MG-MY LONG FORGETTEN LOVE(Updating) - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
oo maan in geets haveli
hope now he will get some clue regarding his mysterious life
does maaneet know each other from childhood
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
i dont know how to book mark😒
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Posted: 12 years ago



very mysterious update...

who is that man...

and the most important question is where is Geet and what happened with her...

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Posted: 12 years ago
who was d old man??? y was he looking at her so angrily...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. after long time.. read update.. who is that man who held maan's collar?

thnx for pm..waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part
Maan in baby geet's room
Why was that man so angry??
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
itna chota sa update kyu diya ...plz update soon itni interesting story ko adhoora mat chodo isko jaldi complete karo ...waiting for next long update
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
nice...
whats this mystery?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. want my devil"s update too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter -13
He held my collar tightly , i don't know what is happening... Why he is so angry... I think he knows where is geet and wat had happened with her.. He wasn't able to stand properly , i forwarded my hand to help.. But he pushed my hand back.. "tujhe se help Lena se acha hoga marna".. He roughly dragged me downstairs... I said "plz listen to me.. Ek baar meri baat suniya" ... He said " Teri baat sunu... Ek kaltil (killer) Ki baar sunu... Sun le maan , tujhe narak Mein bhi jagah nahi Mila gi... Sharap hain mera".. I was totally shocked killer.. Aur Mein what was happening... Meina kya kiya... Le log mujhse etni nafrat kyun karte hain... And how geet is involve in all this... This is getting complicated...
he throw me out, i said "par meina kiya kya gain please bataiya mujhe".. He came towards me and slapped me... I was shocked... "Tu mujhe se puch raha hain Tune kiya kya hain.. Mujhe laga tujhe me thori sharam hogi ..i was wrong... I was totally... Tum Khurana sirf danav ho danav".. He started weeping violently... He said"uss bachi ne tumhare kya bigara Tha.. Jo tune uske saath ye havaniyat Ki... Chi chi... Sharam ati mujhe apne apko tum logo ke naukar kahate huin
.."... I again."please mujhe bataiya Mein kya kiya hain...mujhe kuch yaad nahi"...
he looked deep into my eye.. " tumne ek phool si komal larki Ki jaan le hain... Uska naam pata hain kya hain... Uska naam Geet Handa hain"... I was shocked.. He left...
...,,,...
okay buddies,here is one more part...
three important things to your notice..
1) i will be completing stories one by one.. First to finish os LFL...
2) you want this story to finish soon.. Aur need more parts.. Do tell me??
3)i want 10page comments and then ONE MORE UPDATES...
hope you like it...
thanks for comments and like..
waiting for your response...
do hit like button and do comment...met you after ten pages...
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