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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neetugarg123

Seriously I don;t understand this story where Geet spent her 17 years of life in such a backward village that she didn't know that widow's marriage can also exist, even she was amused to see that men n women sitting together n eating, in Maan's house then how can she became too modern in 2 years ?

Actually I couldn't justify her naiveness if she forget her village's environment so soon that how Maan escaped her from the cruel people of village, even being from a very conservative in law's family at the village, how could she doesn't know ABCD of marital relations?


there is still not much change in Geet after 2 years.. she either always gets Samiras help for her activities. If you have seen she wil not go anywhere without Samira. only for college, that too cos of Vicky. Her life revolves again inside the Kurrana house. She is naive as Here also she is being protected from evilness by the brothers and Sam. so she is as of now a coward leading a protected and sheltered life..
but things will start to change as she will be facing the real world and real people...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear, you are not getting my point exactly. I m not talking about Geet's physical appearance as modern, I m talking about her bold n free mentality. After living 17 years of your life in a very conservative society how could a woman taking forgranted her loving n caring husband? How could she even think to stay till late night at Ronith's house n after facing sooo much anger from Maan for the same, the very next day she was going for a golgappa treat with the same Ronith n the third day she was dancing with Ronith infront of
her husband. Why she is uncomfortable only with her husband n comfortable with others? Why she doesn't think, even once that how Maan saved her from the cruel people of the village,even that time also, she think him as a weird person. It all seems like that she was born n brought up in a very high class sophisticated broadminded family of a metro city.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neetugarg123

Dear, you are not getting my point exactly. I m not talking about Geet's physical appearance as modern, I m talking about her bold n free mentality. After living 17 years of your life in a very conservative society how could a woman taking forgranted her loving n caring husband? How could she even think to stay till late night at Ronith's house n after facing sooo much anger from Maan for the same, the very next day she was going for a golgappa treat with the same Ronith n the third day she was dancing with Ronith infront of

her husband. Why she is uncomfortable only with her husband n comfortable with others? Why she doesn't think, even once that how Maan saved her from the cruel people of the village,even that time also, she think him as a weird person. It all seems like that she was born n brought up in a very high class sophisticated broadminded family of a metro city.


very nice qes yaar... But u see... She is scared of maan's anger... He has behaved with her a bit harsh... She doest understand.. She doest have elders to explain or tell her what is correct or wrong..
in her past, her elder were the ones who sent her to that lady's house for the night.. She trusts them.. Here she trusts Ronith cos of Sam... Ronith was a friend before he became phyco lover 😆
anyways maybe I'm not able to help u get her POV properly or something but just stay in for 2 more parts to know more on Geet's insecurity and her nature maybe tat would help yaar..
I really appriciate that u hav commented and asked like this... It helps in improving my writing a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Next Part:

What the hell happened to you Geet? Samira Di asked me. She was mad at me for not refusing Ronith. But how could I?

Di me kese?? He is asking me in front of everyone. Kamakham sabke samne tamasha ho jata. I told her in a troubled voice

Geet that is what he wants. You don't understand men. Ronith ko pata hai that you will not refuse him in front of others that is why he is doing like that. If you refuse him once he will back off. Ese log tamasha nahi karthe remember that. See now Maan will get angrier on you. Maan wants you to accept him in front of everyone, hold him, and give him the right in front of everyone...Tum yeh sab kab samjoge Geet? Samira di asked me in a desperate tone. I also dint know. Actually I don't understand all this. I don't know how to understand all this. I just want to lead a normal life not this complicated life. I just want to be a normal teenager, going to college and enjoying with her friends and family. Ma aur Papa never told me anything about marriage but after they died, I never got to live such a life. I was living a nightmare with no one to look up to and I was only trying to hide from all the men in that family and run away from the problem that might come. I have never faced all such situations before. I knew that I could never do what Samira di wants me to do...

Samira di me yeh sab nahi kar paungi... me. I just couldn't even say it. I just wanted to run away from here. Leave every things and go.

Kya nahi kar payegi Geet??? How can you let someone like Ronith take advantage of you like this? And by letting him do so, you are letting down not only Maan but Dev and Vicky who treat you like a sister. Apna nahi tho unke bare me socho. Maan married you and so has become your family, but Dev and Vicky, they have accepted you as and how you are. How can you do that to them? Socho Geet...

Sochu? Kya sochu? I keep thinking only. I cannot do anything but think. I want to do so many things but I know I cannot because I don't have the guts. All I want to do is hide when someone come and challenges me. Di, I am not you or Maan ji. I am not strong. I whimpered as I saw her glare at me.

Oh shut up Geet. You don't have to be me or Maan. She said getting frustrated. Be yourself Geet. Apne aapko safe rakhna galath nahi hai. Ronith is a problem to you. It is never wrong to fight for what is right. You don't need to be physically strong or whatever you think you need to have, to do what is right and here, showing Ronith his place is right. Telling Maan you are his is right. She stressed.

I know Di was correct but I just wish things would just be easy. How do I tell this to Maan ji that I don't love or even like Ronith? That, thinking of Ronith like that disgusts me. That, now a days Ronith scares me. I don't know. Just then a waiter came and I took the soft drink from his tray. Samira di also helped herself

Geet leave all this. Talk to Maan later on tonight ok. From now on if Ronith comes to you just refuse him ok. Yadhi use tamasha karna ho tho let him do. You don't encourage him anymore. Actually use that opportunity and tell him that you are Maan's and not anyone else's. She said. But couldn't hear anything else she said as I suddenly started feeling dizzy. What is happening to me? I wondered. My stomach was doing weird flips and started felling nauseous.

Samira di. Mujhe ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai I told her. But Samira di was not there. I was starting to feel dizzier but before I could fall I felt someone pulling me. I tried to struggle but that person dint stop. That person was dragging me somewhere. I kept on trying to pull myself free but it was not possible. I felt my legs go week and my body go feeble. The person pulled me into a dark room and slammed me on a wall. That was the last thing I remembered as dizziness overtook me.

I don't know what was wrong with me. I have drunk alcohol before but I was feeling so different today. There was a strange warmth that was spreading through my body and apart from that I was feeling dizzy also. I knew I was coming towards my study so thought of taking Geet to the study first. I would tell her abt my feelings then we will talk. If things go on properly, I would also give her the gift I had bought her. No one would disturb us in that room. I thought, as I took her or to say dragged her into the room. The study opens with my thumb print or my brother's thumb prints only. I opened it and pushed her into the room. The room was dark as I had not switched on the automatic switches thinking I won't be here tonight. But I dint need them. The door was opened and the hall light was enough for us. I just wanted to talk to her. I knew I had Geet and I dint need to see her face to know it.

Geet I called her.

Ek minute bollne se pehle I want you to know something I told her. I could see her outlay. She was standing quietly, supporting herself on the wall.

Geet, I am in love with you. I told her. Pata nahi kab se but I am in love wit you now and will be forever. Geet... Before you say something.. I'm very scared. Kyuki mujhe kuch hojata hai. I get angry when I see you with that Ronith or any guy. I feel so so.. pata nahi kya hai but I have never felt it with Samira also.. Geet Geet.. tum samaj rahe ho na.. I need you... very much.. I love you... more than the word could mean...

Mujhe isse aur kese kahna hai pata nahi.. if you want I'll try in another way. Cruise me ya humare flight me surprise try kar saktha hun but subject yahi hoga. Mera pyar. Wo bhi sirf aur sirf tumare liye. I don't know what else to tell you.. I'm not filmy type.. tho that is all. I told her, trying to hold myself. I don't know what the hell was wrong with me. I was so damn aroused and at the same time feeling a bit drowsy too. The wind that was blowing through the windows was making her hair move and that was arousing me. I could make out her sari pallu move too. That was making me hard down below. If she dint move away now, I'll just pounce on her like a hungry cat.

Geet kuch bolo pls. I called her hoping she would say something so that I could get distracted. But it was hard. My mind was already hazy. All I could think of was x rated thoughts and now this wind was making things difficult. I went closer to her... Geet I gently placed my hands on her shoulders and called again. She surprised me by just falling on me freely. I dint know what to do. On reflex, my arms held her close to myself.

Geet I called her softly

Hmmm... she hummed it was like music to my ears. But she dint hug me. Her hands were just on her sides. I dint know what to take of that.

Geet... I whispered as I gently led my hands down her arms. The places where her body touched me were burning me. I just couldn't hold on. I dint know what I wanted anymore. I wanted to do so many things to her but I still wanted her to say something.

Hmmm... She hummed again. Her body reacted... and her arms hugged me.

I love you Geet... I whispered.

Hmmm she hummed again that was when my patience came to an end. I moved her back, pressing myself on her as her back touched the wall. My front was pasted on hers and I could feel her body on mine.

Your mine Geet I whispered as I kissed her forehead and cheeks

Sirf mere I said as I caressed her lips. And bent down and kiss her lips slowly. I wanted to be soft and slow but I couldn't hold on. It turned into a more fierce and passionate one... I could feel her lips moving. She was moaning, her hands were pushing against my chest, but I couldn't stop. I won't stop. She was mine... I reminded myself. I hugged her by her waist and carried her like that. I threw her on the couch. How could she try to stop me? Why would she try to stop me? I dint understand it at all. Something wild was taking shape inside me. Something untamed was getting unraveled inside me that was slowly taking control of my mind and body. I would make her understand I was the best for her. No one in the world would love her like I do. Yes I told myself or that thing told me...as I tore off the clothes from her body as I heard her whimper. She would whimper now, but later she would thank you It told me. She would love you. She would learn said a crazed beast in me. And I listen to it. All I wanted was Geet to accept me. I kissed her, licked and tasted her, every time she resisted or tried to push me, I would go strong on her... I wondered why she kept on doing this. Her body seemed fine. She was so wet and ready then why was she resisting me??? But all was good. After sometime, she stopped it. She was quiet, thought she dint participate, she dint refuse or resist me at all. I showed her my depth of passion and need I had for her without holding anything back. I knew she would be in pain but I would be there for her. I will help her and love her for life and beyond. There would be nor ever be anyone other than Geet in this Maan's life I thought as I emptied myself inside her. For what was left of the night, I hugged her naked body and slept. Tomorrow, I would be a new day and new life for both of us. I thought as my tired body and mind gave way to sleep in exhaustion

I got up with pain shooting through my whole body. God I groaned as I tried to move. I opened my eyes to see that the room was still dark. I got up and entered the security code and the whole room eliminated. I looked towards the couch and got the shock of my life. There on the couch was Samira in a very bad shape. What have I done I cursed myself. I looked in horror at the sight in front of myself. I have destroyed everything that I have built with so much care. I know now that whatever I do I would never be able to remake. This is not a mistake this is a sin, a crime. And any amt of punishment cannot redeem this crime. I went near to her and cleaned the blood off her. I need to take her to the hospital but others will come to know. Geet, I thought and pain hit my heart. What have I done? I quickly took my phone and called my friend. Neha was Samira's and mine close friend. She was also a doctor. She would definitely help and keep it a secret for the time being.

Hello Neha I need your help I told her as soon as I heard her on the other side. I explained to her in brief of the happenings and she asked me to come to her house. I cut the call and quickly wrapped Samira in a robe and carried her. While carrying her, something thin, like a chain hit my leg, but I just kicked it and it went off under the table. I dint bother abt it. The time was 4 in the morning and I knew that Vicky will be up in another half hour. So I rushed towards my car. I prayed that nothing should happen to her as she looked really bad.

I was really happy today. Last night was overall a good night. I am really happy for Geet... My kiddo. I only pray to her Babaji that she gets enough maturity to face her life and responsibilities hence forth. I know that she is still a kid at heart and I am partially at fault there, but what can I do. I have this fierce protective instinct towards her. I want to protect her like a brother. Now seeing her happy with my Bhai has bought peace to my brotherly heart. I hummed some song as I made my way out of my room. It was 4:30 in the morning and it is usually my time to hit the gym. I might see Maan Bhai if he was up to it today. I smirked thinking of it. My brother, he was really a piece if you ask me. I would have walked off if not for the light in Geet's room. Why the hell was there light in her room at this hour?? I wondered. I could see the light seeping through the light crack as the door was not closed properly. I gently pushed the door and it opened and what I saw made my blood run cold. I couldn't believe it. All my happiness for my kiddo vanished. I ran towards the bed and caught that man by his neck. That b*****d Ronith was lying on top of an unconscious Geet. My Geet... my baby Geet... God why oh Why... I threw him away. I dint bother to even look at him. I quickly wrapped her with the spread and dialed my friend Armaan's number. He and his wife were both doctors.

Armaan Bhai. I need your help. I cried into the phone. I explained what I saw and what I suspect. He told me that he couldn't treat Geet at his house. He said a hospital would be better as it had better facilities and equipment's for emergencies. I accepted as I needed Geet to be alright. I begged Armaan to keep this a secret. He said apart from Riddhima and her sister no one will know. I carried Geet and left the house. I kept asking God why he had done this to my kiddo. What had she done that he had so cruelly punished her for...

Precap:

I'm sorry Maan... but Samira is in trauma. Wo bol nahi sakhti. Neha told me. I dint know how to react to this.

Neha... how... I mean is there some treatment for this???

I have already talked to my brother in law in London. Take her there. I think something can be done there. She told me.

check out update on O sanab bekhabar also

Ok, don't pls don't kill me... I have given lots of clues in this chappy. lots and lots of clues... if you have not found it, then leave it, you'll know 60% of things by the next 3 or 4 parts yaar...

if it is stupid pls forgive.. i dint want to go in detail abt Maan doing stuff to the other girl. 😳

maybe next time but not today...

Think who the culprit..is Maan, Samira, Ronith or Geet.. who did what..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply superb
loved it-

thank you yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
i couldn't accept it.
still it was an amazing update.
the love Maan showed to Geet.
the care of vicky to Geet.

who is the culprit????
if it was Geet with Maan then how come they got exchanged without the fingerprint.
is Dev behind it. hope not.
i know i am gonna go crazy with this.
pls pls pls update soon for this ff alone until everything gets cleared. else i will become mad soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a shock dear its really scary i think something is wrong there kabhi kabhi sameera pai dout ata hai update soon waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehapriya

i couldn't accept it.
still it was an amazing update.
the love Maan showed to Geet.
the care of vicky to Geet.

who is the culprit????
if it was Geet with Maan then how come they got exchanged without the fingerprint.
is Dev behind it. hope not.
i know i am gonna go crazy with this.
pls pls pls update soon for this ff alone until everything gets cleared. else i will become mad soon.


😆 yaar kya kahun ab...
suspense hai.. Aur I was waiting what u'd say... Actually me tho jutho ka wait ka rahi thi.. But saved I guess..
Vicky ka tho aur story hai issme... Dev ka bhi...
maan tho phasa...
pls wait for more...
loved the comment and will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

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😆 yaar kya kahun ab...
suspense hai.. Aur I was waiting what u'd say... Actually me tho jutho ka wait ka rahi thi.. But saved I guess..
Vicky ka tho aur story hai issme... Dev ka bhi...
maan tho phasa...
pls wait for more...
loved the comment and will update soon



now still more confusing.
will wait for ur updates and story to unfold.
but update soon pls.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
How they exchanged
Geet was with maan and that thin thing was geet chain
Who was culprit

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~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

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