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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-2

I reached khurana mansion at delhi...but some question was arising in my mind...why the hell i came??...to ask about that stranger..but what matter to me about her??..and if i was so curious to ask about her...i would have come after attending my meeting..but i left that meeting??...who is geet??..what is she??...where is she??..i quickly ran to dadi maa's room i know she can only answer my question..i knocked her door she warmly asked me to come...i entered..i saw dadi maa reading some book..she ordered me to sit..next to her...she started brushing my hair through her hand..."maan apko aj apni dadi ki yaad kaise ayi"...i didnt want further time to be wasted..i quickly asked he straight.."dadi maa geet kaun hain??"...i noticed sudden restlessness and tension on her wrinkled face..i was getting more curious..i heard her replying"maan ap achank geet ke baare mein...kyun?"

i was getting restless to know..i quickly said " thats not my answer dadi maa"...she took a deep breath and moved towards the window..while staring out.. "geet apki wife thi maan...apki aur unki shadhi at the age of 4 huin thi..apki dada ji ki tabiyat thiek nah hona ke karan..ap aur geet bahut ache dost the...but jaise ap dono bare huin..GEET galat kaam karna lagi...apki aur geet ki dosti tutt gayi...fir ek din ap dono college ga rahe tha...tab apki gaari ke accident hogaya...aur geet nahi rahin.."...i was shocked..she was my wife..but why the hell i dint remember all this...dadi maa say she was bad..but this heart doesnt agree to it...my heart know that she is not dead..but dadi maa say she is dead..i left the room in a swift...i was having thousand of question in my mind...but the main question was..who does it matter to me...why the hell i am worried about her...???...ahe is nothing to me...if were married also..i dont accept this marriage...it wasnt legal...marriage..i laughed..i dont even know her...i quickly took my shirt out and thrown it angrly..i lie down on my bed and closed my eye..i dont know when i slept...

i heard..some small girl shouting.."maan tum mujhe nahi pakar pao ga..."..i heard my self speaking "geet i will..u know i am maan singh khurana"...i saw my self at the age of 5-6 running behind her...i was having alot of cream on my face..she was running behind the pillar and even some time hiding...i saw my self haedind towards the pillar where she was hidden..i stood there and felt something on my face..she gain put cream on my face..and ran off...i said "i will not leave u geet"...i heard her "catch me if u can maan"...i saw her runing towards the pit..i shouted "geet sambhal kar"...but she had already fallen and she was bleeding..i saw myself runing there...

i woke up from my sleep and shouted "geet"...i was not able to handle this head pain..i took a pain killer..how my life changed in matter of second...before..i was confident and happy..but after her..i am very restless...what is going on???...

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hope u like it😊

do comment and hit like button😲

waiting for ur replies...😃

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
awesome upadte
but dear it was small
plz next time give big update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Awesome dear.
Loved it.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
part 2
nice part...
wrong things?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

loving it dear...

so Geet is Maan's wifr but why did Daadima say she was bad...hmmm
waiitng eagerly for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
it was amazing dear👏
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
loved the update..
geet aur galat kaam...
i think some mu..
but y maan s not remembering anything..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28


what is Daadi saying...Geet galat kaam karne lagi...😲

this is not truth...Daadi is hiding something...

Maan has started seeing flashbacks of his moments with Geet in childhood...

hope he will search for truth and Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Ha I read it dear all ...sorry for late reply as I always try to b first...but jab main apni updates nahi kar pa rahi thi to padti kaise..I informed u earlier.
😭

Now coming to this u r awesome.What a concept dear.I m in love or u can say ..main iske saat chipak gayi hi...Kya sach main Geet ka bhoot hai kahi.One think I m not getting if Daddi said Geet was wrong n unki dosti tut gayai thi..why she said ek din aap collage ja rahe thay jab wo incidnet hua..dosti tutne k baad dono ek sath college really funny.Yeh Daddi jhoot bol rahi hai.😡 Geet character less mujhe to Daddi ka character dheela lagta hai

Some where I think Maa ko memory to nahi chali gayi...Jst three parts prologue 1 n 2 ..u has made me gulaam of this ff.One thing more Ur way of writing is really great short updates so to digest easily

U know every one hav own style n ur style to write in first person I that is really different ...Presently ur r continuing four works except Jaane Tu Kaha hai ur three r in first person n this is first one from Maan's point of view.Plz continue soon...


Lov

Jass with lots of hugs🤗 Sorry me too 😲
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome
yeh dadi😡 geet ko bura kyun bola
i know my geet is not bad

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