Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
nice part read all part in one go...
Story progressing is too good...
But prologue and part 1 made my heart pump loud...
Waiting for upcoming update...
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it . Awesome update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
part 6
nice part...
is he really using Geet o make Sameera jealous?
idiot Maan...
and why the hell is he taking that woman along with Geet shopping?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sri91

nice part read all part in one go...
Story progressing is too good...
But prologue and part 1 made my heart pump loud...
Waiting for upcoming update...
Continue soon


thank you yaar...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Thank you for the comments…… coming up next part

the blue part will be Maan

and this one will be geet...

others not imp...😆

Recap: Maan and Geet's reception where Maan intros Geet with Samira…. Nani advices Maan to take responsibility of Geet from now on… Maan sees Geet changing clothes and is unable to get the image out of his mind…

Ab age…..

It was almost 4 and still I was unable to sleep. Turning and twisting also dint seem to help me… here Geet was sleeping peacefully driving away my sleep. At last knowing I would not sleep, I got up and decided of going for a jog. The time was 4:30am and I wore my jogging tracks and left the room. By the time I was back it was 5:30 and the room was warm. I came in and again was stuck to the figure that slept on my bed. Geet was wearing my white Kurta and sleeping. I kept staring at the cute angel when I saw her pouting in her sleep and suddenly pulling my pillow towards her and hugging it… I smiled seeing her childishness I would have gone inside the bathroom but was stopped at the next vision. She put her leg on the pillow and that is when I saw her creamy legs…. What the hell was I thinking… but I couldn't stop my thoughts though…. She was lying on her side, with one leg bent on the pillow and another leg slightly bent. Her white in skirt was up till her thigh with the kurta giving me a clear view of her legs, beautifully made legs…. I thought unable to remove my eyes from them…. I smacked my head to get me out of this dream land and forced my legs into the wash room. I stood under the shower, which dint seem to help me too much as my thoughts fluctuated from last nights vision to today mornings. I finished my bath and came out of the washroom hoping that I could see her like that, but somewhere I was disappointed to see her standing up and looking outside……

It was morning… this was the first time in my life I was getting up at 6. I saw the bathroom door locked and guessed he was in there….. I went near the window and started looking outside when I heard the door open and he came out… he looked so cute… the towel was around his shoulders and he looked so adorable… I felt like doing cuchi coo with him, but restrained my self….

Tum mere kapdo me kya karrahe ho? He asked me… (What are you doing in my clothes?)

I did not answer... how could I? I dint brush still… it is so gross to talk without brushing… I showed him my hand to stop and ran inside the washroom to brush and take a bath.

I finished my activities and that is when I realized that I dint have any clothes on… I searched the small cupboard in the washroom and found my enemy… the robe. I wore it as I dint have any other option and came outside praying it would grow bigger or he shd not be in the room. But to my luck both dint happen… he was standing there combing his hair and when I came there he stood staring at me again……

Why does this happen to me again and again… first last night then today morning and now this…? I wonder did this girl do all this on purpose….. I just kept on staring at her….

Suneye…. I heard her calling… but I dint respond or shd I say I dint hear it properly…

Suneye…she yelled bringing me out of my staring session….

Han… I said coming out

Wo... apka naam kya hai…. She asked in the most innocent voice I have ever heard….. I was really amused...We were married and I saw her partially naked… ok that was something I got to stop thinking abt, and she doesn't even know my name????

Suneye…she yelled again bringing me back home….

Han… Maan mera name Maan Singh Kurrana….. I replied her trying not to feel embarrassed…

To me Geet Maan Singh Kurrana hue???? She asked me again…

Esa hi lagta hai… I said trying to stop the bubbling warmth in my heart…. This girl was able to bring in feeling that I never had…. Weird… I thought….

Ji she said looking down trying to pull the end of the robe…. I shook my head and decided to go down.

Geet…. Taiyar rahna…… aaj shopping jayenge… I said and left…

What was I supposed to say…? I know he has been kind with me… better than my family would ever be but how much can I expect from him. I wore one of the salwars he got me when I was in the hospital and left to the kitchen to prepare breakfast…

Breakfast was a quiet affair in this house. What surprised me was that, even women sat with the men and ate… I was really nervous… I dint think they will like this….. But the family praised it…. Nani gifted me a ruby necklace which was so very beautiful.

Maan bete give her your mother's nake too…. She is the bahu of this house now…. Nani said smiling at me

Yes Nani…Maan replied as he nodded at me.

Geet after breakfast come up… saying he left the dining table…

I finished breakfast and cleared every thing even though Nakul kaka dint encourage it… he kept on telling me it was his job and I shd just rest as new brides don't work… but I still finished it and rushed into his room,…. I mean our room…..

Geet he said stretching his hand and giving me a box… I opened it and was surprised to see a really beautiful pair of bangles.

Ye mere ma ki hai…. He said as he saw me looking at it in awe….

Sukriya… I said but stopped when he took the bangles from the box and slowly slipped it onto me with that same dazed look in his eyes…. I couldn't stop the blush rise up my cheek…. I looked down unable to see his eyes looking at me like that….

What the hell was wrong with me…? This girl is gonna make me crazy one day…. I thought as I left her hand and moved few steps back wards… I saw her blush and ho God she looked so cute…. And then I was tormented by the visions of last night and today morning… I shook my head to clear my thoughts….

Geet hum Mall jayenge… par uske pehle office me half hour keliye jayenge... i said trying to think in a proper manner…

Ji.. me thiyar ho saying she kept the empty box in the cupboard locker and started moving out of the room…. We both sat in the car and moved towards KC. I had to give Adhi a file and instruct him. I needed to take Geet to get her clothes as she had none and also show nani that I care abt he… I kept on telling my self this as I drove towards the office. The work was over before time and I asked Geet to get ready… all my planning went to the drain when I saw Samira there.

Samira ji aap yahan? Geet asked her

Geet? Wwwhat are you doing here? Samira asked Geet looking shocked…. I smirked mentally as I knew she was shocked…

She is my wife Samira she has rights here… I told her with an emotionless face… and was rewarded by seeing her face pale off… good you deserve this…. I thought…..

Ya... ofcourse…. Where are you going? Samira asked Geet trying to regain herself

Hum dono maal ja rahe han… Geet replied in her own chirpy self…. I felt like smacking my head….

Ya… were going for shopping for Geet…. I said trying to take control of the maal situation…

Han Samira ji… aap bhi humare sath ayiye na…..she offered Samira making me wonder abt how nave Geet was… do such women really exist or was it all a faade like how Samira had put on….

Hum dono na nahi sunege…. He na Maan ji??? She asked looking hopefully at me…. I dint know what to say…. I kept staring at her……

Aur mujhe kapdo pe apki rai bhi mil jayegi…. She said smiling….

Tho accha… me bhi chalthi hun Samira said making me feel uncomfortable… I saw both the ladies look at me with hopeful glances, and then I thought Samira had good sense of fashion so she might be of help to Geet and may be he might also prove how good he is towards Geet…. Thinking all this, I accepted to take the ladies…..

I went out and opened the passenger seat door for Geet to get in. She came towards the car and smiled at me…. And instead of getting into the passenger seat, she dodged me and opened the back door and sat inside…. I kept staring at the opened door in my hand and shook my head… this girl is hopeless…. I wondered at that moments will she ever able to handle the life here in Delhi? At that time Samira came and sat beside Geet and I took the driver's place. I, Maan Singh Kurrana officially felt like a driver now…. Me sitting in the driver's seat driving and Geet and Sam sitting in the back talking random stuff… I gulped down my irritation and took them both to the maal for shopping….

Hey Babaji I whispered looking at the maal… this place was humongous. I thought maal was some shops name, but this place has so many shops in one place…. I was awe struck and stood staring at all this when I felt Maan's hands around my waist…. This man had to stop doing this… every time he touches me, I feel my heart beat rising and difficulty in breathing… anyway I know I cannot do anything as Samira ji and other people might think bad abt Maan. So I continued standing there and trying to listen to what Samira ji was telling me….

Ok Geet tume kya kya chahiye? Samira asked excited……

Wo…. I started when Maan stopped…

Everything Samira…. She is my wife... she gets everything and the best ones at it…. He smirked looking around… I still can't understand why he keeps on bloating abt me being his wife….. He is defo a weird man….

Ok ab hum sari aur kuch evening gowns dekhenge said Samira as she moved forward…. I took this opportunity to hold her hand and moved on with her…. I was really getting uncomfortable with Maan always holding me here and there……

Yahan Delhi ke sabse acchi sari milthi hai Geet… yeh dekho she said showing me a light blue chiffon sari with bead and stone work….. It looked good but when I saw the price I almost fainted….

25000 isskeliye? I almost yelled attracting the sales man's attention… he came near asking the problem…

Bhaiya mujhe lagta hai ke price me mistake hua hai… I said confidently showing him the sari and the price written on it…..

No no maam…. This is correct… he said a bit confused...

Kya…. Is keliye itna? Hoshiyarpur me tho itne dam me 6 sari karidlu I said irritated.

But maam this is Delhi… lagta hai ki aap us village se kabhi bahar nahi ayi… he mocked me…. I was really shocked….

Yadi aapkeliye ye zyada hai to then leave….we have all saris only from 7000 here... he said with a smirk… I have never in my life heard someone else insulting me… and tears stung my eyes…. Moreover Samira ji was also not here….. She was in the salwaar section.

Oh tume English samaj nahi ati na…. me ne kaha… bahar jao…. Tum jase logo keliye yaha kapde nahi bicte…. He said enjoying my state….

Pata nahi... kaha kaha se ate hai…. Jebh me pasa nahi chale aye karidne taj Mahal…. He mocked at me… I couldn't control my tears and they fell off my eyes…..

Oye… rona dhona bahar karo…. Yeh carpet bohot mehenaga hai said the manager coming forward….. I felt miserable…. And started looking here and there for Maan. Not finding him, I just ran out of the shop and from this big maal…..

I was really not into this entire shopping thing. I sat down in the caf and was doing some office work, when Samira called me…..

Maan where is Geet? She asked worried….

What do you mean where Geet is…..? I thought she was with you??? I yelled unable to control myself…. I dint care abt the strange looks the people in the caf gave me… I took my laptop and dashed toward the shop where Geet and Samira were supposed to be……

Precap: anjane sahar me Geet bichari? Ya Jane sahar me doodta Maan bichara…..?

Hope this was OK…… do comment and like…..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
hai,thanks for the pm ,but i dont read other ffs or ss other than ipk,so sorry,i only like ipk ones.do continue soon and do pm me ur arshi ffs update.continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Dear, im havin a request for u ! I dunt want to hurt u but can u plz pm only arshi updates! But the update is amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
nice update...
Maan is doing purposefuly to make samira j...
Maneet alwayzzz cute...
Cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
nice update
continue soon😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan is trying to make Samira jealous...

for satisfying his ego...it is not wrong but it should not go over board or else Maaneet relation will break...

Geet is so naive that she don't understand Maan's intentions...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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