New ff: maaneet in My life's mistakes precap pg2

My life's mistakes

Hi I'm Maan, Maan Singh Kurrana'. I'm bored. In my 26 years of life I have never been so bored. I'm lying doing absolutely nothing. So I've decided to walk towards the light which seems to call me for the past few weeks' so I moved my self towards the door of the hospital room which has been my home for the past 3 months.

Hello son I heard someone call me.. I looked at the direction of the sound and found an old man sitting and patting on a seat next to him for me to occupy. Ok, what can go wrong. Just for sometime. I thought sitting down. So where are you planning to go son? Asked, the elderly man with a smile on his face. Usually I'd just glare at anyone questioning me, but somehow i dint mind this question'. Nothing much just going towards the light I said pointing towards the light. You do understand that once you walk through that you'd never come back here? Questioned the man.

Ya I guessed that before..

So you don't want to come back or live?

Not really. As you can see I have no one in this place waiting for me. So I just ''

Why is that so son' do you want to share it with me?

Hmmm why not.. so are you u really interested in listing to my life story? no wait, actually I'd love to tell you the story of my life's mistakes if you'd like to listen' I said thoughtfully'

Hmmm I think I'd love to hear it son.. so lets get hearing'.

I saw him making himself relaxed on his seat. Mean while where shd I start I thought' shall I start with my love or marriage or betrayal' hmm I thought'

Ok here I go'

My story starts on the day of my parents 4^th year ceremony, the day I read their letter which asked me to build a hospital in hoshiyarpur. I couldn't deny this so I left to that place taking my jeep.

Today when I think abt it.. I surely curse the thought' here began my series of mistakes'.

Ok this is the introduction. as usuall it'll have grey stuff in it as i'm the writer.. This ff is Maan's POV on his life as he narrates his life to the elderly man. As you guy would have guessed, here Maan is a spirit or his soul which has planned to cross over (the light) but is stopped by another spirit or soul (according to him).

Below I'll introduce you to the characters starring in this ff but their characters are for you to find out.

new start...it sound different...

nice...
CS
nice one...
Maan is married to Geet but loves Samira?
cont soon...

PS - post the CS in this thread too...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3355328/maaneet-ff-my-lifes-mistakes-on-hold

awesome start
plz continue soon and pm me when u update

Sorry.. I completely forgot abt giving link to the CS... Thanku.spvd for reminding me... Ok here is the

INDEX:

Charecter intro

Originally posted by: arthir

Sorry.. I completely forgot abt giving link to the CS... Thanku.spvd for reminding me... Ok here is the

INDEX:

Charecter intro

its Deepa dear...why dont u post it here? its like one part there and other part here...
hi... its me maan again... i'm gonna introduce my family and others...

• firstly Dev Singh Kurrara is my younger brother he is 3 years younger than me.
• then comes Vikrath Singh Kurrara my last brother. he is 6 years younger than me.
  
• then my wife... Geet Singh Kurrana/Handa. she is 17years and from hosiarpur
• how can i forget Samira Shah, the love of my life. i loved her to the core... she is 24 years old
• ofcourse Ronith Gujral the mystery man.. all i know abt him is that he is 24 year old friend of Samira and a business man

• importantly my staff people,
• Adhitya Sharma, my trusted right hand man.. he is my chief accountant
• then comes pinky kapoor, Adhitya's secretary... the only work she does is eating..
• Sasha my chief architectand tasha her secretary...
  

• abt myself is that, I'm 26 year old and i handle the Kurrana constructions. i'm considered a quiet person. not that i mind though. i'm known to attract lot of female attention, but after the breakup with Samira i'm not very much intrested in any women. staying away from them is better off for me and my naive bros... and i make sure of it.

precap: next i'll tell you what happened in hosiyarpur.. and whom i met and saved...

ok... the above is the cs... not fully but still... hope this is ok... will give update next sat or sun... will try to give before that but still... press the like button and comment... for pm just say so in your comments and will buddy you...

Originally posted by: spvd

its Deepa dear...why dont u post it here? its like one part there and other part here...
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hi... its me maan again... i'm gonna introduce my family and others...

</font>

• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">firstly </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Dev Singh Kurrara is my younger brother he is 3 years younger than me.</font>
• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">then comes</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Vikrath Singh Kurrara my last brother. he is 6 years younger than me.
  </font>
• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">then my wife... </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Geet Singh Kurrana/Handa. she is 17years and from hosiarpur</font>
• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">how can i forget </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Samira Shah, the love of my life. i loved her to the core... she is 24 years old</font>
• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ofcourse </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Ronith Gujral the mystery man.. all i know abt him is that he is 24 year old friend of Samira and a business man</font>

• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">importantly my staff people, </font>
• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Adhitya Sharma, my trusted right hand man.. he is my chief accountant</font>
• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">then comes pinky kapoor,</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Adhitya's secretary... the only work she does is eating..</font>
• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sasha my chief architect</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and tasha her secretary...
  </font>

• <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">abt myself is that, </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I'm
  26 year old and i handle the Kurrana constructions. i'm considered a
  quiet person. not that i mind though. i'm known to attract lot of
  female attention, but after the breakup with Samira i'm not very much
  intrested in any women. staying away from them is better off for me and
  my naive bros... and i make sure of it.</font>

precap: <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">next i'll tell you what happened in hosiyarpur.. and whom i met and saved...</font>

<font color="#FF0000">ok...
the above is the cs... not fully but still... hope this is ok... will
give update next sat or sun... will try to give before that but still...
press the like button and comment... for pm just say so in your
comments and will buddy you... </font>

actually I dont want to do it here cos I seriusly dont want to lose the comments of the readers when they remove GHSP fourm... Sorry yaar... That is y gave link cos I can view all the comments in one place... If u feel otherwise will copy here also...

nice concept

Precap:

Hi this is me… remember me….? Ya its me maan… ok now will give you a precap of what I'm gonna tell you in the coming chapter.

As I have told you before, I've planned to leave to hoshiyarpur. i have gotten into all lots of problems from the time I reached there.

First a girl came running towards my jeep and I would have probably hit her

Next the same girl goes swimming without knowing how to swim. I told you women are weird. I guess she was doing this to gain attention.

Then when I decide to get that girl home… all hell goes lose… I had to witness their stupid family drama…

The ugliest thing was what the people of the village decided to do with a widowed girl. I can't believe such things happen even in today's world. But then my life takes a u turn from that time…

So follow my story to know what happens next in detail.

So this is the precap for chapter 1….. … will update on Fri. or sat…. if you have any questions do ask, will answer. Comment and like it