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Posted: 13 years ago
#41


he is feeling her...

like she said I am with u whenever u think or call for me I will come...

now after seeing her photo he is remembering her and she is coming as his imagination...

but what is this...how it can happen...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
omg!i hope geet s not dead..
I dont want her dead...
Pls update my diary too..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Awesome update.
I want geet alive.
Pls don't make geet dead.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Lovely part...
Is geet really dead?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Oh God this part was really touchy !!
Awesome update!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

its a suprise update...

yipeee


Part-4

i came out of bathroom.. i cant understand..what game my mind was playing why me...was she really there??..no she cant be there..then why i felt her near...why it seems i heard her...was i imaging her??..but what about the answer she gave me??...it seems so true...why is she becoming so important part of me...after seeing her...after thinking about her..why i feel i am getting back my most precious parrt of my life..i hardly known her existence from past couple of hour...but why it seem i knewed her better than her also...why i am getting restless...if i had seen her or came to know about her..my life must be much more easy..now i think my heart is taking over my brain..i wanted to know about her..about her life..about our relation...about our life...about her existence...i dont know the reason..but just now i want my answer...i want to know what actually happened...what was she??...if we were close..than why the hell i dont remember about her or even heard about her before..

i know my life is becoming complicated and totally mess..i cant uderstand..i know my emotion are taking over me...but why this emotion suddenly came up..where were they before...i was told that i had an accident and i lost of my memory of childhood...i just remember my name...but whenever i ask about that accident there is different answer...even doctor had kept the secret of my life some where safely..but the point is..why the hell they are hiding from me..from last 6 years i didnt pay attention to this..because i thought i dont need to know it...but now time is changed..i want to know what happend with me...why the hell things are kept hidden...what is my childhood??...what part geet hold in my childhood??...first of all i will confront dadi maa...she thought i will believe in her...but she is bad lier...

what she said..i and geet where married...she became bad...our friendship broke..and still i carried her to collage...and than fantastic part is accident..where geet didnt live and i lost my memory..what a joke...they think my life is joke...i didnt know that MAAN SINGH KHURANA cannot be fooled...i am coming dadi maa...

i quickly dressed my self and moved to her room...i was going to knok when i heard something..i heard dadimaa speking.. "voh geet ke baare mein jaane chata tha"..i heard someone saying " tho apne kya kaha..bata diya apne"..i heard dadi maa saying " nahi meina nahi bataya...truth is still hidden from him"..i heard someone saying "acha hain maan ko nahi pata ki geet...nahi tho pichle baar yaad hain na"..i heard dadi maa "i know...last time tho maan ko control kar liya ga...but eis baar it will be impossible.."..i heard someone again saying.."ya right..phichle baar tho..."..i moved little bit.. "koi hain"..i heard dadi maa saying "mein dekhti huin"..i heard dadi maa's foot step..i moved away..i heard the closing of door...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
mystery deepens...is Geet hidden away from him because of his health?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Maan has lost memory.Even he knew nothing about his childhood.It means he knew jst present life after that incident .It means he knew jst that what he was told.If Daddi n his near ones were in front of him.Why people r hiding Geet from Maan.

Daddi says she is bad.It means she is not bad.Some thing is fishy.To keep Maan away from Geet's presence in his life ..Daddi n others r creating wrong image so that he can b kept away from Geet .

But Maan how he suddenly realized there is some thing fishy.Why his mind n heart r moving in same direction ie Geet.


What is Daddi upto with whom she was.I think Geet is there in front of Daddi but away from Maan.

Maan move ..rush what is this we also want to know

U havn't giv description of set up of KM till now or ll giv or not I don know.But I m feeling lik I m some where in KM...

Waiting for more.Lov u ..Maan's inner dilemma beautifully portrayed Een without Geet's presence I can feel her presence

Keep this pace keep this track keep this coming.

Lov

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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
thank u so much for the update...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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who is with Daadima in the room...

why they are hiding everything about Geet from him...

what is the mystery...

very interesting update...

eagerly waiting to know more...

thanx for pm...

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