Maneet FF...NOT A FAIRY TALE pt39-pg86(Mar 31) - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
hawww u left us on cliffhanger yar...abb kya hoga?
awesome update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update

hope tht nothing happened to Geet n she doesn't have to give the file to the kidnapper who r blackmailing them

hope Geet will be able to contact Maan


waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

but wat is geet's plan??

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Posted: 12 years ago
hope she takes Maan's help..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
hope maaan helps geet on time and trust her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi all you lovely peoples...😃
I hope naya saal aap sabke liyia bhut accha ja rha ho..
Here I am with a maha update, with lots of suspense, action and drama 😉.

I hope you all enjoy it. I will be sending out PM for all of the last three updates together.

This update is very filmy bollywood masala types, kya karu bachpan se jo itni bolywood masala films dekhi maine. Thodi to malfunctioning yogi hi dimag me 😆. I hope you guys like it, though do let me know your suggestions.

njoy 😊

NOT A FAIRY TALE
PART 35

Meanwhile, Maan was not aware of anything happening to Geet. The last evening's events had disturbed him to such an extent, that initially he had decided to immediately leave Amritsar, and go away at some place for camping, to take his mind off everything. But some urgent work detained him for one more day. Though, on not finding her in the office the next day, he got a little curious. But Adi told him that she had taken a leave. That's why he got a little puzzled when he saw her leaving from the office. She wasn't supposed to be there..was he imagining her there. But at that time he was to have a client conference call and so it was a little later that he called in Adi to confirm. He could not believe what Adi told him and was utterly shocked that Geet could do something like this. He was sure there was some reason behind all this. But before he could think further, he received a breach mail..

Kidnapper's place..

Geet didn't know where she had been taken since she had been blindfolded. Now she was getting nervous. She was confident about her plan and she also had full confidence in Maan, but right now she was all alone and was feeling like walking into the lion's den without actually knowing what kind of danger she was going to face there.

Once inside, her blindfold was opened, but there was a powerful bulb lighted over her head. So she could not properly see the faces of people around her.

"Too Miss Geet Handa. We met finally. By the way, tumahari himmat ki main daat dunga, jo tum khud yahan tak ayein. Vaise accha hi hai. Aab jab tum yahan ho, to koi hoshiyari nahi kar skti." He paused for a second, as if thinking of something "Khair, maine aapna vada pura kiya. Aab tumhari baari. Files!!"

Geet nervously reached inside her bag and gave them the files. Her prime motive right now was to identify the person in KC who was helping these kidnappers. The head of the kidnapper took the files and started going through them. But not for long. Soon a file came flying towards Geet "Yeh kya hai" thundered his voice. Geet feigning innocence, picked up the file and acted to check it, showing surprise. "Nahi. Nahi, yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Maine to files check karke hi li thi Adi sir se. Teeno Techno Computer ki hi thi. Main sach bol rhi hun, please mera yakeen kariye. Mujhe nahi pata yeh Ludhiyana project ki finance file kaise yahan aa gayi"

"Ladki, mujhse dhoka karne ka anjaam tu nahi janti. Isski bhut bhari keemat chukani padegi tujhe."

"Naahi, nahi please mera yakeen kariye. Agar mujhe aisa kuch karna hota to main yahaan kabhi nahi aati. Please mujhe ekk aur mauka de dejie. Ekk aur tarika hai uss file ko hasil karne ka. Mere paas abhi bhi admin rights hain. Mere computer se central database access karke in files ko download kiya ja sakta hai. Mujhe bas office ke LAN ko access karna hoga"

Her talks made sense to the kidnapper. Why would she have risked her life by giving the wrong file and still coming to him. Also she had not made any contact with anyone else at office and all her talks with Adi, he himself had monitored via phone, by the help of his aid in KC.

"Theek hai, par yeh tumahara aakhri mauka hai. Agar issme tumahari koi chalaki hui, to main tumahara who harshar karunga ki tum na jeene layak rahogi aur na hi marne. Aur hum tumhe vahan nahi bhejenge. Tum mere aadmi ko phone pe bataogi kya aur kaise karna hai. Aab jab woh file mere haath me hogi tab hi tum yahan se jaa paogi"

Geet was satisfied. Up till now everything was going as she had planned. She gave the instructions to that person on where to find the files and gave him her password. What they did not know was that just the previous day, Geet had handed over the admin rights to Adi and she no longer had access to any project related confidential files of KC. And if somebody tried to access those files from her login ID, a security breach email would be immediately sent to Maan, without the hacker getting aware about it. His screen will still show that the file is loading, but won't open. This will give enough time to Maan to identify the person and catch him. She was sure that once Maan catches that man, he'll trace these kidnappers here and get them arrested. She had taken a really big risk with her life here, but she had full faith in Maan. He won't let anything happen to her.

Khurana Constructions..

On receiving the mail, the whole picture started becoming clearer to Maan. He knew for sure now that Geet was in some serious trouble. He gave quick instructions to Adi, to immediately trace Geet's mobile and get her location. He also asked Adi to call her home once to if they were aware of her being kidnapped, without raising any suspicions though if they were not aware. Also he asked Adi to alert the security of the whole building to not let anyone leave the building.

Maan then rushed to Geet's cabin.

**

Karan was still waiting for the files to open. Though the time it was taking, he had started getting suspicious and was about to make the call when he found Maan standing with folded hands on the gate of the cabin, staring at him with wild angry eyes.

"Shit. Geet u b****!!!" swore Karan in a low voice.

"Maaan, aap yahan. Woh mujhse Geet ke computer se kuch files leni thi. Ppparty reated. In fact Geet ne hi mujhse bol diya tha lene ko, uska password bhi ussi ne diya hai" he knew that Maan knew his true motives, but he was trying to buy some time. He was edging towards the gate, but Maan immediately blocked his way and was about to pounce on him, when he pulled out a revolver from his pocket.

"Vahi ruk jao Maan, aage badhne ki koshish bhi mat karna. Tumhe kya laga tha itni aasani se pakad loge tum mujhse. Bechari bholi Geet. Par itni hoshiyari nahi dikhani chayia thi usse. Seedhe seedhe hamara kaam kar deti, to shayad bach jati. Paar tumahare iss Khurana Constructions ko bachane ke liyia, ussne aapni jaan ke baare me to socha hi nahi. Ch ch ch ch ch.. Bechari, tumahare pyaar me padke khudki hi bali chadva li. Vaise tumne bhi na Maan sahi ladki phasi. Bholi bhali, seedhi saadhi , pyaari Geet. Par afsoos tum uska kuch fayada nahi le paye. Khair, tum koi aur dhoondh lena, iss Geet se hum kaam chala lete hain.. ha ha ha.." Maan's blood boiled with rage at his last lines. Karan was standing near the table, inching towards the gate. Maan pushed the table, which hit Karan in his stomach. Maan grabbed this opportunity and attacked him, snatching away his pistol. Maan beat him a lot, dragging him out towards the exit of the office.

Maan was mad with anger at his comments on Geet. When Karan was well beaten, Maan picked him from his shoulders "Geet kahan hai. Kahan rakha hai tum logo ne Geet ko"

But Karan started laughing like maniacs "Geet ko to aab bhool hi jao Maan Singh Khurana. Aab to tumhe usski laash hi milegi"

"Kaaaraaan.." and Maan gave him a deadly blow in his face. He landed on a security guard who was standing there.

Karan acted swiftly and grabbed the security guard's rifle and pointed it on his head. "Aage mat badhna Maan varna main isse goli maar dunga. Mujhe jaane do."

Maan had to stop himself there. Karan had a hostage now and he moved out of the office. Pulled the guard with him in his car and drove away. Just outside KC's gate, he pushed the guard out of his car and raced away from there. At that point Maan could not chase him since right now his priority was to first save Geet. He sent his security after Karan and called Adi. "Adi, Geet ka kya status hai. Usski location mili kya?"

"Yyyeesss sir, humne Geet ke cell ke last signals trace kar liye hain. Main abhi aapko usski exact location deta hun"

"Theek hai Adi main abhi vahan punchta hun. Tum bhi jaldi police ko leke aa jao vahan" and Maan madly drove his car towards that place. His heart was beating frantically. "Geet main aa rha hun, main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga"

Kidnapper's place..

The kidnapper received a phone call. His whole body was shaking with anger on listening to the call. He smashed his phone and immediately rushed towards Geet and grabbed her neck. "Geet maine tujhe warn kiya tha na, ki koi hoshiyaari maat karna. Lagta hai tujse dhang se samajh nahi aaya tha. Theek hai to, aab bhugat aapni hoshiyaari ka natija. Brij Chaudhary se dhoka karne waala aaj tak zinda nahi bacha hai. Tera to main woh haal karunga ki maut bhi aane se katrayegi tujhe" and he gave Geet a tight slap.

Geet fell down hard. She was horrified, how had the kidnapper come to know all this. Did Maan not catch that person at the office, was there no one coming to save her. Had her savior failed her this time. The men had formed a circle around her and were slowly closing in. Geet was utterly terrified and did the only thing she could do.. "Maaannn"

**

Maan reached the address Adi had given him, but found the house deserted. He was on his edges. He was afraid to get too late. He had to find Geet. He would not let anything happen to her. She had risked her life for him, she had faith in him that he would save her. He cannot fail her. He was frantically searching the whole place, when suddenly he heard a girl's faint cry. It seemed it was coming from some other place. He came out of the house and started following the scream, which kept on getting louder. At some distance from the house, he saw a barn. The screaming was coming from there only. He rand towards it as fast as he could, but found it locked from inside. He rushed back to his car.

**

CRASHHH.. he broke inside the barn, by rushing his car through the door. For a second everybody inside froze. Maan immediately got out of the car. The sight in front of him was not pretty. There were 5 men and all had surrounded Geet. One of them was trying to force himself on Geet and her clothes were torn from many places. One of her sleeves had been ripped off so badly that almost her whole shoulder was exposed. Maan could no longer control his anger on seeing Geet's condition and started hitting all those with all his force. He was not going to spare anyone. They were no match for his furry. But then suddenly one of them punched Maan really hard in his face. This threw Maan off balance for a few seconds. The five of them to regrouped. They grabbed chains and surrounded Maan and started hitting him. With all of them attacking him together, Maan was not able to handle them and was getting beaten down. But then, somebody hit one of the goon's head with an iron rod, so hard, that he instantly became unconscious and fell down. For a second everyone stopped. Geet was standing there, tightly clasping the iron rod in her hand, with a very deadly expression on her face. The goons turned to attack her, but this was all the diversion Maan had needed to get back to his feet. Before they could even reach Geet, Maan was standing in front of her, as her shield. He hit all of them so hard that in just a few seconds all of them were on the floor, unconscious. Once done with them, Maan turned towards Geet, who was still tightly holding the rod and staring at the goon she had hit. It seemed as if she was afraid of him getting up and attacking her again. Maan was highly pained. He knew Geet was very scared. He held himself responsible for her this condition. He slowly moved towards her and lightly called "Geet". Hearing his voice, Geet looked up at him, still not lowering her weapon. There was fear on her face. There were tears in his eyes. "Geet, tum aab mehafoos ho. Koi tumhe kuch nahi karega. Main hun yahaan tumahare paas." and he lightly touched her fingers, took the rod from her and threw it away. Geet was flooded with emotions. She immediately hugged Maan tightly and cried her heart out, venting out all her fears.

Next Part : PART 36
Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a thrilling and ardenaline filled episode...absolutely brilliant
Geet's intelligence and more than that her faith
Maan's trust on her and finding her out
Their feelings for each other and the fight
Karan got away...now no marriage to him at least...but what next? Will her family believe her? Will they also place the same trust on her?
awesome...absolutely brilliant
pls, it is a request to update more regularly. I love this FF but miss regular updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...

hr came...he saved her...her savior was there for her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Splendid update.
Geet's plan, her trust on Maan, her fear everything was superb.
Maan part was typical filmy one. But was too apt & nice.
Thank u for the pm.
Update regularly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...kya dimag lagayi eet ne aur kamiyaab bhi ho gayi...bravo geet bravo...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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