MG-MY LONG FORGETTEN LOVE(Updating)

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Posted: 13 years ago

HEY BUDDIES I AM BACK..NOW I AM SOON FINISHING WITH MY FIRST STORY..LIFE TO LIVE...SO I STARTED WITH ANOTHER WORK...NOW I WILL START..I DONT KNOW HOW APPEALING IT WOULD BE...SO FINGER CROSSED

~LONG FORGETTEN LOVE~

Prologue

oh what a hell is this...why dadi maa always trap me in this stupid work..she can easily ask anyone to come and take dada ji photo...but no..it had to be me only...i am going to a old village leaving my 100 core meeting..to get a photo..i hate this...i am maan singh khurana..each of thousand people bow in front of me...and i am emotional trapped by my dadi maa..i dont even remember the name of the place...its HP...i think..where my forefather had lived...where i spend my childhood day...as my dadi maa says...but how ironical i dont remember all this...why...oh god..havent i lost my memory..i laughed...i reached there..eww..this village is so stinky..yuck...i hate such place...i entered my haveli..the khuraana haveli...marvelous decor must say...akhir we are khuranas right..i order one servant to take out dada ji photo...he went away..what is this sound...which is attracting me...why i feel similar here...like i left something here...but i dont remember all this why...strangly i went upwards to a room..i opened the door...but why this room only..i entered the room..i feels so comforting here...i moved further...i found a big photo hanging..i moved closer to get a clear view...i saw my chilhood photo and a girl beside me trapped in sari...why does she feel so mine..uff i have gone mad...dadi maa asar...i moved out...but still my gaze was on her..who was she...soon servant came and gave me photo...i clicked that girl photo..but why...i never kept any girl photo...not even sam's...even though she is my girl friend...i moved out of haveli..but as i took my foot out...i heard some girly voice calling me...i turned back..but found nothing...i didnt want to leave..but i left...

but what was this feeling..i took out the girls photo and started staring it...she was so beautiful...who was she??

...

how was it??

tell me

i am waiting

TELL ME SHOULD IT CONTINUE???

PLZZZ

(thank you jass for wonderful banner...just loved it)

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INDEX

PART1-PG2

PART2-PG6

PART3-PG10

PART4-PG13

PART5-PG16

PART6-PG21

PART7-PG26

PART8-PG32

PART9-PG36
PART10-PG42
Part11-PG47

chap--> 12. page ---> 51

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2959147/mg-my-long-forgetten-love-updating

chap-->13 Pg--> 54

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/82325531

Chapter -14- Pg 58
Chapter 15- Pg 62

Edited by angelwords - 11 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-1

WHATS THAT...i noticed it now...she is wearing mangalsutra and sindoor..is she maaried...and why the hell she is standing beside me...who is she??..i quickly order my diver to take me back...i quickly ran to the house...the spider cob where every where...when finally i reached room..which was locked...but why locked...every room is open..then this room is lock..i asked the key...but none have..or they are not willing to give it...i break the lock..i wanted to know what the hell is going on??...who is this stranger??...what relation we share...when did it happen??...i entered the room...it was a girly room...i found the girls photo..i came to know..its her room...i moved near bed...her jewelary were kept there...i turned back and found a 'mala' around her photo...it made me agressive...but why..i broke the 'mala'...it means she has died..but why i was not able to control my anger...why the hell i was feeling restless...i went near her cupboard a name was written.. "geet"...her name was geet...why it sound so fimilar...i had suuden pain in my head..i know who can gave me my answer...i said geet..it gave me suuden strength...what is going on..i cant understand...

...so how was it??

i know its small..but please bear...

please tell me is it good??

sholud i continue??

Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago