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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
awesome update...

abb geet phans gayi...maan singh khurana k saath panga...he he he...

i really loved it...

thank u sooo much fr a lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
lovely update..
lagtha hain geet ko tang karne ke liye maan kisi hadd par jaa saktha hain..
But ds was too much maan sir..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update.. now it'll be fun in office..😊 cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends. Love you all for your lovely comments. They are always so encouraging. Thank you

I see many of you are worried for our pyaari Geet. But I just wana tell you all, Maan is always both her devil and her angel. I hope you all enjoy this next update.

NOT A FAIRY TALE

PART 5

Geet back in her cabin.

"Zalim Singh Khurana..yeh samajhte kya hai apne aapko..jo yeh bolenge, sub woh hi karenge..par mera bhi naam Geet Handa hai..main bhi itni aasani se haar nhi maan ne wali.. aur woh yeh kya keh rhe the.. 4 months me project complete karna hai.. kyun bhai.. deal ke time pe to 6 mnths ki baat hui thi na"..mummbled Geet.

"Woh isliye kyunki Maan sir yahan bas 4 mnths hi rukne wale hain"'..Adi was standing at her gate.

"Sooo''sorry Geet, who main yeh trainees ki list dene aaya tha, and could not help overhearing your self talk. Woh kya hai na, me, Maan sir and a few other staff members are here only for setting up this office and make it operational. That will take not more than 4 mnths. Then we will be returning to Delhi at the main office. That's why Maan sir wants you to finish the work early so that he can ensure everything is working fine, before returning to Delhi."'said Adi.

"Ohhh..ok..thanks for telling me that Adi sir" "aacha hua bata diya...varna abhi do char galiyan aur nikal deti us dusht danav ke liye"..mumbled Geet.

"ah ah ah ah ah"..Adi laughed...and left from there, when he heard Maan sir calling for him.

"Chal Geet puttar, lag ja kaam pe''" and she started working, setting up the machines. She go so engrossed in the work that she even forgot to take her lunch. Once or twice even Maan noticed her working, through the glass partition they had between their cabins. At five she realized about the time and left from her cabin to ask Adi about where to organize the training sessions.

It was already nine by the time she got free. "Oh Babaji'..kitna late ho gaya, time ka to pata hi nhi chala. Mujhe aab jaldi se nikalna chayia, vrna koi rikshaw ya auto bhi nhi milega"..she hurried from the office.

"Oh no..yahan to koi auto nhi dikh rha hai..aur is jagah to is time auto milna bhi mushkil. Yeh khadoos bhi na..sher ki sabse viran jagah pe hi office setup krna tha isse.. aur kahi acchi jagah nhi bana skta tha kya. Aab main kya karu, kaise jao ghar'''''' ek kaam krti hun, yahan se thoda door chalna shru krti hun, shayad kuch mil jaye" and she started walking on the deserted road.

"Geeettt''tu na dar mat, road sunsan hai to kya hua, Babaji tujhe kuch nhi hone denge.. hai na" and she kept on walking further. Suddenly she saw group of 4 bikers heading her way. "Geet tu dekhna bhi mat unki taraf, just keep on moving"

But it was inevitable to avoid those goons, especially in her situation. They started circling around her. She stopped and looked at them horrified. They were passing lucid comments at her. She reached for the pepper spray in her bag, but before she could grab it, one of the goons snatched her bag threw it away. She was scared, but she had no other choice. She closed her eyes, prayed to Babaji and braced her self, recalling the little action stunts that she could remember from the numerous action movies that she had watched. She could not give up without a fight.

Suddenly she heard a screeching of tyres. She snapped open her eyes. The first thing that caught her attention was the car, it was the same car she had seen two days ago (although it was back to its original shape now..MSK ki car hai 😆)

The motorcyclists stopped circling her and got off their vehicles. One of them caught her by her elbow. She screamed "Chod mujhe...lafange kahike"'Her scream made Maan to turn his head. He got off from his Wrangler and moved towards them. "Haath chod uska"... Geet was struggling to get out of that goon's grip. One of the goons took out a knife from his pocket and pointed towards Maan. He paused for a second, accessing his position. "Kyun chodein... teri amma lagti hai kya"'..and all of them laughed loudly.

Basss, that was it. Geet's temper peaked. "Kya kaha issne, iss gaddhe ne amma kaha mujhe'.isski yeh himmat'" she gathered all her strength and kicked the goon, who was holding her, hard at his weakest point. He dropped her hand and moved back whimpering. It was enough distraction. Maan found his cue and lunged towards them and started hitting them. One of them slashed his palm with the knife.

"Maan.." Geet shouted.

He thought Geet was again in trouble and looked towards the sound but saw her standing near the car safely, looking shocked at his wound. He was somewhat relieved.

"Geet tum vahi rehana". He turned and started hitting those goons again. Soon they ran away, since they were no match for 'saade' Maan's 'power packed' punches (Thai Chi baba ki jai 😆).

Geet came running towards him. "Sir.. sir aap theek to hain na, aapko kuch hua to nhi" she grabbed his hand that was hurt and saw blood oozing out of the cut. She gasped and staggered a little, coz she was not very comfortable at the sights of blood. But she hurriedly grabbed her bag, which was lying discarded on the road, took out her scarf and tied it on his wound. Maan was seeing her with surprise. "Aapko kya zaroorat thi un gundo se bhidne ki. Aabhi aapko kuch ho jata to.. aap bilkul bhi nhi sochte ho kuch bhi krne se phale.." she kept on blabbering.

But her words angered Maan'.he snatched his hand from her grasp and turned, facing his back towards her "Main nhi sochta. Sochti to tum nhi ho kuch bhi krne se phale. Itni raat gaye, iss sunsaan road tumhe aakle jane ki kya zaroorat thi. Agar office me late ho gayi ho to ghar se kisi ko bula lo, ya office cab se ghar jao. Tumhe thoda bhi idea hai ki agar aaj main time pe nhi aata to kya ho skta tha "he fumed.

Surprised at not getting any response from her, he turned to find her swaying with her hand on her head, she was fainting. Having not eaten anything since the morning, all the work, mental pressure due to this incident, then the sight of blood and over that Maan also shouting. All this was too much for her. He caught her at the right time...

"Geeettt...". He picked her up and carried her to the jeep and sprinkled some water at her face. "Get up Geet, get up, utho". He was a little anxious. He had never been in such a situation with a girl. He was patting her face repeatedly, but gently.

She started regaining her cautious. She sat straight with a jerk. "Tum theek to ho na?"

"Haan sir. woh actually maine sub he se much khaya nhi tha, aauuurr, woh gunde, khoon...m sorry" and she looked down. "Its ok Geet, tum aaram se baitho, main tumhe tumahare ghar drop krdeta hun.." He didn't say a word more because he was worried she might faint again. He went and sat on the driver's seat, asked her for her address and dropped her at her place.



Hey buddies...will not be able to update for a few days now. Going out of town. Will be updating as soon as I return. Till then enjoy this update.

Love

Akku

Next Part : Part 6

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Loved the update..
Nw maan transformed from devil to angel..
I luvd the way she kicked the man for calling her amma..!
She s too hilarious..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
amazing update
will be waiting for ur next update
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
amazing update...
ufff Maan ...ye kab sudhrega...
poor geet...kitna bada lecture suna diya use...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome update...
koi kisise kam nehi hai...dono ko ego...
loved it...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Haaye..just read all the parts.Simply superb!
Good to see that Geet is a confident and brave girl 😃
Haaye..My Maan...he keeps switching his avtaars...kabhi angel mode to kabhi devil mode!! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
HI friends. M back with the next update. Thank you so much for your likes and lovely comments.
Maan can never change. He is a 'dusht danav' but a one with a golden heart. So guys here is the next update. njoy 😊

NOT A FAIRY TALE

PART 6

Geet's house...

The whole way neither spoke a single word. Geet was way too lost in what had happened earlier and was still in a little shocked state. He stopped the car in front of her house. He was still looking away from her when he started saying

"Geet woh.. tum theek...", but his voice got drowned in the sound of the click of the car lock and opening of the door. She got out of the car without uttering a single word and started to move towards her house. This act angered him and he instantly started his car and sped away.

Noise of speeding car, broke Geet's reverie... "Aare mujhe Maan sir to thank to kar dena chayia tha..." but by then he had already left.

"oh ho...yeh to chale gaye...chaado...kal office me kar dungi..." and she went inside her house.

"Aa gayi tu Geet beta. Kitni chinta ho rhi thi mujhe teri. Tu aapna phone bhi nhi utha rhi thi. Inni der kitthe ho gayi tujhe. Aur teri haalat aisi kaisi ho ri hai'..tu theek to hai na"...asked Rano, Geet's mom.

Geet did not want to trouble her mother and make her worry, so she decided against telling her about the evening's incident "Kuch nhi maa woh kya hai na aaj naye office me pehala din tha na, issliye late ho gayi. Aur raste me thoda pair phisal gaya tha na, to main gir gayi thi, issliye kapde aise ho gaye"

"Oh ho beta.. aapna dhan rakha kar. Chal chetti chetti haath muh dho le, phir hum dono khana khayenge"

"Maa itna late ho gaya hai, aap to khana kha leti na" said Geet.

"Achan, meri bacchi bhukhi ho aur main khana kha lun aisa ho skta hai kya. Aab jada baat mat kar aur jaldi se aaja khana khane"

"Ok mom, main jaldi se aati hun"

After dinner, Geet was alone in her room and was feeling a little restless, so she called up Pari.

"Hello..."

"Hi princess...aur kaisa rha tere us dreeeaaamy prince ke sath pehala din..." she teased her.

"Din kaisa rha who sab to main chod tu abhi. Actually na phale main tujhe kuch aur batana chati hun. Vooo..kya hua na, aaj jab main office se vapas aa rhi thi, tab..." and she recounted the whole incident to Pari.

"Thank God Geet tu bilkul theek hai. Varna pata nhi aaj kya ho jata..." worried Pari.

"Haan Pari, agar Maan sir time pe nhi aate to pata nhi aaj kya ho jata. Aur pata hai uss din bhi, on the road, agar Maan sir time pe break nhi lagate, to mera to Babaji ke paas punchne ka pura bandobast ho chuka tha"

"Dekha Geet main nhi keh rhi thi, yeh darling Maan kisi prince charming se kaam nhi hai. Dekh kaise kadam kadam par hero ki tarah tujhe aake bacha leti hai..." said Pari.

"Chup kar Pari, tu bhi na, tujhe to bas mauka chayia. You know na that I don't believe in all these stupid fairy tale and love story stuff. Prince charming can only exist in books and movies, not in real life"...said Geet getting a little irritated.

"Achan to jo tere sath hua who kya hai??"

"Woh, wo to bas coincidence tha, I mean, unki jagah agar koi aur bhi hota to yeh hi karta. Vaise shukar hai Babaji ka ki woh itne takatwar aur fit hain. Varna itne gundon ko dkh kar mujhe bhi ek baar doubt ho rha tha ki kahi mujhe bachane ke chakkar me unhe hi kuch na ho jaye"

"Ooo...someone is getting too caring...ummm"'teased Pari.

"Oh ho Pari. Stop it yaar. Tujhe to sab pata hai na, phir bhi aise chidati rehati hai. College me jo hua tha, usske baad, I can't even think about all these. I will NOT make that same mistake again. I won't ever let something like that to happen to me again. I'll never let my heart played with again"...retorted Geet with tears dangerously brimming on the corners of her eyes, tears of anger.

"Chill Geet. Main mazak kar rhi thi. Tub hi itni jaldi serious na hua kar. Aur haan, jo college me hua tha, that is a distant past now. Kabhi to you will have to move on from that incident. Don't close you heart's doors forever, that too just because of one bad encounter. Open your heart, and let love flow in it, life your life yaar. You can't chain your emotions this way forever" said Pari.

"Paaarrriii..."

"Geeettt..."

Both were silent for a minute, but then suddenly they started laughing.

"Pata nhi hum hamesh ghum phirke issi discussion pe kyun aa jate hain jabki dono ko pata hai na tu meri sunne wali hai aur na main teri. Chal phir se peace krlete hain."...said Geet

"Done deal..major sahiba..chal chal..topic change krte hain.. achan vaise ek baat bata, tu kal Maan ko thank you kaise bolne wali hai ?" asked Pari.

"Kaise bolne wali hai matlab, jaise thank you bolte hain vaise bolungi, aapne muh se" said Geet.

"Oh ho kaamli ladki. Unhone teri itni help ki aur tu bas aise ho sorry boldegi, achan sun ek idea hai. Tu na unke liye ek thank you card banake leja, you make such beautiful ones, and he'll like it "said Pari.

"Pagal hai kya, office me log kya sochenge"..said Geet.

"aare to tujhe office me dikhane ki kya zaroorat hai, tujhe to bas jake unhe dena hai'.tu pagal hai.. just do as I say, kuch nhi hoga" said Pari.

"Par Pari..." Geet tried to protest.

"No par var yaar, kabhi to koi baat man liya kar meri" said Pari.

Geet knew it was of no use arguing with her now, so she gave in.

"theek hai Pari mata...jaisi aapki iccha...chal ab main phone rakhti hun, kal phir office time pe punchna hai"..said Geet, afraid that Pari may again give her some more weird suggestions.

"Ek minute, ek minute Geet...ek cheez aur. As much as I would want, ki tu apne us dreamy boss se hi roz lift leke ghar aaye, but I know you well enough to have such high hopes. So, I have a solution to your, late office, no auto situation"...said Pari.

"Achan, bata bata"...said Geet eagerly.

"DHANNO 😃" said Pari

"dhanno????"...asked a confused Geet.

"Aare yaar, saaddi dhannooo" stressed Pari.

"ooo..oh ho...Dhanno...aare haan, main to uske bare me bhul hi gayi thi. Thanku so much yaar yaad dilane ke liye...ek minute, par papaji??"..said Geet

"Aare, tu to aise baat kar rhi hai jaise aaj tak teri jidd ke aage uncle aunty ki kabhi chali hai..I know tu uncle ko aaram se pata legi"...said Pari.

"he he...woh to hai...thanks yaar...bye..gud nite"...said Geet and lied to sleep, but she couldn't coz she was lost thinking about that past incident which had changed her whole life.

Maan at the guest house..

He was fuming with anger as he entered his room and threw his tie "Yeh ladki...yeh ladki aapne aapko samajhti kya hai. Haar baar main iski help karta hun, aur yeh hai ki, thank you ya sorry to door, ya to mujhpe chillayegi ya taunt mar degi. Aur aaj, aaj to haad hi ho gai. Ek taraf main hun, jo uski chinta kar rha tha, aur ek woh hai, gadi me se aise nikal ke chali gayi jaise ki main koi uska driver hun...isski to..."

"Ek minute Maan, yeh tu kya soch rha hai. Tujhe kabse kisi ke sorry ya thank you bolne na bolne se farak padne lag gaya. Nahi Maan, you can't let anybody effect you. Maan Singh Khurana aapni koi bhi galti kabhi nhi doharata. Ek baar pehale bhi ek ladki ki vajah se...nhi...I am not a fool to repeat the same mistake again. I hate girls, I hate it when they act all so weak and try to gain your sympathy, make you feel for them. And then at the first chance, they take your advantage and leave you broken. I'll never let any girl to do that to me. Never!!"

He looked at Geet's scarf, which was still tied on his hand, and ripped it from his hand. He threw it in the fireplace and let it burn.

Both of them were lost in the bitter memories of their past, unaware of the fact that however much they may protest, when love knocks the doors of the hearts, even the hardest and the most resolute ones can't stop it from letting it enter and jumbling up their lives.

Next Part : Part 7

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago

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