Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD) - Page 8

So good.
Poor Maan can't do anything with this innocent seducing wife.
Geet experiencing all new things. Eating with men, Maan holding her, huge mall, costly dresses.
Poor girl was left alone. Don't know where she would have gone in this unknown city.
Don't know wat is in Sam mind. She seems to be good with Geet.

part 7
nice part...
shes so adorable...
my God shes to naive...
that shopkeeper grrr...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Maan is trying to make Samira jealous...

for satisfying his ego...it is not wrong but it should not go over board or else Maaneet relation will break...

Geet is so naive that she don't understand Maan's intentions...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

Maan doesnt do it on purpose... but his scar on his heart or to say ego given by Samira makes him do all this...Geet is really naive to understand him or her relationship...

Originally posted by: snehapriya

So good.
Poor Maan can't do anything with this innocent seducing wife.
Geet experiencing all new things. Eating with men, Maan holding her, huge mall, costly dresses.
Poor girl was left alone. Don't know where she would have gone in this unknown city.
Don't know wat is in Sam mind. She seems to be good with Geet.

Geet is naive for her age and with Maan as his wife is gonna make her even more scared...

Recap: Maan takes Geet to the mall for shopping… the shopkeeper insults her and she leaves the mall in tears…. Maan searches for her……

Ab age…

Maan came to the store and found Samira talking to some one…..

How dare you… she is not some ordinary lady who you can call rubbish….. Yelled Samira to the sales man…

Samira what the hell are you doing? Where is Geet…? I told you to take care of her… If you couldn't then you shd have told me….. I growled pulling Samira out of the shop….

Par Maan she was…..

I'm warning you if I come to know you did something for her to flee like this, and then you will be in deep trouble…. I have let you off for what you did to me, but if you even think of doing something to my nave wife, you'll not be spared….. I warned her off and moved away leaving Samira in tears…… I took the car and looked out for her…. It was already 4 in the afternoon and the sun was up and shining…. Where could this girl go? I wondered…. She was new to this place and was a kid…. What if someone... God I was really getting worried…. I decided I needed help and picked up my mobile…

Hello Dev????

Yes Bro……

Dev, Geet just ran away from the mall due to some prob which I'll explain later….. For now just go out and look for her… pls tell Vicky too…. I'm gonna call Comisioner uncle… don't tell Nani anything as of now…….

Ok bro… where is Samira… you said you are taking her with you right?

Yes… I left her in the mall…. I really don't care abt her now… I need to find Geet now….

I know bhai just wanted to ask if she knew something….

No…. she doesn't know where Geet went to….. I cannot believe this girl….. Running off like this in an unknown place…. Saying I cut the call and concentrated on searching her…… she was really a kid…. Only kids run off like this… I felt helpless…. And fear clutched my insides as thoughts of something awful happening to her came to me….

I really don't know why I did this… I am an idiot… I kept on cursing myself as I wandered around some unknown area…. It was getting late…. I know I am lost… I just wanted Maan ji to get me…. I tried not to cry as people were giving me weird looks…. I was feeling hungry and thirst…. I dint have money too…. how stupid of me I chided myself as I found a park and sat down under a tree….. My feet were killing me…. Never in my life have I walked around for so long…. The sun was setting and so was my confidence….. I dint know Maan ji's number too…. moreover I was scared of the dark too…… I sat there praying my Babaji for help….. As I slept off as I was really tired…..I don't know how long I was asleep on the park bench when someone shook me awake…. I got up and saw an ugly looking man staring at me… I got scared…. By this time I realized it was really dark and the lights were also dim… I got up from the chair and ran away from that man…. he looked like a beggar but I dint wait for introductions I just ran without turning back… that is when I hit a guy and fell on by back…..

What the……. He said making me look at him… tume dikhayi nahi deti kya??? He yelled brushing his coat with his hand, removing imaginary dirt from it….

Wo… wo…. Koyi tha…… I tried saying but this man was the limits instead of helping me he glared at me…

Kya me tume koyi hero ya bevakoof lagta hun? Why the hell shd I save you……?

Chotey stop yelling at that poor girl and help her up… came a voice… I turned around and saw a beautiful lady with a girl….

Di…. Pata nahi kon hai…. And why shd I help… pata chala madad ke name pe she might want something… I will never trust such girls he said and looked at the girl who was standing with the lady….

Chodiye Di…. Said the girl as she came near me and offered her hand… I took it and got up….App teek ho? She asked me smiling and gave me some water from her side bag…..

Ji… Sukriya I said as I drank the whole bottle…. The girl first stared at me and then took out a box from her bag and gave it to me….

Jelabi…… I yelled in sear delight…. Mujhe bohot pasand hai… I said again….

Han…. Mufth me milthi hai to pasand aye ga Zarur said the man with sarcasm dripping in each word…. I decided at that time, I dint like this chotey guy at all….. The name did suit him, chotey that was the size of his heart I declared in my mind of course….. The girl gave me a beautiful smile and encouraged me to continue eating…. And within minuets the whole box was empty…

Sukriya….. Mujhe na bohot bhuk lagrahi thi…. I said giving her the box……

Kyu…? Aap kahan se hai? Kuch khaya nahi? Came the concerned voice of the lady…. As she came near me limping…..

Are… apki pair ko kya hua? I asked as I thought she might have gotten hurt….

Tumse mathlab… free ka khana mila na ab yahan se jao…. The man said rudely…. This bought tears down my eyes…. How can this man be so rude to an unknown girl I thought….

Arnav ji…. Esa kyu kehrahe ho….. The girl told the man but he dint seem to be bothered he was still glaring at me…..

Wo… mujhe maff karna….. Mujhe laga ki aapke pair me chote lagi tho…..

Tho… faltu me humdardi dhekana chahte ho??? He said again…. This really got me angry….

Aapke naam kisne Arnav rakha….? Aapke naam tho Chotey he sahi hai…. Chota dill, chotey bathey aur sabse badi bath tho Chota soch….. I said glaring at him… I was really angry…. Ek tho me parishan thi ki inhe chot lagi hai aur aap tho fizool me baras rahe ho??? Pehle he me anjan sahar me gum hu upar se bukhi aur aap mujhe Lad Governery dekha rahe hai…. I shouted at him but was shocked as I heard the ladies laughing…..

Kya hua….Mujhe bhi batao na…. I asked them when they started laughing again…. I then saw the man and got scared… he was glaring at me with red eyes… it was as though he would burn me just by seeing me….. I was really scared….. He stepped closer to me and was about to say something with me heard some one calling…

Bhabhi…. Aap teek ho???? Bhai tho dud the dud the parishan ho gaye hai…. I heard Vicky calling me… I was so happy to see my last dewar……

Vicky Bhai….. wo… me.. kho gayi…. I said looking down I was really embarrassed…. I felt like a 5 year old lost in a park…..

Its ok Bhabhi you are fine right…. He said smiling and then turned to the Chotey

Thank you so very much sir…. She is new here and got lost….. He smiled towards the ladies Chale bhabhi… bhai ko me phone kardetha hu saying he moved towards the exit…..

Bohot bohot Sukriya…. Ab me chalthi hu…. I said as I hugged the girl…..

Humara naam Khushi hai… said the girl with a smile ho sake tho phir milenge…..

Aur hum Anjali….. told the lady…. Aur aap???

Mera naam Geet hai… me Hoshiyarpur se hun… meri shadi….

Hume aapke Ram khata me koyi interest nahi hai…. Pls leave…. Hume deri horahi hai…. Said the Chotey man….

Teek hai… shubrathri…. I said to the ladies and turned towards the man…. Shubrathri Chotey ji… I said with a forced smile and ran from there not waiting for his response…. I saw Vicky Bhaiyya's car and also heard the ladies laugh… I smiled and thanked Babha ji for sending in those people as I sat in the car……

I reached home after Vicky's call… I saw her laughing and chatting…. I dint realize what I was doing… I just ran towards her and hugged her…. The peace was back… my heart felt whole…. How could this girl bring in such emotions in just 3 days???? I dint realize…. Did she realize the pain I went through when she was lost? I felt as though someone tore me…. Does she realize from the time she was lost only she occupied my thoughts… her smile, her tears, her innocent face, the way her hair flew in the wind, the way her cheek would become pink when she rubbed it in sleep…. Did she realize what would become of me if something would happen to her…. I was over gone with so much of emotions that I dint realize that I was hugging her in front of everyone and was pulling her even more close… I withdrew her from my self and cupped her face…. I needed to pacify myself I needed to feel her…. My Geet I whispered as I placed a tender kiss on her forehead promising myself never to leave her alone…… I saw her looking at me… those eyes…. It was really the gateway to her heart… I saw a sad glint which was more like remorse…. Then one tear slid down her eyes…..

Nahi Geet….. Mere galthi thi… I whispered as I kissed her eyes…… I saw her close hers as she tilted her head a bit back…. Her nose was red now… she looked so cute… her red nose… her hair was a mess and those lips…. So beautiful, so soft….. so red… so inviting… my thought were stopped when I heard sound all around myself… that is when I realized I was standing in the middle of the hall and hugging Geet and was about to kk…. What the hell…… was I about to kiss Geet…? OMG…. Just yesterday Nani had told me to stay away from her…. And what the hell was I doing…. I was never know to PDA before… never… then what the hell was I doing???? I felt like hitting myself… I gently left her and moved away from her…. I made a straight face and left the hall to move to my room avoiding the teasing glances and smiles from my brothers and the blush of Geet… how did I notice Geet blush now… I have never noticed anyone doing anything….. This girl would defo drive me crazy… I sprinted towards my room and decided to stay hidden in it for the rest of the day…….

What the hell just happened? Why does Maan ji do something like this and then run off… now all these people will tease me… I thought as I was plotting my escape…..

Bete… app bhi jayiye aur aram kariye…. Came my savior's voice,

Ji Nani ji… I said and was abt to go when I remembered something….

Nani ji… kya aapne khana kaya?????

Ji bete…

Dev ji aur Vicky Ji bhi?

Dev ji… Vicky Ji??? Teased Vicky and started laughing…..

Kyu? Kya hua????

Bhabhi… aap mujhe Dev aur isse Vicky bulayiye ga….. said Dev putting a hand around Vicky…

Par aap tho bade ho na?...

Tho accha hai…. Aap hum dono ko Bhai bulayiye ga…. Added Vicky…

Teek hai…. Tho ab bathaiye ga… khana khaya?

Han… ho gaya…. Said Dev…

Aurrr…. Wo????

Kon Bhabhi…. Teased Vicky bhai again……

Wo….. I repeated and blushed uncontrollably…. I don't know why I blush now a days… I bet I look like a tomato now….

Tum dono use thang karna chodo…. Jao… ordered Nani and then smiled towards me…. Bete Maan ne kuch nahi khaya…

Teek hai… me unhe niche le aongi…. Aap aram kariye… saying I left to our room…. I peeped inside and saw the room empty… I realized that Maan ji was inside the shower and took this opportunity to sneak out a kurta of his and took it to the other room. I was told earlier it was a guest room. I took a shower and wore the kurta and went inside the room to see what Maan was doing…. Till now, Maan was not out… I slowly got inside the quilt and hid myself from his view and closed my eyes, that was the time I heard the door open and Maan ji came out… Babaji…. Why was he standing like Salman Khan…..? I wondered….. and those water drops from his hair…. Wow…. He looks like a movie star…. So much of muscles too… he might spend so much time in Gym for this….. Great here it goes again...i'm blushing… I closed my eyes as I saw him turn to my direction… I was praying God he shdnt realize that I was awake….

This girl is sooo cute…. I know she is awake…. Her cheeks say it all… she looks adorable…. I changed and left to the kitchen…… when I came back I saw her standing near the window looking outside….

Geet I called her softly….. As I moved towards the couch settling the plate on the table…. Bath jao… I said patting the place near to me… she came and sat down….

Aap kyu laye…. Mujhe kaha hota…. She said worried…… I dint like this... the sudden sadness in her eyes pulled some thing in my heart…. I gently pushed her strands of hair behind her ear as I cupped her face in my palms…..

Geet… me karo ya tum karo ek hi hai….. I said as I caressed her soft cheek with my thumb… Chote chote batho par itne udasi teek nahi hai baccha…. I said again as I moved from her to take the plate in my hand….. I tore a piece of roti and dipped it into the gravy and held it near her mouth… Geet just sat staring at me…. I saw numerous emotions in her eyes…. I dint know what to do…. She opened her mouth to take the food when tears fell down her eyes…. I wiped them and kissed her forehead….. Shhh Geet kya … before I could continue… Geet hugged me and the force made me fall on my back…. Luckily I was on the couch and so dint get hurt… I was lying and Geet was on me crying…. I dint understand what to do…. Firstly I was weird aware of the area where her body torched me… God how pervy can I get…. Here a girl is crying and instead of pacifying her I'm thinking all x rated thoughts…. I placed one hand on her back and patted her…..

Shhh Geet…. Pls rona nahi… tell me… kya bhat hai……

Kyu??? She started…. Aap mere liye kyu yeh sab kar rahe ho????

Kya? Geet…. Kya kar raha hu….

Mujhe yeh sab dhika rahe ho??? Apna pan pyar….. yeh sab….. Mujhe insab se dar laghta hai….. She cried more

Me…. Geet…. I stammered….

Ma papa ji ke badh… Pritvi ne hi itna pyar dhika ya…. Aur wo nahi raha….. Ab aap dhika rahe ho…. Pls math kijheye…. Me abshaguni hun….. Yadi apko kuch ho gaya tho???? She cried

Geet kya bakwas kar rahi ho….. aur mujhe kuch nahi hoga…… I said in a stern voice…. I couldn't accept all this rubbish from her mouth…

Par yahi sach hai… Veerji ne…

Tumara Veerji pagal hai…… uske dimag me kichad bara hai isliye yeh sab kaha usne…. I replied… unable to accept the fact that someone would poison such an innocent mind….

Geet…. Yahan log alag hai…. Nani, Dev aur Vicky tume pyar karthe hai… tum yahan ke ho…. Aaj kal aur hamesha….. Samjhe… aaj ke bath me tumare bete hua kal ke bare me nahi sunna chahta…..

Hmmm came a voice as she snuggled into me…..

Geet…. Ab uto… khana nahi khana???? As soon as I said those words…. Geet got up with a jerk... she sat away from me all red in emarissment… I tried to hid the smile and continued feeding her…..Geet tore a piece of roti and fed me with gravy… for another 20 min we both fed each other silently and I took the empty plate and kept it outside….and came in to find Geet lying down on the bed… I smiled and lay down beside her…. It was nearly 20 min but sleep was no where to come… I found Geet turning and twisting restlessly…. I was really fed up… I pulled her closer to me and placed her head on my chest and held her by her waist…… I felt her freeze for a min and then her hand automatically wound it self around my neck as she slept off peacefully…… and so did I….. after many years…….

This was hopless part… I know… but this is required…. You know intro of the other couple… but I promise they wont be seen too much for a long time….

Sorry for the delay guys…..

Now pls comment and like….

part 8
awesome...
Maan my God he cares for her so much...
lovely...
that Arnav and clan scene was fantastic...
Geet has hidden the sherni inside her...
cont soon dear...

nice part...
You brought arhi characters too tat is so sweet...
Cont soon.