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hello everyone.. this is my first story so plzz don't be 2 harsh...😊


ARIYA- EK PREM KAHAANI
After solving a case and catching a terrorist, the ETF Team is sitting in the conference room of the ETF office. The chief of the team, ACP Sameer Rathode, is standing in the front facing all his team members. "Good job team! Aaj tum sab ne bahut achi tarah se iss case ko handle kiya hai. Commissioner Sir humse bahut impressed hain. I hope ke hum aage bhi isi tarah onki expectations pe khare uttarte rahenge," There are 4 other people in the room with him.

"Shree aur Riya, tum dono case ki file complete kar ke head office bhej do. Don't worry, tum iss file ko kal complete kar ke bhej dena. Chalo team, 6 baj gaye hain. Ab hum sab bhi chalte hain. Kal shayad ek naya case ETF ko diya jayega but abhi tak hume koi bhi details nahi mile hain." Every person except one starts getting ready to leave. "Raute, tum yahin rukoge kya?" Rathode asks. "Mujhe kuch kaam hai. Main thodi der tak yahin rukoonga." This man was ACP Arjun Suryakant Raute, the super cop and most sharp member of the team. Rathode, used to Arjun's cold behaviour says, "jaisi tumhari marzi!" The other members of the team say goodbye to both Arjun and Rathode and leave the conference room. Once outside, they start chatting right away.

"Yaar, pichle kuch dino se Arjun Sir kuch ajeeb behave nahi kar rahe?" Shree, the technical expert of the team asks his two colleagues and best friends, Chotu and Riya. "Shree, shayad tu bhool raha hai. Tu Arjun sir ke bare main bol raha hai. Vo hamesha hi sjeeb behave karte hain," Chotu replies with a grin. "Vo to theek hai yaar Chotu, par in dino onka ajeeb behaviour level thoda badh gaya hai. Vo bahut khoye khoye se rehte hain. Pehle to hume faltu baaton par daant te the par ab case ke ilava aur kisi cheej ke bare main kuch kehte hi nahi. Infact, onho ne to kuch dinon se Riya ko daanta bhi nahi. Kyun Riya?" Shree said mocking Riya. "Shut up Shree!" Riya said playfully punching him in the stomach. All three of them make their way out to the parking lot and say goodbye to each other. Riya gets into her car and Shree and Chotu get into Shree's car and exit the parking lot.

Meanwhile, Rathode and Arjun both are still in the conference room. "Tumhe ghar nahi jana Rathode?" Arjun asks without looking up from his file. Rathode starts speaking, "Mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai Raute. Ek bahut hi important message hai. Commissioner sir ki taraf se. oske bare main pata chal gya hai. Vo India main hi hai. Aur vo bhi Mumbai main." Immediately, Arjun's eyes snap up. He throws his file on the table and stands up, fuming with anger. "kahan hai vo? Batao Mujhe dammit! Kahan hai vo?" "Raute relax! Abhi tak oske exact location ka pata nahi chal paya hai. Humaare undercover agents dhoond rahe hain. Oski exact location ke pta chalne par hi hum kuch kar sakte hain. hume thoda aur intazaar karna hoga. Maine tumhe ye is liye bataya hai ke tumhe warn kar doon ke ab tumhe taiyaar rehna hai." "Iss din ke intazaar main hi to main jee rha hoon Rathode! Jo osne Roshni ke saath kiya, os ke baad main ne ek din aisa nahi guzaaara jisme maine ose maarne ke khwaab nahi dekhe. Jo meri Roshni ke saath hua ose na to main bhula sakta hoon aur nahi apni Roshni ko wapis laa sakta hoon. Magar main oska badlaa le sakta hoon aur loonga bhi. Sikandar, ab tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta. Koi nahi." Arjun spat out in anger.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start ...
I really liked it ...
Wow in the beginning itself Arjun is acting a bit different and now he is already to take revenge from sikander ...
I'm excited to read the next part ...
Plz pm me when you update ...
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Sorry for being so late...
loved it a lot:)
plzz pm me when you update
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nic story. exicted to read next part👏👏👏
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nice start.
so the case is on Sikandar means the revenge of Arjun..!!!!!
loved it,cont soon n can you pm me plzz when you update??
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nice start, so our Arjun is like this cause he knows that Sikander location is almost nearly found, and he's waiting impatiently for the final clues...
N well loved the trio Riya, Shree and Chotu's conversation.
Please continue😊
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Nice start ... continue soon...
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hmm quite interesting...update soon na...

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hey sorry
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great start
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arjun's revenge from sikander ...
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