracted into listening to her...it was good that she wanted to learn English... She was now in a city and here she needed to have good grip over the language... I thought of telling Adhi to get someone for the job... But what was the next thing she was talking abt???? Is she crazy??? Why the hell should I ask Sam abt what geet wants from me... Damit I'm her husband and here she is telling her requirements to someone else????? I cant believe this... I was really irritated... Though things were good between Sam and myself, thanks to geet... But still I'm worried abt geet befriending Sam... Anyhow for the moment I could tell her anything on Sam as the girls have gotten quiet close over these months... I sat there, contemplating whether to call Sam or not when my phone rang...
Hello???s?? Samira???? what is the matter????I asked her in a serious voice...
wo Maan... actually Geet wanted me to talk to you she spoke in a soft voice...
AhmmmI hummed
Geet wanted to go to a beauty parlor... it seems some one teased her... for u know... girls stuffshe said but I could guess a little amusement in her voice... But what annoyed me was the fact of Geet being comfortable telling Sam all this... Why dint she tell me her need... Dint she trust me on such a small thing...
ok... u can come tomorrow morning... and let her pay...saying I cut the call... I placed my lappy and phone down and left for her room... I needed to tell her that she could tell me anything... I stormed into her room only to find her asleep... This girl was really amazing... Just by looking at her innocent form, my anger vanished... I came closer and kissed her forehead... goodnight I whispered and left the room... Forgetting what I wanted to tell her

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