Maneet FF...NOT A FAIRY TALE pt39-pg86(Mar 31)

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Hi friends. Finally I also joined in the league of the amazing writers on this forum. Although I may warn you that since this is my first attempt at writing anything, I may not match up with the high standards that have been set up by the remarkable writers of this forum. So criticism and praises from you all are all welcomed.

NOT A FAIRY TALE
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He looked directly into her eyes and held her face tightly in his palms and said..."Trust me, I wont let anything happen to you"...she was shocked to her core, but somewhere in his eyes she could see that he will not let any harm come to her. So she nodded her head, closed her eyes tightly, wrapped her arms around his neck, prayed to her Babaji and drew in a deep breath and held it... He placed his palm on her hands, assuring her, closed his eyes and opened the door of the car. Water forcefully swept in the car and within fraction of seconds filled the whole car and dragged it further down in the pond, but by that time they were out of the car and he was swimming, swimming hard with all his strength while she was clinging tightly to his back trying to hold in her breath praying hard that they survive this.


I hope you like it. Will update the character sketch later.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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heey welcome dear...
congarts on ur new start...
its really very intersting one...
continue soon...
will be waiting 4r ur update
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ohh nice start ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends thank you so much for liking the Prologue. Here you go with the first update of the FF. Do comment to let me know how you like it. 😊

NOT A FAIRY TALE

PART 1

It was one of her best days. Geet Handa, an employee of Chopra Consultancies, had come to spend a day at the zoo with the kids of the orphanage. She was one of the volunteer at her office responsible for its CSR activities and often used to plan such trips at the weekends for these children. She absolutely loved children, and was always ready to spend time and add fun to the life of these less fortunate children. They spent an amazing day at the zoo and also played cricket in the nearby park. It was getting late in the evening, so she called for all the children and other volunteers to assemble. Since the bus was standing at the opposite side of the road, they had to make the children cross the road. They were standing at the edge of the road waiting for the traffic to lessen, so that they can cross. Little did they know that one of the kids, Madhav, had some other plans. One of his friends had challenged him that he was not old enough to cross the road alone, and today he was determined to teach that kid a lesson and show him that no one can challenge Madhav. Suddenly, he snatched his hand from Geet's and started rushing across the road. Geet was horrified. She ran after him, to grab him before some vehicle hit him. It was then she saw a speeding car coming towards Madhav, who was oblivious to this and was just running on the road in any direction, scared by seeing so many vehicles rushing around him. She reached him on time and pushed him off the road, but she herself didn't have enough time to get out of the vehicle's way. She crossed both of her hands in front of her face and waited for the impact. She heard a loud screeching of tires, then a bang, and felt a light thud at her knees. She was so scared, that even that slight jerk, made her fall down, but otherwise she was fine. She slowly opened her eyes to come to face a pair of large eyes, which were clearly burning red due to anger, boring her face. "Are you mad don't you have eyes, running on the road as if it's your house's compound. You girls... Tum ladkiyan bhi na, dimag to pehale se hi istemal nhi karti thi, ab aakho ko bhi kaam me lena band kar diya hai ''.." Maan fumed in anger. He clearly had not seen her pushing away Madhav. Geet was in such a shocked state that she couldn't comprehend anything and just kept staring at his face. "Aab kya tumhe dikhai ke saath saath sunai bhi nhi deeta hai, jo mujhe aise dekh rhi ho jaise main jo bol rha hun tumhe kuch samajh hi nhi aa rha..." She snapped and looked for Madhav. He was standing safely on the other side of the road, she shied in relief and suddenly joined her hands and looked towards sky and started expressing her gratitude towards her babaji "Thank you thank you so much babaji, aapne bacha liya..." He was looking at her with utter disbelief. Here he stopped his car on time, in the process also got hit by a car from behind, and iss ladki ko dkho, acting as if I am not even standing here..." Aiyie tum, main tumse baat car rah hun, tum kisi pagal khane me se chootke aayi ho kya..." She made a face, who is this crazy man, not even letting me thank my babaji properly...abhi dekhti hun isse...she opened her eyes and looked towards him and got up, and adjusted her dress. "Oye mister, what is your problem...ugh...itni deer se aise chilla kyun the ho...dheere bhi bol skte ho..muje sunai data hai..." "Ohhh...to madam ko aab sab sunai bhi data hai...o kaan kholke sunlo, tumhari vajah se meri gaadi me jitna bhi nuksan hua hau uska pura kharcha tum pay krne wali ho" "Kyun insurance nhi kara rakha hai kya tune...gaadi to itni badi hai...lagte bhi rayees ho, insurance pe paise bacha rhe ho ..." she winked. He was dumbfounded...what does this girl think of herself. "Hey listen...you...tum janti bhi ho tum kisse baat kar rhi ho" ...he snapped..." Maine to socha tha insaan se kar rhi hun...kyun tum kisi dusri species ko belong krte ho?" she asked making an innocent face ..."Youuu...", but by this time, the traffic had stopped and all her friends had reached her. Maan wanted to tell that girl who she was messing with, but he found no point in arguing with this, clearly stupid and brainless, girl. Also he did not want to create a public scene, already he was getting late for an important meeting. He gave her one more threatening look turned around and sat in his car and left from there. "As if iski in daravani aakho se mujhe koi farak padne wall hai...khadoos kari ka...Geet Handa se pange lene chala tha..." she overjoyed. She gathered the children and made her way towards the bus.

Next day...

"Geet puttar, jaldi se nashta to karle..." Rano called. She came down hurriedly, packing her stuff in her bag. "Nahi maa, I have a very important client coming in the office today and am already late for it. Suna hai this client is very punctual and does not take indiscipline. I'll grab something in the office. Aap to bas mujhe aashirwad do ki humme yeh project mil jaye kaise bhi. This will be my first assignment after my promotion"... "Beta...tu chinta mat kar. Babaji hain na, sab acha karenge, tu to meri itni mehanti bacchi hai, chita kyun karti hai "... She hugged her mother and ran to catch an auto to the office.

Next Part : Part 2

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!just found ds ff..
gud start dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i read the prolouge
and the first part
ff looks interesting
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loved it
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wow...I just loved the beginning...specially maaneet's dahamaakedar meeting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys,
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I could not help but continue writing the story. So I wrote one more update today.
Hope you enjoy it.

PART 2

At office...

"Welcome, welcome Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. We are so glad to have you here at our office. I hope you are enjoying your stay here at Amritsar. What would you like...tea or coffee?" asked Mr. Chopra.

"Work, I would like to get down straight to work. I don't believe in wasting time in formalities. Shall we start with the presentation." Maan said in his total MSK style. "Sssure...absolutely Mr Khurana. Lets proceed towards the meeting room..." said Mr Chopra, while giving a fleeting look towards Pari. She gave a helpless "NO" to him.

"Geet tu to aaj gayi. You better be here before the end of the presentation, otherwise you are dead, no one will be able to save your job today"...thought Pari and left the place to call her up again.

"Nice presentation Mr. Chopra. I see you have good and talented employees at your organization. Your business proposal was also very convincing. I hope you have completely understood our requirements" said Maan.

"Yes Mr. Khurana. So according to your requirements, a dedicated team will be working to enhance the software according to your requirements and also we will be stationing one of our employees at your office who will overlook all the installation and integration work according to the needs of the software. She will also be overlooking the training of your employees to make them comfortable with handling the software. The whole process will be of 6 months duration"

"Fine, and about the other requirement that I had discussed with you"...said Maan.

"Yeh, yeh ... you also need the assistance of one of our employees in your Techno Computers project, to better understand their technical requirements. In that field also, our onsite employee will give her full assistance to you. She is good at what she does and has a good knowledge of our business requirements also. I have talked to her and she has agreed upon assisting you. "

"Humm... Even I am looking forward to meet Ms. Geet Handa. Her business proposal was pretty impressive"...said MSK.

"Sure sure, why not, if you want you can meet her now...there she is...Geet meet Mr. Maan Singh Khurana...MD of Khurana Constructions...and Mr Khurana, meet Ms Geet Handa, senior associate at our firm one of our best resources for software integrations."

Maan turned in his chair to meet Geet, who was standing behind him with a slight smile on her face and her hand already extended to shake his hand. Both were shocked to see each other. He suddenly got up from his chair and stared at her. A weird silence swept in the room. They kept staring at each other(For the first time in the history of Maneet, not a Mahiii moment 😆). Geet was gulping with fear and Maan, his anger was rising with each passing second, remembering yesterday's incident. Sensing the tension, Mr Chopra intervened " Do you both know each other?" Maan came out of his thoughts and said "No, absolutely not", he glared at her and saw her extended hand, which seem to have frozen in the mid air. So he took her extended hand and shook it (extra forcefully!!) "So you are Miss GEET HANDA...glad to meet you, really very glad" he said with grinded teeth. He was squeezing her hand hard, when she suddenly withdrew her hand from his grip, took a step back, passed a nervous smile and started looking down.

"Are you sure Mr. Chopra that your employees are competent enough to handle this responsibility. I mean you know the high standards of competency and efficiency that Khurana Constructions maintains. Will your employees be able to keep their ears and eyes open."...said Maan sarcastically still looking at her, referring to the yesterday's incident. She snapped and looked at him with a tinge of anger visible on her face.

"Don't worry Mr Khurana. We are best at what we do. We will give you no chance to complain." ...retaliated Geet with full confidence in her voice.

"We'll see..." said Maan in a low voice, just for Geet to listen, and smirked at her. Mr. Chopra was not able to comprehend, exactly what was happening. Maan broke the eye contact with Geet and turned towards Mr. Chopra.

"So I guess we are all settled with the deal here. I guess you can start your work at our office from tomorrow. I want to get this work started as soon as possible." And he started to leave.

Just before he was going to step out of the office, "One more thing Mr. Chopra, I hate indisciplined, late comers and garrulous people in my office. I hope you make sure that your employees keep that in mind while working at my office." He threw a last glance towards her and left the office.

"Sadoo kahi ka..." Geet cursed him under her breath.

Next Part : Part 3

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: namita25

wow...I just loved the beginning...specially maaneet's dahamaakedar meeting...

n plz add me to your PM list...


thanks...just keep reading the updates...there are much more dhamakedar meetings in store for aur Maneet 😉...Halla Bol 😆

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