Maneet FF...NOT A FAIRY TALE pt39-pg86(Mar 31) - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Awesum part..
nw geet toh gayi kaam se..
She always lands in trouble that too in front of famous MSK..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
awesome update dear...

geet gayi tu kaam se...panga woh bhi MSK se...zombie...he he he...

i really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue soon plz...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
superb dear
continue soon lolz geet and her brain
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
part 11
ha ha ha Geet to gayi kaam se...
Maan is gonna kill her now...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awww I just loved the update...
it's amazing...
thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76


OMG Maan zombie...🤣

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Hey friends, thanks for the amazing comments.

PART 12

"Geet...tu to aab gayi...Babaji" thought Geet.

Maan took an angry towards her, but before he could do anything else, Geet widened her eyes and shouted...".Maan sir, aapke piche " Maan instantly turned around, and it was enough for Geet to run away from there. "Geeett..." Maan shouted and rushed towards where she had ran.

Geet ran to the meeting room and picked up the files lying there and preted to be engrossed in reading them.

"Geet..."

"Shuuush..." She quitened him and again went back to reading her file. "Sir main yaahan, aapna weekend chodke kaam karne aayi hun, aapke sath pakadam pakadai khelne nhi"

"Kya. Main pakadam pakadai..Geeet" Maan looked at her, his eyes throwing daggers at her.

But Geet raised her finger towards him to stop him from speaking any further and burried herself again in reading her file.

"Uff...yeh ladki bhi na...chod Maan...isse kuch kehane ka koi fayada nhi hai, isse acha do your work fast taki isse jaldi peecha chute" Maan thought and both of them got back to working.

It was 7 in the evening.

"Yeh Maan sir bhi na. Sunday ko bhi itna late tak kaam kar rhe hain. Mana ki inki life me inke kaam ke alava kuch bhi nhi hai, par dusuro ki life me to hai na. Mujhe bhi nhi jaane de rhe hain, aur abhi to mujhe orphanage bhi jana hai. Kya karu" Geet thought.

But luckily Maan wrapped up the work then.

Geet was standing outside the gates of KC, waiting for some auto to appear there, when Maan's car stopped infront of her.

"Kya hua Geet, aaj tumahari pyaari scottee nhi hai tumahare paas" Maan asked her mockingly.

"Nahi sir, woh actually repair ke liye worshop gayi hai, par aap chinta maat kariye, I can manage to go myself" she retorted back.

"Geet, zidd mat karo, let me drop you to your home" he asked her a little politely, he was a little worried that if she refused, then she may again land up in some trouble.

"Par sir mujhe ghar nhi jana hai, kahi aur.."

"Koi baat nhi Geet, I'll drop u wherever u hv to go"

Geet not finding any other alternative, agreed to go with him.

Maan stops the car infront of the orphanage. He was a little amased that Geet would be coming here and that too at this late hour. He asked her "Geet, tum iss waqt, yahan kyun aayi ho? I mean itna late ho gaya hai, and it will get more late by the time you go back home. You could have conme here some other time"

"Woh kya hai na sir, maine inn baccho ko promise kiya tha ki main aaj inse zaroor milne aaungi. Aur yeh mera pure din se wait kar rhe hain. Aur inhone mujhe ultimatum de diya tha ki, main agar inse milne nhi aayi to yeh dinner nhi karenge"

"Lagata hai tum inn baccho se bhut attatched ho" said Maan, a little impressed by her love and dedication towards these kids.

"Hmmm...vaise sir, aap bhi kyun nhi chalte mere sath. The children will love meeting you"

"Nahi Geet, mujhe yeh saab nhi aata. Tum jao"

"Please sir. The children love meeting new people and you are so famous and successful, they can always get inpired from you" and with some more amount of pursuation, she was able to take Maan inside.

The children rushed to greet her. They were all very happy to meet her and gathered happily around her, trying to hug her. She seemed so happy upon meeting them.

Suddenly Geet remembered that Maan wasd also there. She turned to find him staring at her. "Maan sir" she called him. He came out of his thoughts "hmm"

"Aayia na sir"

He came inside and she introduced him to all the kids. "Baccho, yeh Maan sir hain, yeh mere boss hain and bhot bade business man hain. Inse hi bolo"

All the children together "Hello Maan sir " and rushed to greet him in the same way as they had greeted Geet. Maan was a little shocked at first, as he had not expected this but then he got polite towards the kids and atarted playing with them.

Geet was surprised at seeing Maan mingling with the kids. She always thought him to be full of arrogance and attitude.

They spend a good time with the kids. Maan too interacted with the kids, thought not as freely as Geet did. Finally one of the kids suggested that they should play music and dance. They put on the music, a typical Punjabi number. All the kids started dancing. They forced Geet to also join them and she jumped in readily. She asked Maan to also join them, but he declined and just stood at a distance. He was watching them all, but somehow his eyes wandered towards Geet and he got mesmerized seeing her innocent beauty. She was smiling, dancing and making funny faces with the kids. He got so engrossed in watching her, that even he didn't realize when he came near the group, raised his one hand and started dancing, a little funnily, facing towards Geet. Everybody else stopped dancing, suddenly and started staring at his dancing form. He too stopped feeling cautious. Suddenly all the kids, including Geet, started laughing. He got surprised looking at their laughing figures. Then again his eyes caught Geet's laughing figure and he again got lost in her laughter. When Geet glanced towards him and saw him starting at her, she stopped laughing. She thought that he was angry that's why he was starting her. She started hushing the kids. Maan also turned to look towards the other side, realizing what he was doing. Once the laughter subsided he asked "Geet aab deer ho rhi hai, hum chalein?"

She nodded her hear in agreement and said her good bye to the kids and followed him towards the car.

In the car..

Maan was driving the car, looking straight at the road. He was angry at himself at what was he thinking at the orphanage, staring at Geet that way. He hated when things around him do not go according to his wishes, but look, here he was loosing control over himself only. What was this girl doing to him, he couldn't understand.

He heard a muffled laughing sound from Geet's side. By the time he turned to look at her, she was already laughing hysterically. Before, he again looses his senses, he turned to look at the road and snapped at Geet "yeh tum itna khe khe kyun kar rhi ho"

"Nhi main aapke dance ke bare me soch kar haas rhi thi. Mr Maan Singh Khurana, the big shot business tycoon, aaj in chote chote baccho se kaise ghula mila, aur unke sath dance bhi kiya. Mujhe to yakeen hi nhi ho rha hai"

"Geet..." He was gona say something, when his phone started ringing. He placed the receiver near his ear and said "Bolo"

For 2 minutes he was just listening in the receiver. "Ok I'll take care of it" and he disconnected the call. When they reached her home, Geet started getting out of the car, when he stopped her. "Geet ek minute ruko. Mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai" Maan said.

"Boleye sir"

"Geet u know Adi had gone to Delhi for some work, and we have our Techno Computers presentation day after. Since Adi won't be able to come at the right time, I want you to come with me for the presentation" he asked.

"Par sir, woh presentation to Shimla me hone wali thi na?"

"Yes"

"Sir to... main akale...kaise?"

"Aakale kahan, I am also coming with you and it is just a matter of two days. "

"Woohi to sir, manin aapke sath akale...kaise jao.."

"Geet main tumhe koi kidnap nhi karne wala hun, we are going there for work and that's final. Be ready tomorrow to leave by 8 o clock" and he drove off not giving a chance to Geet to speak any thing else.

Next Part : Part 13

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78


Simla ki thand mein kya hoga...

amazing update...

Maan dance in orphanage reminded me of his Bhangra in GHSP...so funny...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
awesome update dear...

its amazing to see maan playing with d children...

ok toh maan n geet going to shimla on two day trip...abb kya hoga inn dono ke...maan k mann mein geet k liye thodasa toh feeling ane laga...wish ki dono mein zaldise pyar ho jaye...he he he

i really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
awesome update dear
i really love their nok jhok
continue soon
waiting for the next update

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