Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD) - Page 5

part 4
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so they are married now...
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Hi guys thank you for the coments… and for the new comers…. Welcome and hope you enjoy the read…. Coming up the next part……

Recap: Maan and Geet shocked on their marriage as one thinks she is a widow and doesn't deserv this and the other thinks she is a kid….. both go to get ready for the reception thinking how they are gonna explain all this to each other……

Ab age….

Naniji ne hume unke sath ek bohoth hi bade hall me legayi…. Par ajeeb ghar hai… hall me bisthar aur sofa dono laga kar rakha hai….. tv bhi hai aur almira bhi….. pata nahi, bade gharane me athe hi inke dimag ajeeb thara se chalne lagtha hoga. (Naniji took me to a big hall…. but this is a really weird house, they have both a bed and a sofa in the same room. Tv is also there with an almira…..dont understand., after coming to a big house people start thinking weirdly.)

Bete aap pehle nahalijiye ga. Ye ladkiya aapki madad karengi… teek hai…. Nani ne yeh sab mere sir par hath rakte kaha…. (child first take bath. These girls will help you. Ok? Nani said all this keeping her hand on my head)

Par yeh sab kyu? Mujhe nahana ata hai……( but why them? I know how to take bath)

Nahi bete…. Nahane se pahle kuchi tel lagaya jatha hai… unsab keliye yeh madad karengi…..(no child, before taking bath, some oils will be applied on you for that these girls will help you)

Unhe itne acche tarah se bath karthe huye sunkar mujeh mana karne ka man nahi hua… tho me razi ho gayi….. nani bahar chaligayi aur ladkiya mere gehne utharne lagi…. Mujhe gudgudi honelagi thi…. Par avaz na nikalne paye issliye hot chbane lagi thi…. Ladkiya mujhe ek darwaze ke under le gayi aur letne ko kaha…. Me let gayi…. Ek ladki kuch bohot hi acche kushboo wali tel lekar malish suru kiya….. jab thak pair aur hath me thi, thab thak teek tha…. Par ab ek aur ladki mere robe wali kapde bhi nikalne lagi tho me dar gayi aur jat se us bench se uthar gayi…. (Lisning to her talk like this, I could not refuse her. Nani left the room and the girls started removing my jewelry… I had to bit my lips to avoid giggling as it was tickling me. The girls took me into a room and asked me to lie down, I lied down,then a girl started massaging me with a very fragnent oil. All was good till they were doing it on my hands and legs but now another girl started removing my robe and I jumped out of the bench as I got scared….)

Dekho… hamare yahan… admi bhi hath aur pair ki malish karthe hai… un…und..under ki nahi….. us par phir yeh ladkiya hasne lagi….

(listen… in out house even for the men, massages are done for hands and legs n…no..not u..un…under… lisning to this the girls started laughing….)

Yadhi ap sab ka hasna band hogaya ho tho bahu ko thyar kar de…. Ek awaz boli…. Palat kar dekha tho nani, hath bande kadi thi….. mujhe bohot sharam aya…. Me iss choti se kapde me unke samne besharmo ke thara kadi thi….. (if you have finished laughing, can you get my daughter in law ready? Said a voice. I turned and saw it was nani standing, crossing her arms on her chest. I was feeling very shy. I was shamlessly stading infront of her wearing this short cloth around)

Wo madam hume unki full body massage dene se mana kar rahi hai…. Ek ladki ne kaha…..(that madam is stopping us from giving her full body massage said a girl)

Wo karegi na… unkhe sharam ata hoga… app sab bahar jayi ye aur Nancy ko bulayi ye ga…. Nani ne skth avaz me kaha… phir unhone mujhe dekha aur muskurathe boli….. bete, Nancy bohot acchi hai… wo ap ke peet pe malish kardegi…. Ap unke samne aram se rah sakthe hai….. (she would say so… she would be feeling shy… all of you leave from here and call Nancy to come in…nani said in a stern voice. Then she saw me and said with a smile child nancy is very nice. She I'll do your back massage. You can be at ease around her.)

Teek hai Nani ma… thabi yad aya….. kya me apko Nani ma khsakte hai? (ok nanima…. That is when I remembered… can I call you nani ma?)

Zarur bete…. Isse sunekeliye humar kan bekarar they….. kehte huye unhone mera sir chuma aur palat kar nikal gayi…. (sure child. My ears were waiting for this…. Telling so she kissed my forehead, turned around and left the room)

Thode der bad ek 45 se 50 sal ki aurath under ayi aur muskurathe huye mujhe apne robe nikal kar niche ki taraf dek kar let ne ko kaha aur vahan se chali gayi…. Me apne na hone ke barabar kapde ko nikala aur let gayi…. 2 min me wo ayi aur upna kam karne lage…… pehel bohot ajeeb laga par phir ek dam aram mil gaya…. Pata na chala kab need bhi a gayi……

(after sometime, a 45 to 50 year old lady came in giving me a warm smile. She asked me to remove my robe and lie facing downwards and left from there. I removed the not so covering cloth from my body and lied down as she had instructed. She came back in 2 min and started doing her work. First it was really weird but then I started feeling comfortable. I dint know when I feel asleep)

Maan was still in deep thought, when he came out from the bath. He still dint know how she was gonna react to all this… now only she had come out from an abusive family and now all this… he thought this was too fast for her young age…. Damit she is only 17 and all this is too much he said while combing his hair. It was nearly 8 and the guests were arriving….. he glanced into the mirror one last time to check his reflection out and moved out of the room……

Bete you look really good, he heard his nani complement him….

Thankyou nani…. Geet is ready? He asked still worried of her not understanding and throwing tantrums…

Yes bete…. She would have gotten ready much earlier but she stopped and giggled…. She seemed to enjoy Nancy's massage too well that she slept…. She said still smiling….

Ho ….

Before you say something…. She might have been very tired too bete….. she said smiling…. But then suddenly her face changed serious……I want you to meet me tonight after the reception; I need to talk to you something important…. She said patting me on my cheeks...

What is the matter nani….hope all is well???

Yes bete….just remember to come to me… ok saying she left to get Geet…. I stood looking as she dissapeard into the room…. I knew nani was gonna ask me abt Geet and I am gonna tell her the truth. Nani is wise and had always helped me in the past…. I knew she would help me in this too….. I would have thought more if not for my mind going blank looking at her…. Wow… was the only breath that came out of my mouth looking at the lady in white… Geet looked stunning in the orange saree…. It was as though an angel came down…. She was an angle of course…. A small angel… I thought as I took her hand, nodding at her confused look and we both desended the stair to the waiting guests…….

Sari aur gehne bohot kubsoorath they…. Nani ki pasad tho bilkul kamal ki hai…. Me ne sari pehenli aur man me Preeti di ka shukriyada kiya…. Unhone hi mujhe sikaya tha….. aur gehne pehene, ladkiyo ne mere chehre par kuch rang dalna surukiya aur jab thayar hui tho apne aap ko aine me pehchaan nahi payi…. Me tho bilkul ek film star ki thara lag rahi thi…. Thabi nani ji ayi aur mujhe bhar le gayi….. bahar jathe hi meri nazar unpe pada….. kya kaho… rajkumar lag rahe the…. Nahi nahi… unsebhi acche lag rahe the….. par wo tho phir se mujhe goorne lage…. Pata nahi itne kui goorthe hai….. phir unhone mere hath unke hatho me liya aur hum neech chalegaye….

Mene mele ke alawa itne sare log nahi dekhe… esa lagraha tha ki mano raja rani ka vivah that aur unke praja ayi ho… sab log suit boot pe the aur unke sath ayi auntia mujhe goor goor kar dekh rahe tha…. Sab accha chal raha tha aur hum waha rakhe kursi par bait gaye…. Bade ghar ke log bhi na ajeeb hai… ek admi ne bhi thofa nahi laya…. Kanjoos kahike….. mofth me kana kayenge kya…. Par nani ji sab ko muskurathe huye mila rahi thi aur me bhi unke kushi me khush thi……

(the sari and the jwellary were absolutely gorgeous. Nani's taste was fantastic. I wore the sari and thanked Preeti di mentally. She was the one who taught me this…. I wore the jewlary and the girls started appling some colors on my face. Then when I was ready, I couldn't even recognize myself in the mirror. I was looking like some film star. That time nani ma came in and took me. When I went out my eyes fell on him. What shall I say, he looked like a prince. No no he looked much better than that… but now he was again staring at me… I dint understand why he always stare's at me so much…. Then he took my hands in his and we moved downstairs. )

(apart from the fare I have not seen so many people in one place. It was looking as though it was the king and queen's wedding and the subjects had come to bless them…every male was dressed in suit and boot and the aunties who accompanied them were staring at me….every thing was ok and we sat down on the chairs arrainged for us people from big houses are really weird….. one person also dint bring a gift… all were misers…. Every one came to eat free food. But nani ji was welcoming everyone with a smile and I was also happy seeing her happy)

This is the limits… how many people did these guys invite, that too in such a short duration….. I was really getting pissed off and Geet seemed to be a bit restless but she did have a smile on her face…. It was nearly 10 when the crowed started diluting when I heard a rumbling sound from somewhere….. I strained my ears and then it struck me… it was from Geet and she was hungry…. Of course she dint eat anything from the morning and also needed her medicines….. I aksed someone to get a plate for her and nani bought it personally for Geet…. I really liked to see nani so happy. She was never so free with Samira…. But Geet seemed to have warmed up to her so quickly… I was smiling when nani pushed the plate in front of me and forced me to feed Geet…. I took it without a word… Geet was hungry and I knew the more I argued the more she'd be hungry…. I was feeding her and Geet ate staring at me… I could see he eyes tearing up…. I thought there was something spicy… but she declined when I gave her water…. Such a kid I thoguth as I fed her….

Babaji, ap kya kar rahe ho…. Pehle nani ji se itna pyar aur ab yeh bhi…. Mujhe esa lagraha hai ki mere mama aur papaji vapas a gaye ho….. me apne asu rokh nahi pa rahi hoon…… par mujhe pani bhi nahi chahiye…. Ma kahthi thi, pani pene se pet bhar jatha hai, tho phir me itne accha khana kese kha thi…… mene unhe muskurate huye pehli bhar… haai.. kitne acchi muskurahat hai…. Par pata nahi hamesha kam hi kyu dekate hai use…….. me aur khati gayi ki achanak unhone mere hath me plate thamadiya aur ek jagha par dekte rahe…. Nazar hatake dekha tho wo kisi aurat ko dekh rahe the….. wo aurath hath me phool liye kadi thi… unke ankoo me aasu bhi tha. Wo pehle unhe dekha aur phir mujhe…. Mujhe dekte hi unke ankho me kuch aur bhi dikayi dia…. Pata nahi kyu par mere dill me ek ajeeb se bechini hone lagi…..

(babaji…. What are you doing… first nani ji was so loving towards me now he is also doing something like this….. I feel as though my parents have come back to me… I was unable to control my tears, It was the first time I'm seeing him smile what a beautiful smile but don't know why he shows it so less…. I was still eating when suddenly placed the plate in my hand and started looking at one direction…. I moved my eyes and saw him staring at a lady. And that lady stood there staring back holding a bocky in her hand.she first saw him and then looked at me. I could seem so many things in her eyes. I dint know but my heart suddenly started getting restless..)

What is she doing here…? I thought as I gave the plate in Geet's hand. I could see the broken look in her eyes and tears welling up in them, but this was not my fault…. This could be her, it could have been us, but she was the one who spoilt it…. now why is she here???? I thought as I saw her coming up on stage… I saw Geet giving the plate to a worker and getting up with me, my eye involuntarily moved on the plate to check if it was over or not…. Geet needed to take her medicines….. I was agin lost in these thoughts when I heard Samira call me….

Maan congradulations… she said controlling her tears…. Suprisinglyi dint feel moved towards the tears in her eyes which she tactfully wiped off but now when I wonder, I seriously dint know why I couldn't feel guilty….. it was she who had ended what we had… it was she who walked away when I needed her the most… now why is she behaving like I betrayed hre?

Shukriya I heard Geet say as she received the bokhe from her hand…. Samira knew Kurrana's never accepted gifts, but still why did she bring this, at the moment, Dev came and called us for dinner….. Geet happily moved away…. I cannot believe this girl…. I thought she just finished her food, and she is still enthusiastic abt this? I nodded my head and smiled as I saw her hopping towards the dining hall forgetting her newly married husbanc….. Bachhi hai bilkul bachi I whispered forgetting Samira who was shocked and was still staring at us…….

Precap: SR of ajeeb admi with bachhi dulhan……..

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part 5
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shes really a kid...
what is this ex doing here?
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As said I really don't know how to finish this…. May be I shd just write it off in short or something……. Anyways… this is the next part….

Recap: Maan and Geet get ready for the reception. Maan feeds Geet and suddenly finds Samira there…

Ab age…..

I looked on as Geet stuffed her mouth with every thing in the menu…. I couldn't help but smile. In my entire life I have never seen such a girl…. I looked around and saw nani, dev and Vicky giving her warm looks and smiling… I guess she does bring out the warmth in everyone's heart and she neednot even try…. I was looking around when my eyes fell on Samira. Why the hell was she coming towards me I thought when she came near by…..?

Maan… she called out softly….

Hello Sam….Samira…. how are you? I asked casually

Good Maan and I can see you are doing great too…. she said with a small smile looking at Geet…

Ya… I'm doing great…. Now my life is complete you know…. I said smirking…..

Congratulations Maan… I hope Geet fills in the empty space which…. She just stopped and looked down...

Oh don't worry Samira…. There was no empty space…. I had my family before and Geet has made a very special place in my heart….. A big one that is…. I said searching her face for any reaction….

Oh..! th…th… that is good Maan…. I..I just came to say bye…. She stammered…. Her face fell on listening to what I said… but I dint know why I couldn't feel happiness seeing her like this….

Wait… I called out as she turned to leave… you need to say so to Geet too…. I said motioning her to follow me… Luckly Geet had tried out all the dishes in the buffet and was drinking water… seeing us come towards her she placed her glass down and came forward. I went near her and held her closer to me through her waist… I could see the look on Samira's face….. I wanted her to feel bad for all this... it could have be her, it could have been us... but she left me for money… I could and will never forgive her for this…… Geet dear I whispered…. Knowing well Samira heard this as I saw her flinch…. Let me make introductions….. I said……

Geet…. This is Samira…. I said pointing out to Samira standing opposite to us…. She is my ex fianc….. I said so knowing very well Geet dint understand what a fianc…..is but Samira dint know that and I dint want to explain to her too…. thank fully Geet dint ask the meaning for what I had just said…..

Samira… this is Geet Maan Singh Kurrana… my love, my life, my wife… I said pulling Geet more closely to myself…. If Geet was confused or feeling uncomfortable she dint show it in her face… and I mentally thanked God for this…. I saw Samira's eyes sink in sadness… I wanted her to feel bad and I was getting that then why the hell wasn't I feeling happy? I wondered when I heard Samira speak….

Nice to meet you Geet….. She said with a sad smile but what happened next was unexpected….. Geet just hugged her and said hum bhi…. I stood shocked… I never expected this….. I stood staring at the girls before me as they said their byes and Samira left…….

Nani had watched this from the table where she was eating… the entry of Samira and the way Maan acted in front of her was not hidden from the old ladies eyes. She knew Maan was using Geet to get back to Samira and this was not good news… Nani called Maan and reminded him to be in her room tonight and left. The time was already 11 and every one was tired. Geet was taken into their room and dressed up for the SR. She sat in-between the flower arraignments and scented candles. She was scared and dint know what to expect. She knew very well what this was and knew a bit of what a husband and wife would do… but she was not prepared for all this. She was planning wat to say to Maan when he came in.

Maan finished his dinner and moved to Nani's room. He sat down to talk to her….

Maan bete you understand your responsibilities towards her right? Asked Nani, coming directly to the point.

Of course Nani, I'll take good care of her…don't worry… I assured her….

She is very young Maan… how… I mean…. She tried to get the correct words out…

I know Nani… she is just 17 and abt the marriage, I was gonna tell you…. But Nani stopped me before I could continue….

Maan… now leave all those things… I don't want to know what had happened…. I'm more into what you are planning to do next. Bete I saw you holding her and trying to make Samira jealous with her…. What is all this… did you bring Geet to this house for doing all this?

No no Nani… I… it... it was a mistake… I don't know what came over me to do so… but… not anymore... I tried to reassure her….

Hmmm… bete you are the adult of this house. You need to lead a life from which your brothers will learn and grow…. Pls don't do anything that would destroy this…. She asked…. I was shocked at the way Nani was talking…

Pls bete she prayed… I dint understand why she was doing this??

Nani…. Why are…. She stopped me….

Maan leave all this… just remember Geet is now your wife and I want you to learn to love and respect her… she is childish… she has come from a very different environment… Pls be by her side and teach her every thing…

I nodded my head as I dint know what to do… I had not planned all this… this marriage was the first thing that happened without my complete planning… but now I knew Geet was my responsibility, at least till she could manage on her own…

Maan bete… one more thing…. Nani started… I was surprised seeing her like this… she looked embarrassed.

What is the matter Nani???

Wo… bete… I want you to keep restrain till she is ready…. You know what I mean she said with a smile…

I still dint understand….. What are you talking abt….

My dear boy…. Today is your SR and I want you to restrain your self….. Do you understand now???? Asked Nani with a teasing smile…. Let her adjust to you and the family… I am asking you this cos of her age bete…… saying she got up…

I felt like waking my self… oh God I never thought of all this… now Geet is my wife… that means me and her… i.i cannot do this… she is a kid… god people will call me … no no… my mind was going in hyper drive with thoughts when I felt Nani shaking me….

Maan bete get up and go…. It is 1 am now... I need to sleep… she said. I slowly got up... all of a sudden my legs started to feel very heavy… I some how managed to leave her room and move towards my… I mean our room… I walked inside the room half expecting Geet to be waiting… but I felt relief when I saw her sleeping…. I changed my clothes and slept beside her silently….

It was nearly 2 in the morning when I got up. I found him sleeping near me…. Babaji yeh sab kab hua? I thought as I got up from the bed and moved towards the cupboard. I wanted to change my clothes. I searched the whole cupboard but found only his clothes. Then my eyes fell on a white kurta. I took it and decided to wear it…. I then somehow managed to find the bathroom door. I went inside and searched for the switch. But couldn't find it… I was always scared of the dark. I was thinking of a place to change my clothes when I got an idea. I placed his kurta on the bed and went closer to him. I waved my hand in front of his eyes to check if he was sleeping… after this confirmation, I went near the mirror and started removing my ornaments slowly trying to not make any noise. Then I started removing my sari and my blouse. I removed it fully and placed it on the chair that is when I realized that the kurta was on the bed. I turned around and took it and wore it… I had planned of keeping my in skirt on as I couldn't find the pant of the kurta. I folded the clothes and made my way to the bed to catch some sleep. I was really sleepy. As soon as I hit the bed, sleep took over me……

I got up with a sound of some jingle…. I opened my eyes and let it adjust to the dim moon light, when I saw her standing in front of the mirror. I wanted to call her out when I saw her moving her hand to her left side to remove something…. I got curious and stopped to see what it was when she removed her hand along with the pallu of the sari…. What next follow kept me in a trace…. I have never seen a girl stripping before me… and this was not just a girl… she was an angel…. And the rays of the moon, when it fell on her skin made them glow like silver….. How would it feel to run my hands all over was the only thought running in my mind. To make matters worse she turned around and came towards me…. I was shocked…. One part of me wanted her to come closer while another part wanted me to run from there. That is when I noticed the glitter on her waist… oh God the misery… I wanted to yell…. The moon light fell on her waist chain making it sparkle on her smooth soft waist…. And I could see her curves, though small were beautifully made…. Man what the hell was I thinking…? I closed my eyes and dint want to open them… I cannot believe what I'm seeing… God this is not fare…. First Nani talks to me abt restrain and now she is showing me a full view…. I kept mentally scolding myself for all the thoughts I had for this baccha…. Bacch…. Who am I kidding… she looks so very sexy…. No no… I told my brain… she is a kid… and she dint need all this A rated thoughts from you…. That is when I felt her lying beside me. I was scared of even breathing. I was ashamed at my thoughts of this small girl... she had come with me trusting me and here I am thinking of all adult stuff…. For the next 3 hours I tried sleeping but when every I closed my eyes... all I could see is a half naked Geet with a glittering waist chain…..

Precap: a new life... Geet and Samira shopping with maan

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