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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
superb update
i think geet isn't dead
maaneet were childhood friend
but what was saying about wrong things
do continue soon
thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Story is interesting!!
Loved the update!!
Pls add me!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
i know dadima is ling tht she is dead and she was bad.i luv this suspense.great wrk ishigandhi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
some thing fishy. sounding interesting. come back soon with another update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
interesting part...
why did Daadima say she was bad...
seems like she is hiding something...why...
eagerly waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
updating...
i know u all are egarly waiting me to answer your question..and reply to ur comment..
but the thing is i will not..because i want to create some suspense...
but its truth that i have read all the comment..
and jass loved ur comment buddy..thanks
and thanks to all the people who commented
hope you are liking it...

and a big big..🤗 to u all and
thanks for such lovely comment...👏


love isha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Part-3

i stand below the shower...trying to clam my restlessness...what was that some type of past which is attached with me...aur a halluction...who is this geet...??...why dadi maa words gave a sudden pain in my heart.??..why this heart doesnt believe dadi maa??...why why why??...can some one give my answer...i closed my eyes..water was runing through my body...but still no peace..

i felt some one near me...something heavy but soft was near my heart...and hand were at the back...while body was crashing against mine...suddenly i feel so relax..i understood someone was hugging me..but i have locked the door i know..then...i was going to open my eye..WHEN I FELT WORLD sweetest voice.. "nahi maan..ankhe mat kolo"...i dont know i just followed her demand..suddenly a word escape from my mouth "geet"..i heard the voice saying "hain maan..its me geet...ur geet"..i felt so relaxed but why.. i heard her saying further "maan apko kyun gumsum ho...apko pata hain na mein apko asa nahi dekh sakti..kya baat hain..mujhe nahi bataien ga??"..i said "geet..tum kaun ho..kya rishta hain humara..mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi hain"..i clamly said " mein geet guin maan..apki geet...humare rishta eis duinya ke sabse pyaara or pavitra rishta hain maan..."..i quickly asked another question which bothered me " tum kahan ho geet??...mujhe tumhe dekhna hain..??"...she answered "mein apke dil mein maan...ap mujhe jab yaad karien ga...ap mujhe apne pass paenga...maan"...i again asked "geet tumhe search karana chahata huin...par samjhe nahi araha kya karun...mujhe pata hain dadi maa jhut bol rahi hain"... she said "maan apne voh saying sunni hain serach karna se tho god mil jate hain...maan ap apne upar vishwass rakho..baki mein aur baba i tho apke saath hain maan"...i again said "geet mein tho tumhe janta tak nahi...mujhe tho ye bhi pata nahi ki tumhare aur mare kya past hain..kya rishta hain..but tum mujhe bahut apni lagti ho..aur mujhe samjhe ti bhi ho.."

she said "maan kisi ko samjhene ke liya ek dusra ko dekhna nahi hota...bas dil ke ehsaas milna chaiya...aur jahan tak apne lagne ki baat hain..mein tho apki huin maan...aur humsha se apki he thi...maan ap mujhse kahata tha ki mujhe samjhne ke liya apko mera saath time spend karna ki jarurat nahi hain...meri ankhe saare answer de dati hain.."...she said " maan ap mujhe jana hoga..par ye yaad rakhiya ga..mein apke saath huin"...i said painfully "mat jao geet..."..i heard her saying "mein kahan ja rahi huin maan...mein tho humesha apke pass huin..bas jab meri yaad ayain..tho apni ankhe close kariya ga..aur apne haath apne dil ke pass rakh kar,,,mujhe mehsoos kariya ga...mein apke pass huingi maan"..i felt suuden loss of heat and lost of weight...i opened my eye and found myself alone in the shower..i smiled "geet"...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ishanidhi08

updating...

i know u all are egarly waiting me to answer your question..and reply to ur comment..
but the thing is i will not..because i want to create some suspense...
but its truth that i have read all the comment..
and jass loved ur comment buddy..thanks
and thanks to all the people who commented
hope you are liking it...

and a big big.. to u all and
thanks for such lovely comment...👏


love isha


🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
😆My Massi is on the way to our home wll comment later acchi tarah se ek ek line judge kar ke becoz this story jitni sidhi dikhti hai utni he teedhi hai ...

Lo main aa gayi 😆



i stand below the shower...trying to clam my restlessness...what was that some type of past which is attached with me...aur a halluction...who is this geet...??...why dadi maa words gave a sudden pain in my heart.??..why this heart doesnt believe dadi maa??...why why why??...can some one give my answer...i closed my eyes..water was runing through my body...but still no peace..


This is very true when he saw Geet's image in front of him his subconscious is saying some thing to him which he is not able to understand to over come thins Maan is inverting new explanations for his restlessness


i felt some one near me...something heavy but soft was near my heart...and hand were at the back...while body was crashing against mine...suddenly i feel so relax..i understood someone was hugging me..but i have locked the door i know..then...i was going to open my eye..WHEN I FELT WORLD sweetest voice.. "nahi maan..ankhe mat kolo"...i dont know i just followed her demand..suddenly a word escape from my mouth "geet"..i heard the voice saying "hain maan..its me geet...ur geet"..i felt so relaxed but why.. i heard her saying further "maan apko kyun gumsum ho...apko pata hain na mein apko asa nahi dekh sakti..kya baat hain..mujhe nahi bataien ga??"..i said "geet..tum kaun ho..kya rishta hain humara..mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi hain"..i clamly said " mein geet guin maan..apki geet...humare rishta eis duinya ke sabse pyaara or pavitra rishta hain maan..."..i quickly asked another question which bothered me " tum kahan ho geet??...mujhe tumhe dekhna hain..??"...she answered"mein apke dil mein maan...ap mujhe jab yaad karien ga...ap mujhe apne pass paenga...maan"...i again asked "geet tumhe search karana chahata huin...par samjhe nahi araha kya karun...mujhe pata hain dadi maa jhut bol rahi hain"... she said "maan apne voh saying sunni hain serach karna se tho god mil jate hain...maan ap apne upar vishwass rakho..baki mein aur baba i tho apke saath hain maan"...i again said "geet mein tho tumhe janta tak nahi...mujhe tho ye bhi pata nahi ki tumhare aur mare kya past hain..kya rishta hain..but tum mujhe bahut apni lagti ho..aur mujhe samjhe ti bhi ho.."

she said "maan kisi ko samjhene ke liya ek dusra ko dekhna nahi hota...bas dil ke ehsaas milna chaiya...aur jahan tak apne lagne ki baat hain..mein tho apki huin maan...aur humsha se apki he thi...maan ap mujhse kahata tha ki mujhe samjhne ke liya apko mera saath time spend karna ki jarurat nahi hain...meri ankhe saare answer de dati hain.."...she said " maan ap mujhe jana hoga..par ye yaad rakhiya ga..mein apke saath huin"...i said painfully "mat jao geet..."..i heard her saying "mein kahan ja rahi huin maan...mein tho humesha apke pass huin..bas jab meri yaad ayain..tho apni ankhe close kariya ga..aur apne haath apne dil ke pass rakh kar,,,mujhe mehsoos kariya ga...mein apke pass huingi maan"..i felt suuden loss of heat and lost of weight...i opened my eye and found myself alone in the shower..i smiled "geet"...


what is this...mera dimaag hil gaya...lines underlines kar kar k I read this.U r in philosophic line...yaar yeh introspection tha Maan ka...uska subconcious mind tha ...kya hai...😭...Wo Gee se baat kar raha hai...I mean to say his mind is listening to Geet n as usual sixth sense ...How his mind is telling him what Geet thinks ...Wo Geet se kab kehta tha k mujhse kahata tha ki mujhe samjhne ke liya apko mera saath time spend karna ki jarurat nahi hain..


It means he knew some thing but some where he had forgotten n left things behind.Even he said Daddi is a liar..it means his inner self is not ready to accept different image of Geet.


Aab jaldi se yeh suspense aagay karo...Mujhe lagta hai teri is philosophy ki wajah se main apni philosophy bhul gayi hu


It is beautiful ...I hav understood what u said but I hav no proper words to explain...Loving it bit by bit part by part 😃 😆



Lov🤗

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
loved it...actually very emotional, very in depth...just loved the way you explained it. It had a sense of spirituality and mystque to it...

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