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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Ariyans!!! firstly, thnxx so much 4 all ur comments... they mean a lot 2 me!!! and now here posting the 3rd chapter of Ariya- ek prem kahani!!!! Hope u all like it...!!! plzz comment and tell me how it is!! luv u all *muah*

Part- 3
The team immediately rushes down to their SUVs. Riya and Arjun sit in one SUV and Rathode, Shree and Chotu in the other SUV. Chotu drives in the front and Arjun follows them. Rathode calls the nearest police station for extra back-up and tells them to reach directly to the abandoned castle in Mud Island where Sikandar was. The ETF reach the abandoned castle and found the police already there. Rathode had a brief conversation with the police chief and told him to ask his men to surround the castle completely and shoot any enemy in sight. When the policemen were in their position, the ETF entered the castle and went underground where Sikandar was hiding. They split up in 2 teams- Arjun and Riya went into the inner room and Chotu, Rathode and Shree fought with the people in the outer room. There were lots of big boxes and crates which made it easier for the ETF to hide. Heavy firing began but because of being taken by surprise, Sikandar's men were overpowered easily. Because of the battle going on, Sikandar had also hidden behind the boxes and was firing too. He saw Arjun and tried to sneak up on him but before he could reach Arjun, Riya came up from behind him and pointed her gun on his head and said, "Kuch bhi karne ki koshish ki to apni jaan se haath dho baithoge. Apni gun neeche rakho!" by this time, all of Sikandar's men on Arjun and Riya's side were dead. Sikandar kept his gun down but then overpowered Riya and twisted her so she was in the front and he was at the back. Sikandar held the gun onto Riya's temple over her own hand. By now Arjun had also become aware and he turned around to see Riya holding the gun to Sikandar's head and being overpowered a few minutes later.

"Arjun," Sikandar began, "dekh aaj teri vajah se ek aur ladki ki jaan jayegi. Tu aisa kyun kar raha hai? Tere kitne dushman hain aur tu ek ke baad ek kisi na kisi ladki ki jaan ko kurbaan kar raha hai! Ha ha ha!" Arjun clenched his jaw in disgust and hatred and pointed his gun at Sikandar. He saw Riya's face reflecting disgust similar to his own. She made a feeble attempt to free herself but Sikandar's hold was so tight that he didn't even notice. "Sikandar, os se chod de. Teri dushmani os se nahi mujhse hai. Ose jaane de!" Arjun barely managed to spit it out. Arjun was going through a series of emotions- anger, hatred, pain, disgust and fear. He didn't understand why but just seeing Riya in that monster's arms made his heart sink and anger grow a thousand times. "meri dushmani har os insaan se hai jisse tu pyaar karta hai ya jo tujhse pyaar karte hain. Pehle to main sirf tujhe marta magar ab Pehle tu is ki maut dekh! Bechaari ladki. Is se kya pata tha k tujhe sirf jaan ne ki isko ye saza milegi. Apni gun neeche rakh ACP Arjun warna is ke paas jo do minute hain vo bhi nahi bachenge." "nahi sir!" Riya shouted, "shoot him sir. Please. Maar daliye isse. Kill him. Iss jaisi darinde (monster) k liye duniya main koi jagah nahi hai. Please sir shoot him now!" "chup kar ladki. Arjun bandook neeche!" Sikandar threatened pressing the gun further into Riya's temple. Arjun bent down to keep the gun when Riya screamed in anger, "no sir! ye aap kya kar rahe hain?" Arjun kept the gun down and straightened himself. Now Riya was in a fit of anger. Gathering all the strength she had, she kicked Sikandar and twisted herself so that she was twisting Sikandar's arm with her. Sikandar let go of the gun because of pain and Riya straightened herself quickly and shot Sikandar in the stomach. Seeing that Riya was free, Arjun reacted quickly and picked his gun up and ran to Riya's side. He shot all six bullets into Sikandar's body. One into his head and the rest five into his chest. He let all his anger and frustration out by screaming 'Roshni' loudly. Then he sank to his knees.

Riya sat down on her knees beside Arjun and felt a tug at her heart on seeing tears rolling from his eyes. When he looked up, she shook her head in a 'no' motion and wiped his tears. He saw tears rolling out of Riya's eyes too. He pulled Riya into his arms and suddenly felt peace. Rathode, Shree and Chotu came in from behind and saw Arjun and Riya hugging, Sikandar lying dead beside them and tears rolling from both of their eyes. Unknowingly, all of them broke in to a smile. Arjun and Riya broke apart and Arjun said, "thank you Riya. Agar aaj tum na hoti to shayad main apna ye mission poora na kar paata aur shayad main zinda bhi nahi hota." Hearing this, Riya kept her finger on Arjun's lips and said, "nahi sir! thank you to mujhe aapka karna chahiye. Agar aaj main ETF ke layak hoon to aapki vajah se. sir aapne hamesha mujhe support kiya hai aur aaj maine jo kiya vo sirf ye batane ke liye ke chaahe kuch bhi ho jaye main hamesha aapke saath rahoongi!" all the team members then exited the castle to go back to their headquarters. Now all of them knew that they were not mere colleagues. No, they were now a family and they were all content with their lives!



so how is it????
Edited by dashequalsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow ...
Great update ...
Finally sikander died ... And Arjun is in somewhat peace by avenging roshni's death ...
Awww Arjun is being thankful to riya ... That is so sweet ... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww that was gud episode
arjun is thanking riya that is so sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so finally Sikandar is died...yayy 😃 Arjun has given justice to Roshni & Riya become the power of her..realy touching 😊
love the emotions of them after Sikandar's death 😳
nice one..but are ending it here??? nooo please continue 😕 thanks for pm 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great updates!!!
Finally Sikandar Chapter is finished.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KiSha13

so finally Sikandar is died...yayy 😃 Arjun has given justice to Roshni & Riya become the power of her..realy touching 😊
love the emotions of them after Sikandar's death 😳
nice one..but are ending it here??? nooo please continue 😕 thanks for pm 😊


Arre no i am nt ending it here... will continue bt now i will take some time to upload as school has started again!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@dashequalsd3
oh thank you so much..you just take your time & update..not a problem 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey... thnxx 4 ur lovely comments guys and here is the next chapter... 4rom now on i am gonna be slow in updating cause school has started again!!! so plzz forgive me!!

ok now!! enough of my bak-bak... here u go!! enjoy!!

Part 4

The next morning, all the ETF members were sitting around the table in the conference room. Shree, Chotu and Riya were in a group on one side working on their reports; Arjun was on the opposite side reading a file and Rathode was sitting in the head chair of the table reading another case-file. Suddenly, Rathode's phone rings and he goes out to talk. He comes back within a minute and says, "Team we have a new case. Goa ke ek port pe kuch illegal hathiyaar paye gaye hain aur ek aadmi ka murder hua hai! Commissioner sir chahte hain ke ye case ETF handle kare. Ek aur baat, hum sab ko apne apne ghar jaa kar packing karni hogi. Hume shayad Goa main rukna pade. Shree, goa ke liye paanch tickets book karva do, as soon as possible. Ok team, 1 ghante main vapis yahin milte hain. Everyone leaves for their homes.

Arjun dropped Riya at her house and she opened her door and went inside. She kept her bag on the table and went to her bedroom to pack her stuff. 'Arjun Sir to mujhe 30 minutes baad pick karne vale hain. main kuch kha leti hoon. but first….' She went to the table where she had kept her bag and checked to see if she HAD kept her passport. Then she made herself a sandwich and sat down on the couch. After finishing her sandwich, she washed away her plate and then checked her watch. 'abhi bhi 10 minutes hain.' Then she went to her landline phone. She puts her phone on the loudspeaker to check her voicemails. 1st one she gets of is of her friend Riddhima asking her to call back as she had a lot to talk about. Then the next one is from Rathode sir saying that the flight is booked she should remember to bring her passport. The next one made her stop breathing. She heard the familiar voice of her ex-boyfriend, Aditya Gupta. She heard his hundredth apology and when the message stopped, she burst into tears. She sobbed uncontrollably for a few minutes until she heard the familiar sound of the SUV pulling up in her driveway. She quickly wiped her tears and picked up her suitcase and hurried out. She opened the boot of the SUV and put her suitcase next to Arjun's bag. She got in the front seat without a word, put on her seatbelt and stared out of the window, not daring to look at Arjun because of the fear of him finding out that she had been crying.

Meanwhile, her silence gave away everything. Arjun had seen her face when she had come out of the house and seeing her red eyes, he had come to know that she had been crying. His heart had burned a little when he had realised that. He had been about to ask her about it but stopped in between, when he saw that she wasn't even looking at him. He understood that she didn't want to talk about it but still wondered what the matter was. He remembered her phone call yesterday morning. He immediately knew that whatever it was, it was related to her ex-boyfriend. He felt angry that she had been hurt. He kept cursing that person on the inside. Suddenly, he heard Riya sigh and turned towards her. He saw a tear shining on her cheek and felt a tug at his heart. He didn't know why but he wanted to pull her over to him and hold her. But he kept his hands to himself.

They reached the ETF office and found the others already there. They made sure that all the details were finalised and rechecked if they had everything. Their flight was at 8 PM and it was just 5:30 yet. They had decided that they would leave for the airport at 6:30. They had an hour to kill. Shree and Chotu were joking as usual when they noticed that Riya looked lost and sad. "Kya hua Riya? Kis ke khayaloon main khoye hui ho?" suddenly, Riya burst into tears. "Riya! Kya hua? Kya baat hai Riya? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?" Shree said in an alarmed tone which made Arjun look-up. He got up and came closer to Riya, whose face was now in her hands and she was sobbing loudly. Arjun kept his hand on Riya's shoulder and bent down on his knees so that they were at the same eye-level. Shree and Chotu also came closer. "kya hua Riya? Tum car main bhi ro rahi thi. Kuch hua hai kya?" Riya didn't say anything but just threw her arms around Arjun. "Ye mere saath kyun hua? Maine kya galti ki thi? Pyaar karne ki itni badi saza kyun di osne mujhe? Kya main itni buri hoon ke koi mujhse pyaar nahi karta? Osne mujhe dhoka diya. Kyun kiya osne mere saath aisa," Riya cried into Arjun's chest. Seeing Riya in this state broke the heart of all three men in the room but most of all, it shattered Arjun. He couldn't see Riya in this state. But he couldn't do anything just then except hold Riya and let her cry her heart out. And that's what he did.

Just then Rathode entered. He was shocked to see the state of his team members. Riya, with her arms around Arjun, crying hysterically into his chest, and Arjun supporting her, patting her back, tears welling up in his eyes as well as the eyes of Chotu and Shree who were trying to console Riya by keeping one of their hands on each of Riya's shoulders. He saw Shree look at him and motioned him to come outside. Shree went out and told him what he knew.They came back inside and Rathode also kept his hands on Riya's back in her support. Even if Rathode didn't know the whole story, just the sight of Riya made his blood boil. That minute, unknown to each other, all the men of ETF swore to teach that cheater a lesson!


so how was it????
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<font size="4">yayy me first to comment 😛 thanks for pm 😊

Arghhh!!! This creep Aditya made our Riya cry 😡 ETF will not spare him I am sure 😡

Riya was on Arjun's arm crying & Arjun consolles her,wow 😳

carry on soon dear,waiting 😃
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Edited by KiSha13 - 13 years ago
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aditya made riya cry,
riya in arjuns arms,arjun console her

it was awsome update continue soon
thanks for pm

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