Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD) - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys next part...

I'm a gadhi, ullu ki patti... pata nahi mujhme dimag hai bhi ya nahi... Babaji.. aapne mujhe kyu banaya. I cursed my self...as I got ready... I know he is angry with me... aur nahi tho kya... any one will be.. par pata nahi.. what happens to me.. I hurt him unwontedly every time... I have decided to cheer him up somehow... I will defo get his forgiveness for sure...making up my mind I entered the car to go to his office... KC... this is the first time I'll be going to him office.. I felt nervous... as I saw the huge building... I got down from the car and entered the office... holding his breakfast... He was so angry that he dint take his food.. I have cooked for him... All his favorites... I entered the office... Wow.. what a beautiful place.. bilkul Maan ji ki tarah.. perfect or proper... I smiled..

Yes... whom do you want???? Came a very cold voice of a lady... I turned around to see a lady standing with her arms crossed... a frown on her face... Babaji.. What was she wearing...it was as though she forgot to wear her pants today.. itni chote kapde.. I thought as I looked at her..

Hello??? Behenji... are you even listening.. oh.. English nahi ati kya??? She mocked... I dint like that tune at all...

I know .. me speak english... I tried to be confident... but English as in defo not my forte... I am good at writing.. but speaking... don't ask me... I get nervous... and this lady was making me more nervous.. Ronith also told me to talk in english for me to get confident.. but I feel shy so I have always avoided talking in that language previously.. today I realized what a big mistake I have done...

Ha.. ha. Ha.. she was laughing..kamini

Behenji... tume English nahi ati.. tho bol deti... use marne ki kya zaroorath thi??? She laughed.. and few people came towards us...

Ok.. tell me. Whom do you wanna see... She asked me...

Wo.. Maan ji ko...

Maan ji..?? Who Maan ji??? Look... I think you have come to the wrong place..

Nahi... I want see Maan ji... Maan Singh Kurrana... I said... but suddenly I felt very shy... Why I dint understand... I have always called him Maan ji.. but today when I took his full name.. I don't know why I felt so shy..

Kya??? MK... tume Mk se milna hai... she asked me surprised...

Mk?? Kon MK??? Hume Maan ji se milna hai... pls move... I told her... getting irritated by the questions...

Aur why do you want to see him?? She asked again...suddenly getting more interested

Dekhiye... I don't think mujhe aapse yeh sab kehna hai... so..Pls... saying I started walking inside...

Look behenji... you can't just go and see MK like that.. She shouted behind me... and who do you think you are... just to go in like that... she started... I was really pissed off...

Look miss... chote kapde... I don't have time for you... I', Geet... Geet Maan Singh Kurrana... his wife... so now leave me alone... I need to give my husband food... I told her in a very confident tone and left a shocked Miss chote kapde standing there...

I was really in a foul mood from the morning.. not only from the morning.. but from last night... I just couldn't calm down... the hurt.. which I felt yesterday has turned into anger... and so I left home early... without food.. but now.. I am really feeling hungry... I thought of going into the canteen to get myself something to eat... as I stepped out I could see Sasha talking to someone... I looked a bit further.. and was shocked to see Geet standing there.. I entered my cabin and switched on the camera and the speakers... and I could clearly see them and hear them... I was first angry why did she come here and why was she making a scene here... but then later...all this vanished, when I saw her blush... did she just blush when saying my name??? what was the meaning of all this.. I wondered... and when she said she was my wife... and I'm her husband... time just stopped for me... I never knew such a small acknowledgment could make me so happy... I smiled at my wife... my cute wife.. as she walked towards my cabin...Damn.. she is coming here... I quickly closed the window on the screen and started to act as thought I was busy... within few min.. I heard a knock... my heart was thudding... with excitement... I seriously dint know why I felt like this... if I remembered correctly.. I was supposed to be angry on her... and here... I was feeling like a teenager who was waiting for his crush...

Come in... I said.. Trying to sound rude and serious... but that was the last thing I was feeling right now...

Good morning.. Maan ji.. she spoke in that sweet voice of hers... I dint know how she could sound so pleasant always...

Geet... What are you doing here?? I asked... Again.. putting on my act...

Wo.. Maan ji.. I bought you breakfast... Aapne nahi khaya na... she looked down guilty...

Its ok... I have taken something here itself... I lied.. Just then my stomach growled... I was embarrassed...dokheybas pet... and then Geet giggled... What a melodious giggle it was... I just wanted to hear it for ever...

Maan ji... Sorry na... she said pouting.. and holding her ear... so cute she looked.. I just wanted to hugged her and kiss those red cherry lips... God... I'm crazy...for those lips...

Dekho Geet... I tried talking..

Nahi... pls.. First you have to forgive me... Then only.. dekhiye.. I have made so much for you...pls forgive me na... pls pls pls... she started pleading... I just couldn't stop admiring her face... God I feel so helpless. All I want to do was sit here and look at her face. Hear her talk.

Pls na Maan ji .. she asked... coming close to me...

Don't... I practically shouted... I knew if she came closer... I would not Leave her... And I also knew she was not ready for me...yet...

Maan ji... She whispered... as tears left her eyes... sorry.. she said again... as she left the room... I signed... I just made her cry again.. how could i... she was looking so beautiful.. that white and red salwars suited her so well.. I defo needed to have more control... I thought as I opened the box... And found my favorite food...I gobbled the contents of it... and my stomach was full and contented... now the next thing was to get something for Geet and also prepare for today's evening.. today was Dev's birthday.. and I had planned a small party at home... I made a call and left for the mall.. I wanted to buy something for Geet... and may be go ahead in our relationship...

Kya bakwas kar rahe ho Samira... yelled Ronith.. he couldn't believe what she was saying..

No Ronith I'm telling the truth..

Shut up.. I don't believe you... how can i... she is just 19... and he is like 29... are you kidding me??? He asked suddenly dejected...

Look Ronith.. I'm telling the truth... kitna bhi dard deta ho.. this is reality.. Geet is married to Maan... unke shadi ko pure 2 sal ho gaya hai... and now cos of you I don't want probs in their life... Samira said... in a really calm and controlled voice...

What.. but.. but.. I really like her Sam... I have never felt like this before... he spoke.. feeling pain..

It will pass Roni...

Accha... are you out of it.. have you moved on... did you forget Maan Sam... he yelled at her.. badi ayi.. mujhe kahne... he mocked her...

Pls Roni.. my story is different...

Oh.. really.. how different... you left Maan waiting for you there like a looser... And disappeared from this place for a year... but I'll not leave Geet Sam.. Ronith said... glaring at her...

Pls Ronith.. don't.. I left Maan cos I was forced into doing so... if not I'll never leave him.. even death couldn't separate me from him...

Oh.. Pls Sam... I know all these are just dialogues... He mocked her...

Accha.. dialogues??? My pain.. my suffering... is just dialogues for you??? She started crying as she remembered the hard times. The nights she had cried herself to sleep. The heartbreak which she still suffers from

All these years... I have suffered... and you are mocking me??? Apne aapko mera dost kahte ho na.. This is what you know abt your dost??? She asked pushing him..

Huh?? Bolo?? You know how much I love Maan... till now I feel this love for him.. but I also know that he is not mine.. He has suffered cos of me... but no more.. I want him to be happy with Geet... I want them to be happy... for that I'll do anything... She yelled at him..

And you say I left him like a loser?? No Ronith.. I dint... I was in much worser situation... when my dad came to know I was going to marry Maan... he stopped me... he locked me up in my room.. I wanted Maan.. I knew he would be waiting for me.. .so I jumped off the balcony.. and then I dint know what happened... I came to my sensed only 2years ago... I was told that I was mentally sick... you get it.. I went mad... and was in the asylum... but when I came back.. I found out that Maan was married.. I went in and congratulated him.. I wanted him to be happy Ronith... pls.. Let him and Geet be happy.. she pleaded him..

But I love Geet.. Sam...

I know.. But she is someone else's wife.. can't you see that Ronith... Samira asked desperately...

Ok.. I'll stop.. But if she comes to me.. then... if she comes to me.. I'll not leave her.. not even for your friendship.. Ronith said.. as he turned to leave the room...

That will never happen.. at least till I'm alive...hamesha sacche pyar ki jeeth hoti hai Roni... you'll understand as I have. Samira said with confidence...

Geet.. chall na... Meera pulled me..

Pls Meer... I'm not in the mood... I wined... I was really sad that Maan ji did not forgive me and it is correct also... I deserve it..

Dekh Geet... we are going to the mall... we have to get you something nice to wear for the party.. Meera offered...

But Meer I already have so many clothes... Moreover I'm not in the mood... I wined again trying to drown myself in self pity

Stop it Geetu... chall ab uth... we are going. Saying she started pulling me...may be I can get something for Maan ji to pacify him... so maybe going to the mall was not such a bad idea. Thinking I went along with Meera. Yash came along.. and when we reached the mall, I saw Ronith waiting there.. I immediately felt a bit uncomfortable...Meera noticed that...

Kya hua Geet?? She asked me...

Wo..nothing Meera... I mumbled. I just dint want to tell her all this now...

Hmm.. Ok.. badh me.. saying we both left to find something...

Maan.. what do you think.. Samira asked me again.. we were in the botiwue... and I wanted to buy Geet a beautiful sari... a token of a new beginning... But somehow.. I dint like anything

Yaar..what is this.. we are here for the past 2 hours and you don't even like one sari... Sam moaned.. she was getting tired and irritated..

Samira... I want something special... I said with a dreamy smile...

Hmmm lagta hai proble sought out ho gaya hai... she asked with a teasing smile..

What problem??? There was no problem...

Huh??? Ya right... yesterday whole night you were saying how hurt you were and today like this.. yaar.. it is correct oly.. never believe a man who is in love.. she teased again...

Oye.. chall chal... kam kar.. Geet keliye accha sa sari chuno... faltu bathey badh me...

Accha ji.. ab my words are faltu for you... kya zamana a gaya hai... dost... dost na raha... pyar pyar na raha... zindagi.. ouch... what Maan.. tumne mujhe mara...

Not me.. I think the people of this store... stop singing Samira... you are giving the donkeys compex.. saying I left her and went to look at other saries...

After another 2 hours, I bought 2 saris... I really liked them.. and Geet would look hevely in them... I paid the bill and Samira was busy drooling at the cakes in the caf... Ja.. go and get one for you and for me some coffee.. I'll just be back... saying I walked towards the elevator...

The elevator door opened...

Hmmm... Roni.. I heard a moan... I looked up to see Ronith holding... Or to say eating some girl's face... I dint care... I was abt to look away.. but I saw that girl's dress... I was shocked... it was a white and red salwars... And the handbag was something I remember... it was Geet's... I just couldn't move... the lift's door closed and left the floor.. but still I couldn't move from that place... I never in my life thought I would look at this sight... I swallowed a lump.. I wanted to cry... Cry my bleeding heart... I felt anger.. pain and it was overwhelming... that I thought I would explode...I quickly checked where the elevator stopped and ran to the floor... I searched for them.. but there were no where.. I ran towards the food court.. I found them... Ronith was sitting with Geet... and both were laughing... And I was burning.. how could she.. one time she says she is her wife.. and next time.. she is kissing another guy... What is the meaning of this.. I dint understand... I found someone shaking me...

Arrey Maan... where were you.. come.. I bought some pasteries for you and Geet... take this coffee.. saying she gave me a cup and started walking off.. I followed her.. lost in what I saw... tears fell from my eyes... and in frustration I threw the cup of coffee... I dint want anything...

Maan what the hell is wrong with you... yelled Samira...

It was her Sam... I cried... as tears stung my eyes...

What???? She asked confused...

I saw a girl kissing Ronith in the lift... I dint see the girls face... but then I saw Geet with Ronith in the caf... she and the girl wore same clothes... I told her.. as tears ran down my eyes... and blood from my heart...

Rubbish Maan... You must be hallucinating.. your mistrust and suspicion is playing games with your eyesight and brain... she said.. not paying attention to my broken self...

Shut up Sam... what do you take me for... I am MSK... Do you understand... if she wants to go behind some Ronith.. I will not feel bad abt it... she can go to hell if all I care I shouted at her and left... I couldn't believe Sam was supporting Geet...

Geet had successfully snatched everyone from me... I felt it only today...

Precap: Sam talks to Geet... explains the imp of relationship...

The party.. the night that changed many lifes... may be forever...

Guys... another part.. over.. next two part will be the imp parts of the story... the major twists...

Do like and comment..

I'll try to update quickly...

Bye take care

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Posted: 11 years ago
read in one go
awesome maan's emotion to geet' innocence
super se bht uperrr
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 13
awesome...
that Sasha grrr...
but Geet didnt cower...
OMG Maan has seen and understood something else...
this Ronith is dangerous...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
grt update after long gap
maan interested in geet but always mu her
now that ronith playing big game
precap scary plz don't separate them
i love them togetter
conti soon soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Maneet meet in office was cute poor girl is hurt. Thks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice dear
Lovely dear
Geet cook fr maan
Maan mu geet
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Maan misunderstanding Geet having extra marital affair with Ronith...

is only Ronith playing dirty or Sameera is also with him...

her very sweet behavior with Maan and Geet is making me suspiscious...

why she is coming inbetween them and trying to remove all misunderstandings between them...playing very carefully showing them that she is very good and wants them together only...she should have maintained distance with Maan after she whatever reason ditched him and he married Geet...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Idiot Ronith playing games in everybody life.
Sam is really great still now.
Can't wait for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part i think that boy playing game with maan waiting for next update

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Posted by: Mystic_Muse

11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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