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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update
Liked how Maan even though he was ecstatic that Geet was at his office he played it cool typical Maan .
Did Ronith trick Maan into believing Geet was cheating him????
Poor Geet hoping all gets cleared soon n Sam can help clear the MU between him n his young wife
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

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I sat down wondering what I should wear for the party. I was so damn confused. Samira di had called and told me that she would be coming as there was something important to talk to me. She told me to select something good to wear and keep aside. I was sitting lost when I heard a knock. I turned around to see Samira Di enter. She looked a bit stressed

Di kya bath hai. ap itne stressed kyu dekh rahe ho? I asked her immediately. There was no need of formalities in our relationship. We were like sisters. I really and truly respect and love her like one. If I trust someone other than Maan ji, Dev Bhai and Vicky Bhai then I can say it is Samira Di proudly

Geet kya me tumse kuch puch sakthi hun? She asked me. I could detect the hesitation in her voice

Kya bath hai di??

Geet I wanted to ask you till when are you going to be like this?

Like what di. I don't understand what you are saying

Like this. Acting you don't understand like you don't see anything she stressed

I dint understand what she was saying. I gave her a confused look

Geet., you and Maan are married for 2 years now, but still you are living separately. What is the meaning of all this Geet?

Wo di,

What wo Geet. You are 19 years you are no more a kid. Who in this world will wait for so long Geet and now when you are legally married you still chose to ignore him. On top of that you are going around with that Ronith. Samira di said shocking me.

Ronith?? Where did he come and I am not going with him anywhere. He is just my friend di. Nothing more and he will not be anything more than that also. I tried to explain.

But Geet Maan doesn't think like that. He thinks you like Ronith.

What?? Maan ji? Why does he think like that? I never told him so.

Kahna nahi padth Geet. You never told him you love him too no.

But I don't love Maan ji.

He is your husband. Why don't you love him? Has he hurt you? Done anything to harm you? Left you somewhere alone? Not given you something you wished for? Failed to provide for you? Samira di asked me

But I had no answers for all these questions. She was correct. He has given me all these things. He has performed all the duties of being a husband.

Yes di. He has done everything.

So what have you done Geet? What have you given him? Nothing you have filled his life with insecurities. Every day he thinks you will leave him and go off. You ignore his advances towards you, never give him your time never share anything with him. Is this how you show him you care Geet?? Tell me?

I dint know what to tell her. She was again correct. I dint spend time with Maan ji at all. I had time for everyone but him. I have hurt him and angered him only but not bought even a small smile on his face.

Geet what do you expect from him?? He is not like those romantic books hero. No normal husband is. They might be in their heart but will never tell it openly or will display. For them to come out in the open you only have to take the first step. Maan is like that. If you expect him to smooth talk you, take you out on romantic date and do stupid lovey dovey things then forget it. Cos he is an adult. He will show his love in that manner only. He will love you in that manner. Show you his love as a husband shows his wife. Let him do it. Geet for him to do it you should show him that you are ready for him. Otherwise he will misunderstand you like this only. She explained me.

But Samira di what should I do now?? I don't know what to do. I cried. I was really lost. I dint know what to do. There was a sudden feeling of dread that was growing in my heart.

Show him that you care for him too Geet. Do everything to get his attention in today's party and Geet today sleep in his room and let him do whatever he want with you. Remember Geet don't object ok? Samira di said with a smile. I understood what she meant. I am his wife and I respect Maan ji. I don't understand love, but i know that if I ever fall in love that would be only with a person like Maan ji. So I smile back at her nodding my head. Samira di left the room. I took out the sari which I thought I wouldn't wear. But now I have decided I would. I am Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Kurrana and I have to dress like that only.

I want security cameras in the hallways. Don't forget to switch on all the cameras. I told the security in charge. Today I am expecting at least 3000 people and I don't want something bad happening. I have kept myself busy all this while. I dint want to think abt what happen in the mall. I dint want to think abt Geet and that Ronith I dint want to think abt anything in that matter at all.

Bhai? I heard Vicky call me

Guests' sab a rahe hai you are not ready. He said looking at me.

Han... dekh lena. I'll be back saying I ran up to my room. Yes it was still my room only. I, Maan Singh Kurrana was married for 2 years now but still my room is mine. I smiled bitterly at the reality of my thoughts. I stripped and let the water jets from my shower touch my skin. The coolness of the water bought very less relief from the burning sensation of the vision that was burnt in my mind from the mall. I got out of the shower and quickly dressed and came down. People have already started gathering. Dev and Vicky were standing and welcoming many elderly guests. I joined them and gave them warm smiles. These people have been associated with the Kurrana family for generations. In my pain I will not be rude to them I reminded myself. I nodded, shook hands and smiled with many people. I looked around to see if all were enjoying the party when my eyes fell on the man whom I hate the most. Ronith Gujral. The minute I saw him, I felt like strangling him with my own hands. I saw him smile and talk with others. He seemed happy. Of course why wouldn't he. He had got my wife. I thought with disgust. That is when I saw him stop talking and look at one place or to say stare at one place. I turned around to see what had caught his interest and that sight had caught my breath. Geet I whispered. She looked like an angel. She was holding Dev's arms as she came down. She was smiling and talking to him. But all I could see was her face. She looked so beautiful that I wanted to snatch her away from here and hide her from everyone's eyes. That is when I realized Ronith was also staring at her. Anger rose in me as I saw him move forward. I wanted to pound him for his actions. How dare he make the first move and that to, to my wife? I moved quickly towards them but was stopped by an old friend of my father. Though I talked with him, my eyes were on Ronith only. By the time I got myself relieved form him, Ronith was near Geet. I could see him stretch his hand infront of Geet. But I felt happy when Geet held on to Dev's hand more tightly. But my happiness was short lived when Dev teasingly gave her hand in Ronith and waved them towards the dance floor. But just then Samira came and took Ronith away. I dint miss the glare that she gave to Geet before taking Ronith away. What was going on? I wondered.

The party went on smoothly. I saw that Ronith and Geet talked here and there but not for too long. Geet would always slip from there. She would also come towards me to make small talk but I was not interested, or at least I acted like I wasn't but internally I was loving her attention on me. The party was going on smoothly and many of the elderly people have already left. The younger ones were still on the dance floor. The DJ called in for dances and every couple danced except for us, so Dev called me and Geet.

The song was something that I dint know so I just dint care a lot. I held Geet's hand not bothering to look at her. As the music touched my ears I led her on touching her waist but as I felt the words I realized that the words were what I had always wanted to tell her.

Sholon Si Sholon Si
Tere Ankhon Ki Yeh Roshni

Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Chandni Chandni, Tere Chere Ki Yeh Chandni
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai--
With these words I just wanted to ask her myself as my hand held her hand and my other moved to her waist and I twisted her. Our legs moved and then bent her and bought her closer.


Tera Muskurana Nazar Yun Jhukana
Tera Muskurana Nazar Yun Jhukana
Mere Liye Hai Bas Mere Liye Hai--
As the other set of words passed my ears I felt that they were stolen from my mind. I looked into her eyes as though asking her the same questions. I felt like kissing her numerous times as she blushed

Sholon Si Sholon Si
Tere Ankhon Ki Yeh Roshni
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Chandni Chandni Tere Chere Ki Yeh Chandini
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
--I held her hand to move to the music lost in her as my hands moved on their own accord.

I touched her bare waist through her sari and could feel her gasp but I dint bother. She was mine and I needed to let people know. And it was time she knew it too. I bought her close to my body and then with a swift turn pressed her flush to my forward. I pressed my palm to her soft stomach and could feel her hip band... I gently caressed it... making her moan softly She moved forward but I dint like it



Samjho Mera Joh Ishara Hai
.- - When I tried to pull her she waved my hand off and turned around with a naughty smirk. I was surprised with this. I have never seen her like that. Then I saw her lips move to the lyrics


Joh Bhi Hai Mera Woh Tumhara Hai
Samjho Mera Joh Ishara Hai
Joh Bhi Hai Mera Woh Tumhara Hai
--She indicated with her hands and then waved her hands around as she circled me in full she then pushed me a bit gently then She sensuously moved her hand over her body and then threw her hand over me and hugged me.
Lehar Mein Koi Hoon Khoyi
Manzil Toh Hai Tu Kinara Hai
Yeh Meri Adayaein Yeh Meri Wafaein
Yeh Meri Adayaein Yeh Meri Wafaein
Tujhko Pata Hai Sabh Tere Liye Hai

I just stood there not knowing how to reach as she moved behind me still holding me. She sang as she caressed my shoulders and hung from them and then hugged me from my back. She then moved away from me and then she waved her hand around her touched her face pointing towards me she sang and then hugged me fully. I held her face was abt to kiss her.

In the mid of the music I was tapped and was called by someone. I turned and realized that all was a dream. Geet was still in my arms but all this was just my dream. Only mine. I smile bitterly. Geet, she would never do it. I could only dream abt this. I found that Ronith was calling me. He asked me if he could continue this dance with Geet. I nodded. I wanted to see what Geet does. I could feet Geet clutching my hand tightly. But she dint refuse. I wanted her to say no. She looked here and there. But dint say no. With troubled eyes she took his eyes. I knew it. She would never refuse him. I saw Ronith take my wife and continue dancing the music continued.


Sholon Si Sholon Si
Meri Ankhon Ki Yeh Roshni
Tere Liye Hai Tere Liye Hai
Chandni Chandni Mere Chere Ki Yeh Chandni
Tere Liye Hai Tere Liye Hai

Haske Dikha Do Deewane Ko
Joh Ho Raha Hai Ho Jane Do
Haske Dikha Do Deewane Ko
Joh Ho Raha Hai Ho Jane Do
Dil Ke Uljhan Zubaan Pe-
-The words matched again. Every time he saw them together he was in uljan and he hated it. His insecurities. God this anger... he gulped down 3 glasses of whiskey as he saw Ronith twirl Geet around the dance floor.


Ati Hai Toh Aajane Do
Yeh Hoton Ki Narmi Yeh Sanson Ki Garmi
Yeh Hoton Ki Narmi Yeh Sanson Ki Garmi
Mere Liye Hai Bas Mere Liye Hai

Sholon Si Sholon Si
Teri Ankhon Ki Yeh Roshni
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Chandni Chandni Tere Chere Ki Yeh Chandni
Kiske Liye Hai Kiske Liye Hai
Tera Muskurana Nazar Yun Jhukana
Tera Muskurana Nazar Yun Jhukana
Mere Liye Hai Bas Mere Liye Hai

By the time the dance was over I have no idea how much of alcohol I have consumed. I saw Samira and Geet talking. I saw a waiter moving closer to them. They were having something to drink. I saw that Samira and Geet where having some heated discussion but I dint care. All I care is that Geet was mine. I couldn't share. I cannot share her with anyone. I would tell her that today. I would make sure she knew that today. Making a decision I started walking towards them

Dev. I called him as I neared them

Ji Bhai

Take care of the party I need to take care of something important in the study

Ok Bhai saying he left me. I saw the waiter and went to him. I took a glass and drank the drink which he hand. I felt a bit dizzy but dint care. I needed to talk to Geet and was going to do it today. Thinking I went near her and grabbed her hand, without looking at her face I started walking or to say pulling her towards the study which was in the first floor. I was not too angry but her struggling enraged me. Why the hell was she struggling with me? She seemed at ease with Ronith. Was I so repulsive when compared to him?? This was enough to enrage the monster in me. What came out was the worst mistake I have ever committed...

Precap: What have I done I cursed my self. I looked in horror at the sight in front of myself. I have destroyed everything that I have built with so much care. I know now that what every I do I would never be able to remake. This is not a mistake this is a sin a crime. And any amt of punishment cannot redeem this crime. I went near to her and cleaned the blood off her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update thanx fr pm
interesting precap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice dear
Sam making geet undrstand hr relation with maan
Maam dream dance
Maan talli
Precap is scary
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Posted: 11 years ago


is that girl Sameera whom Maan dragged at last...

he didn't saw the face of the girl...he thinks her as Geet but is she Sameera...he raped her...

please don't let him do this or else this story is finished for me...

my heart is beating very fast...

please update next soon...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
To hell with that ronith. Now Geet will suffer bcoz of him.
Sam is too good. She is makin Geet understand everything.
I hope Maan has got Geet hand instead of somebody else and do some grave mistake.
Precap is terrifying. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 14
awesome...
poor Geet...
but she really is a stupid...
she doesnt concentrate on Maan and marriage...
Sameera is helping her this much still the idiot is like this...
what has Maan done?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update loved it. Thks for the pm dear.
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



is that girl Sameera whom Maan dragged at last...

he didn't saw the face of the girl...he thinks her as Geet but is she Sameera...he raped her...

please don't let him do this or else this story is finished for me...

my heart is beating very fast...

please update next soon...

thanx for pm...


yaar apko next paar padke mujhpar bohot gussa anewala hai... but pls tand rakho... and have faith...
suspense hai.. u'll hate this maan and then love him so very much...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously I don;t understand this story where Geet spent her 17 years of life in such a backward village that she didn't know that widow's marriage can also exist, even she was amused to see that men n women sitting together n eating, in Maan's house then how can she became too modern in 2 years ?
Actually I couldn't justify her naiveness if she forget her village's environment so soon that how Maan escaped her from the cruel people of village, even being from a very conservative in law's family at the village, how could she doesn't know ABCD of marital relations?

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11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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